Panda: Hey all! This is my first story here on this name, so please be nice… I'm just getting back in the writing swing and I can't promise this'll be very good but I wanted to put it up so you guys can give me some writing advice (constructive criticism is appreciated, and I guess flames would be ok if they're helpful. It's pretty short I know, but I thought it'd be best ended there.
Disclaimer time!
Axel: PandaGaaraInsomniac9 doesn't own us… but I own Roxy! winks
Roxas: …
Panda: He has a point there.
Roxas: Shut up and get on with it.
Axel: ANYWAY, she doesn't own anything but the computer (but actually, that's her parents') the pen and notebook she wrote this with, etc. We and the game Kingdom Hearts belong to Square Enix and Disney.
Panda: In other words, I don't own it. R&R please!
Looking Forward
He didn't look back; just spoke bitterly cold words to the cool gray walls, words that bit and clawed at the other, with hair as red as blood.
He didn't look back, even as the other pleaded with him, 'they'll destroy you- you can't turn on the organization!' Thunder rang forebodingly, and eyes like the sky closed and opened, closed and opened, dark as the water of the sea in Twilight Town at midnight.
He didn't look back for one second, only pausing for a moment to tell the other: 'No one would miss me.'
He didn't even look back to see the hurt expression, the pain he knew was shining in those emerald eyes as the other watched him, murmuring 'That's not true…I would…'
And as the rain began to fall around them, plastering a platinum blond spike to his forehead, he walked away, shoes thudding on alley ground.
He didn't look back.
