Hello. This is a new story. ( The charaters are as old as they are in Shippuuden)
Demon Child
Chapter one: Help Me!
One peaceful day in Konoha, a dog went wandering threw the streets. This dog was very small compared to the other dogs and was attacked and harrassed by them often. The dog was very dirty, so dirty that it's pelt was brown. It's hair was rugged and torn out of a few places. Now we join the dog as it journies to the home of a current konochi we like to call Hinata.
scratch scratch Hinata heard something scratching the outside of her home.
small bark Hinata, drivin by curiousity, walked toward the front of the Hyuga compound. She now knew that what made the noise was a dog.
howl Hinata now saw a small, dirty and injured dog. The dog whimpered and wagged it's tail.
"You poor pup come here," said Hinata gently. The pup came to her and jump into her arms.
"That's right I'm going get you to Kiba right away," The puppy had cuddled into her arms and was slowly falling asleep. Hinata immeditaly left in search for Kiba and his dog Akumaru.
On her way to get Kiba, she felt the puppy shake in her arms. She had figured that the puppy was sick as well as injured. She had finnaly found Kiba in the area that they used to train in. He was practicing with Akumaru alone.
"Kiba-kun!" said Hinata.
"Huh, Hinata? What are you doing here? I thought that you were going to pratice at your home."
"I was, that is until I found this." Hinata showed Kiba the puppy in her arms. Kiba grabbed the puppy and looked at it.
"Hm, by the looks of this, one, it's a she and two, it really needs to see my sister, now." Kiba put the puppy down on Akumaru's back. Akumaru tried to sniff the pup but it was so dirty he didn't want to sniff it. Instead, Akumaru barked.
"It's okay Akumaru. We're taking this puppy to our home."
"Kiba-kun, is the puppy going to be okay?" asked Hinata.
"As long as we get there quickly she's going to be okay."
"Okay." They went to Kiba's home quickly. When they got there the pup had started to whine and whimper. Hinata tried to comfort the pup.
"Hey sister! We need some help with this pup now!" yelled Kiba.
"Well hold your horses for a minute and let me get out there first!" Kiba's sister yelled back. She had gotten there a few moments afterward.
"Hm, let me see the pup first then I'll see what I can do with it."
"Thank you," Hinata said.
"Come back in two hours okay? Kiba you stay with me."
"Fine." Said kiba.
"Okay, I will." Hinata left for home.
How do you think I did? I really need the reveiws now! Please.
