Ok! Well this is my first Fanfic and I will be writing more for sure. Positive criticism please, I'm only 14 and I've been a bit distraught lately. and I know for a fact that a majority of people who write fanfics are in high school or college. For those of you who are my age and writing definitely favorite me. PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW! If I get 10 or more reviews I will Edit this story so It is continuous, and I will write more chapters. It might be a while though with guitar practice and all. I'm playing "Lay down" by Priestess right now and I can play the whole song almost perfectly. Oops! Off topic. Anyways, ENJOY! (btw, If you play guitar to put what kind of guitar you have in your review...)

Mystery: A One Piece Fanfic

It was a hot, sunny day and the Straw-hat pirates were doing what they usually do. Usopp was inventing something, Chopper was making medicine, Nico Robin was reading in a chair on the deck while Sanji kept bringing her fruity cockail drinks, and Zoro was on and off between training and sleeping. Monkey D. Luffy, the captain of the Straw-hats, was doing his usual as well. What else would he be doing. He was, of course, annoying the hell out of Nami, the crew's navigator, who was apparently trying to draw a map. "Just let me see what you're doing!" Luffy commanded as Sanji the womanized cook came in right at the moment Nami and Luffy were yelling at each other. "I'M TRYING TO DRAW A MAP YOU IDIOT!" "WELL HOW WAS I SUPPOSED TO KNOW!" At that moment a black polished shoe came into contact with Luffy's face. "DON'T YOU DARE YELL AT NAMI-SWAN!" exclaimed the angry chef. "Fine I'll go find something else to do." said Luffy as he walked out of the room pouting. On his way out Luffy passed Robin at the door. "What was that all about?" asked Robin curiously as she entered the room. "Luffy was pissing me of as usual." Nami said looking extremely agravated. "I sometimes wonder why he acts the way he does…" said Nami, as Sanji's eyes popped out as hearts "She's So beautiful even when She's angry" swooned Sanji As Robin started talking. "Your right Nami he does act childish often and I sure as hell don't know why. It really is, a mystery..."