Betrayal and Redemption
This is my first fan fiction that I will be publishing. To be honest, I have started on so many of them, but am never able to finish the second chapter because I don't know where to go with it. And to be honest, this story was inspired by a harry potter fan fiction stories; Betrayal of the Raven by: Miss Lesley. You should check it out, it's great! Warning, my writing might suck, but hope it will get better as it goes along.
INTRO
After Harry helped Draco avoid having to do the mission the dark lord sent her to do, they started dating. Draco would teach harry how to avoid and reflect dark curses and harry became her new home. Lucius wasn't happy that Draco had betrayed the dark lord; in fact, he was disappointed in her; the fact that she didn't stay with them when they were so close to winning the war. Draco wasn't an ordinary witch, she was the legendary Malfoy white witch, said to be one of the most powerful witches in the world. Lucius knew for sure it was her, only a female born from the Malfoy line could be one.
The last female Malfoy to be born into the family was 2000 years ago, Elizabeth Malfoy, and she was known as the dark witch, a wicked woman who destroyed the 1st magical government for revenge on the man that betrayed her, killing millions of innocent witched and wizards of all ages. She had no remorse for what she did; she was a one man army against the whole magical government. They even had to use elves, goblins, giants, centaurs and other magical creatures to beat her. In the end she was filled with darkness and hatred and became an out of control witch, salvation and redemption were no longer an option. In the end she was killed. Every born Malfoy witch was a white witch at the beginning, but when they enter the dark, there is no way out.
Ever since Draco's birth, Lucius wanted to keep it a secret. Every time there were suspicions that a female Malfoy was to be born the ministry of magic would intervene and terminate any Malfoy pregnancy in question in order to prevent a similar incident that took place 2000 years ago. Everyone in the magical world knew about the story and had believed that the Malfoys were cured and couldn't produce a female heir, so no one cared anymore. It was believed to be a fairy tale, a story created to scare the other wizards for the gain of power.
Lucius had been happy when he had found out that his wife was pregnant, but the moment he found out that the child was to be a boy, he became troubled. It wasn't because she was a girl; it was because this meant that his first child was going to be murdered and not allowed to live. So he decided to lie to everyone and raise his daughter as a boy for her own safety, naming her Draco instead of a girl name. as far as Draco knew, the prophecy was just a childish story, and her cross dressing was because she had thought that her father wanted a male heir, so she left it as that and continue to live as a boy.
Lucius was disappointed in her because she went to the side that would most likely kill her if they found out her secret. He already knew that harry potter knew the truth, but that was because he knew they were dating. Potter had kept it a secret because Draco had asked him too, she was not ready to tell anyone the truth yet, even when many have already started to accept her. Harry was proud of her, and her change in mind to do the right thing. Lucius was happy that in all this time, Draco had found someone who loved her for who she was and not for what she was, a Malfoy. He was still concern for her safety. To him, Draco came first that the lark lord, not even he knew the Malfoy secret.
Draco was beginning a new life, and he knew he had to respect her wish even thought it hurt him a great deal. He couldn't bring himself to think that one day he was going to fight against his baby girl. These were the time when he hated Potter the most, but he knew it didn't matter because it was his daughter who chooses that path to be with their love one. He remembered when Narcissa had to choose to fallow him or stay in the light side. Narcissa knew that staying by his side meant danger and she didn't care; so how could he stop Draco from doing what they also had done at that age. He just hoped that potter could protect her for the rest of her life, and then maybe he wouldn't be so worried.
HOW WAS MY FIRST CHAPTER? JUST TO SAY. THIS IS LITERALLY MY FIRST PUBLISHED WORK, EVERYTHING ELSE IS ON MY COMPUTER BUT EVERYTHING ELSE SUCKS BECAUSE IT WAS JUST FOR ME SO I DIDN'T PUT MUCH EFFORT IN IT. YOU CAN LEAVE ME A COMMENT OR SUGGESTIONS, I DON'T MIND. AND IF YOU HAVE ANY COMPLAINS, PLEASE FELL FREE TO TELL ME, AND I'LL TRY TO FIX IT OR JUST GIVE IT A SERIOUS THOUGHT AT. THANK YOU AND HAVE A NICE DAY.
