Hi all! I've decided to write a SasuSaku fanfic. I've never written one before but I'm giving it a go. So here's the first chapter of Condemned by Hell. (if the title doesn't make sense now or ever then I'm sorry but I suck at titles) Enjoy! I've rated it M as there is/will be swearing and sexual references.
Loud music, flashing lights and sex attraction: yeah, this is the place to be. My girls and I come here every Friday night - 'Blue Ice' – the best night club in town. My girls and I were dancing on the floor when I decided it was time for some drinks. As we walked towards the bar, I see a friend of mine working as the bar tender. He smiled as we came closer.
"So, what'll it be girls?" he asked even though he already knew the answer.
"Hmmm…I think I'll have a lime cruiser," I replied turning around to ask the girls who just nodded. "Actually, make that four." We got our drinks and headed to the VIP room. It was so easy getting into that room. I've been best friends with the owners daughter since we were 12.
"Thank-you Baki," I said to the bouncer when I entered the room. I spotted my friend who smile and waved in our direction.
"Sakura! Ino! Hinata! Tenten! Over here!" Temari shouted. When we approached, her younger red haired brother sighed.
"Temari, you're drunk," he said nonchalantly. Temari just scoffed.
"Bullshit, I ain't drunk!" She slurred. I laughed. Yeah, that's her – a party animal. I looked around. There were about 20 people in here. But one caught my attention. I'd never seen him here before. He was tall, with black eyes and raven hair that stood out the back like a chicken's ass.
I could smell her from here – vanilla and mint. She smelled so heavenly, not that I knew what Heaven feels or will ever feel like. I saw her dancing down below. So she's Sakura Haruno, eh? She's gorgeous. Every Friday she's come and I've watched from a distance but not tonight. Now I'm absolutely sure that she's it.
He was looking at me before his gaze was adverted to his friends who were drinking and laughing. I leaned closer to Temari.
"Oi, Temari," I whispered. "Who's the guy over there leaning against the wall with the constipated look?" Temari giggled before answering.
"Him? That's Sasuke Uchiha. He's a regular and all the girls try to flirt with him but he's never interested. He just sits in his corner with his friends Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga and Shikamaru Nara."
"But how come I've never seen him?"
"Oh, they usually sat in the little private lounge room just through that door which looks out over the whole nightclub. They must have been bored but I don't understand why they came out. The room has everything; a bar, TV, stereo. It also has tinted glass so that they could see out but no one could see in. Creepy, eh?" I nodded and looked back in his direction. Sasuke was staring back at me. Geez, what's his problem?
I couldn't stop myself from looking. Her hair was in a low side floral bun with a mermaid green clip holding it together, her black dressed that hugged her curves nicely and her emerald green eyes shone in the light. She was flawless. I wanted to taste her so badly but I restrained myself. All in good time, I told myself.
I was laughing, having a good time when I noticed Sasuke and his friends getting up to leave. As they walked straight past us, Temari stops them.
"Naruto! Sasuke! Neji! Shikamaru! Why are you leaving so soon? It only 11.00pm? Come sit and drink with us!" Thanks, Temari...just…just thanks. Invite the creepy stalker to come drink with us. The boys shrugged their shoulders and sat down.
First chappie over and done with. Hope you liked it as there is more to come. See you all next time for the next chapter of Condemned by Hell!
