A/N: Hey guys! This is my first official fan fiction! It's not like my previous ones! Those were practice and stuff, I've talked to a couple of fan fic. Writers and some weren't so nice. But I want to personally thank…
Anabelle9: Thanks for the help and tips! And thanks for being great! And I LOVE your Spirited Away fan fiction, I can totally tell that you are totally into it! And it's rare to find that!
And she isn't the only fan fic writer that I like the writing! This is a great website, and im glad to be a member! Please review it or p/m me! Tell me your opinion, and give me sudjections, and don't be afraid to critique it, but please don't be mean about it!
"My name is Maedaema. I'm fifteen this year. Right now I am focused on testing into Tokyo University and im working hard at studying! I've herd that there's a fantastic girls dorm in this area... you only have to live there and no matter what kind of an idiot you are sure... to test into Tokyo University."
She Has Long black hair, dark brown eyes and has freckles on her face. Resting on her pixie-shaped nose is her oval glasses. on both sides of her hair is little ribbons. In one hand she has an awkwardly large bag full of her belongings and lying awkwardly on her shoulder is a bag full of school stuff, resting on that bag was her little pet chameleon named Hoshi. She stopped.
"After my long search... I finally discovered that mysteriously wondrous girls dorm!"
In the spring several years after Keitaro came to Hinata House... a girl also made her way through the falling Sakura Blossoms! She stands in front of Hinata House for a moment
"This-this is the place..." she said
"Mu-Mu-AHH!" replied Hoshi.
She walks in the doorway...
"Ex-excuse me... is...is anyone here?"
She stops and thinks to herself
"YAH! THAT WON'T DO! I HAVE TO BE MORE DIRECT! DON"T I WANT TO CHANGE WHO I AM HERE?" she got the courage to speak up "EXUSE ME! I AM A PERSON WHO WANTS TO MOVE INTO THIS DORM!"
(...)
Silence
"In all my fifteen years... I've never had a boyfriend... i wear glasses... Freckles on my face... flat as a washboard...Also really skinny... Honestly speaking... The society completely overlooks my existence... THEREFORE! My only option is to get into Tokyo U.! There is no other way!"
Before she knew it, she had stumble into a door way that leads to a hot spring
"AH! HOW PRETTY! great outdoor hot springs!"
A few minutes pass by and she found herself in the hot springs with her little traveling companion.
"HA HA... i snuck in...Because I've been spend the last two days trying to find Hinata House... I haven't even had time to take a bath!"
A few minutes go by
"This...really is a good place... i wish i could just forget about the Toky U. exams and everything else and just live here for the rest of my live."
Then she herd doors open
"EH? WHO IS IT? SHOOT! Could this be a mixed gender hot springs? (Is it a guy?)"
She looks around and spots a clay idol
"AH GOOD! There's something I can cover my face with here!"
"AH~ what a great hot springs!" someone says
Maedaema turns around and sees a young women with long black hair, the women comes and sits next to her.
"Ahh! so...so beautiful! WAH~ she's so beautiful I can't believe she and I are the same kind of creatures!"
The women sighs "We've been working hard to prepare everything for tomorrow! Su...listen to me a second..."
The women moves closer to her, barely covering her bust and asks
"Don't you think... my chest has gotten bigger recently?"
"WAH! (Such a beautiful chest!)" Thinks Maedaema
The women continues
"But... i still can't beat Naru or Kitsune's (no need to even mention Mutsumi's)
the women turns her head at her
"This way...Senpai might... Can you hear me? why are you wearing another weird thing again... eh?"
Maedaema takes the idol off
"um...um...I"
The woman stands up
"WAH! SOMEBODY! HELP!"
She gets startled by the womans cry and runs towards the house.
"SOMEBODY HELP FAST! THERE"S A PEEPING TOM WITH A CLAY IDOL ON HIS HEAD!" th woman yells
"AAAAH~ NO! I DIDN"T MEAN IT THAT WAY!" Said Maedaema
She runs in to a hallway when another young woman with childish features wearing a jack-o-lantern on her head, with her face visible through the mouth and holding a long banner that says "congrats on your marriage!" comes out to see what's going on
"OH! It's a clay artifact covered alien! This is the first contact with its species!"
She gets startled
"WAAAAHH! A POMPKIN MONSTER!"
She continues to run
"WAIT! LET ME DISSECT AND HAVE A LOOK!"
"NO NO~"
Then another young women with black long, well-cut, hair in a kendo-looking outfit
"shesh, so much noise..."
The women stands up and takes a sip of her drink and hits her with a fan, causing her to fall down
"Pervert."
She looks up and starts to tear-up
"What is happening? Why am I so unfortunate..."
"Kid...you're out of luck...my method of punishing perverts is very severe..."
She looks up and finds the three young women looking down on her and starts to cry when two young women walk in the room. the first one who spoke had short blonde hair and looked like a fox. the other women had long black hair in a loose braid she looked like an air head.
"Hey! Listen up everyone!"
"i think there is supposed to be a person coming who wants to move in here..."
The fox looking women just noticed what was going on
"You guys... why are you making people cry?"
The three young women looked dumb-founded
"Eh? It's a girl?"
After everything settled down and the young womon and Maedaema got dressed
"I...I AM MAEDAEMA...I AM FIFTEEN THIS YEAR... I AM HOPING TO TEST INTO TOKYO UNIVERSITY! MY NAME... DOESN"T MATTER IF YOU READ IT FORWARDS OR BACKWARDS...THE PUNUNCIATION IS ALWAYS THE SAME!"
*In Japanese her name is divided MA-E-DA-E-MA
"WAH HAHA! How cute!"
"YOU'RE ALL GOING TOO FAR! HOW CAN YOU LAUGH AT ME?"
"If you care about it so much... then don't blurt it out..."
Then the young woman from the hot springs looked at Maedaema
"I'm really sorry, I miss took you for a peeping tom!"
"No...That doesn't matter..." Maedaema said, looking down.
"Please let me know if you need help... I hope we can spend some good times together!" The woman replied.
Suddenly Maedaema thought of something, she looked up at the woman
"Oh yeah! If I may ask...is it true that all of you who live here are Tokyo University students?"
"Yup! Because we all studied very hard! I am room 201's Shinobu Maehara. Right now im in my second year at Tokyo U.! The person over there who is preparing the cake (and hit you with a fan) is in her third year of law school. Room 302's Motoko Aoyama! (ignore how she looks right now... in reality she's really a master of a certain famous Dojo in Kyoto!"
"That-that beautiful lady is..."
"And it seems recently she's been writing some very sweet romance novels...and the person over there decorating (the one who wore the pumpkin over her head chasing you) is also in her third year! Room 301's Su Kaolla! (She's also a princess of a certain country... she's been studying over here for a while!)"
"Wha-what? She's a princess?"
"And this is Mutsumi Otohime! She's a graduate at Tokyo U! And the one just standing over there that looks like a fox is room 205's Mitsune Konno, (but she's know as Kistune)"
"WAH! Another beautiful lady! Everyone here has grown to be so beautiful, they all really smart too... tha-that's really a problem... do I still want to live with all of them? It looks like... those people predestined by heaven can get into Tokyo U to study...guess it's all over for me...I'm just an ugly girl... short as a melon... flat as a washboard and my score is only 48..."
Kitsune see's Maedama lost in her thoughts and walks over to her
"You know... you really have timing! Funny you should choose to come here today! They are not here right now…but tomorrow… A loving couple who studied together at Tokyo U. is going to hold their wedding ceremony here!"
