Chapter 1: Raine
This is my first fan fiction here, so critics are surely appreciated, as long as they're not those "I hate your story because I hate you" things, so now let's get on with the story!
A HunterxHunter fan fiction
Disclaimer:I do not own HunterxHunter and the characters. I only own my own characters.
Broken Doll
Chapter 1
The lonely girl stared out of the window, mystified by the trickling raindrops on the smiled a sad smile, for she had lost everybody in her life at one point, her family, her best ,a high pitched voice screeched,"Raine! Stop daydreaming! ", breaking her out of her sighed heavily and turned around to face her gorgeous best friend. "Coming, Ayami !" she chirped, plastering a fake smile on her sighed could never tell anyone her true feelings in fear of revealing her dark secrets, and breaking down in tears.
Ayami dragged Raine to York Shin for the auction, hoping to lighten her friend's moods. After dragging Raine to York Shin, Ayami found a nice cozy little café, for she knew that Raine was totally addicted to caffeine , her mood would always brighten when she drank coffee. Ayami had ordered a vanilla latte for Raine, Raine looked around the café wondered what people would see in them: A raven haired beauty bringing a vanilla latte back to a golden haired girl, who sipped it and continued scanning the people in the café, but then she paused at a table of four, with a raven-haired boy and a silver-haired boy, an old man in his twenties and a blond boy with his head stuck in a book. No!It can't be him!Wasn't our clan wiped out years ago,and him also? The blond boy looked up from his book, as though sensing her thoughts , and his eyes widened when they met hers. Kurapika ? Is that you? Raine pondered silently. The blond boy then got up and walked to their table urgently , talking to Raine when he reached it, "Miss, please come with me. I need to ask you something." "H-Hey! Wait! Are you Kurapika? Hey! Don't disrespect me!" shrieked Raine while being led out of the café by Kurapika.
"Kurapika ! Is that you?"Raine exclaimed, after reaching a place where they would not be heard."Raine! Is that you?"Kurapika mimicked. "Yes it's me,Kurapika! Where have you been all these time? What are you doing here?" "I'm here for the auction. By the look on your face, I think your crazy raven-haired friend dragged you here for the auction too!" Kurapika replied. "Hehe…You got that right, Kurapika! But, you forget that I know you a little bit too well! You can't fool me, what is your real reason for coming to York Shin?" "Well, I am a bodyguard for Neon Nostrade, the daughter of Light Nostrade , I only took this post because it alerts me of the Genei Ryodan's movements. If you do not remember, the Genei Ryodan was the group who brutally murdered our family and friends and dug their eyes out." Upon hearing this , both Kurapika's and my eyes turned a beautiful shade of crimson. "I'm with you, Kura-chan! Now pretty please introduce me to your friends!" I then led me to their table. "Everybody, this is Raine, age fifteen. Raine , this is Killua, who is twelve" pointing to the silver-haired boy, "Gon, who is also twelve" pointing to the raven-haired innocent little boy, "And Leorio." Pointing to the old man, who winked at me . Disgusting. "Hey old man, how old are you?" I asked the old man…Oh,Leorio. "How dare you! I'm only nineteen!" he said, getting angry. I gaped in astonishment. Who would have thought that the old man was nineteen!Then how old was Kurapika,huh?Ten? "Nice to meet you!" Gon said innocently. "Yo, so you're Kurapika's friend ,huh ?Are you also from the Kuruta clan?" Killua asked me lazily. "Yes,I and by the way, did you know that Kurapika and I are best friends?" I replied. "I KNEW IT!" Killua screeched. I nodded happily, thinking of something to embarrass Kurapika further, who had turned crimson in the face. Oops, looks like I've forgot…..Kurapika then steered the topic away from us quickly. "So Raine, do you know nen? If yes, what type are you?" I replied, "Yes, I do use nen. I am the specialist type. See this rose in my hair? The petals can be used to attack and defend, and the leaves can slice through anything. I also transferred my nen into an item, but it is hidden for now, so you have yet to find out because I don't know whether I can trust you or not." I said apologetically.
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