Angelic Swordsman: Hello reader and welcome to the revised chapter 1 of the Revised Legend of Symphonia. Now a few things to say about the story. One: it take place after the Oracle Game in Legend of Zelda, and two years after Symphonia. Two: Some chapters of the Original will be replaced with Completely New ones, but otherwise it just replacing chapter with more correct grammar ones. Finally for Zelda timeline lovers, Oracle is placed last in the Zelda timeline right after Adventure of Link. That pretty much all I have to say.

Lloyd: Alright let get started it been a long time since the last chapter. Seriously almost three years that a long time.

Angelic Swordsman: Your right please do the disclaimers ok. Then well get started with the revised chapter one.

Lloyd: Legend of Zelda and Tales of Symphonia is copyright of Namco and Nintendo. None the characters or objects in the games belong to the Author. However anything original that he make is completely his.

Angelic swordsman: Thanks now let start the Revival of this Fanfic


Lloyd's Dream

"Help… Help me please." cried a female voice from a faraway place.

However the place where we are now is in a mysterious, eerie forest that was devoid of any light. The tree looked as if they were haunted, and they could sprang to life at any moment. At the end of the of a clearing stood a pedestal that contained a sword. The sword had a purple hilt with a yellow jewel contained in the middle of the metallic purple crossguard. However the focus of our attention in these woods would be a young man who seem to be lost in these woods. He had light brown color eyes, with short dark brown colored hair; He was wearing a red shirt with buttons on it, black overall, red boots, and red gloves. On his hand was a blue gem that rested on some sort of mound that was on his forehand. He also carried two swords that were in the scabbards that lightly rested on the belts that were rapped around his waste. The youth looked around the woods as if he was looking for something, something that was important. "where did that voice come from, and where in the world am I?" thought the boy as he continued to looking around trying to get his bearings.

"Help me… Please help me…" cried the voice from faraway once again; as the youth looked around more frequently trying to find the source of the voice.

"Who there? Who are you and where are you calling from?" shouted the youth hoping to get a reply from the voice.

"Help me please… I'm at the castle, please head west…" Spoke the voice as it faded again with the wind howling.

Without saying nothing the man started to head west just as the voice stated. As he left the clearing a fog seemed to had suddenly appeared as if from nowhere. It was thick and scary making the sense of direction confusing. As he continued to proceed the voice would come back every now an then, to give the boy some help with directions. Finally the youth came to the exit of the woods into the clear night sky. The stars were glimmering peacefully overhead, but it wasn't as peaceful as it looked; as smoke seem to had been rising from the west horizon.

"Ah please help!! You must come to the castle quickly!" screamed the voice as the boy in red dashed off towards where the smoke was coming from.

As he was running he could hear a voice, it was a voice full of evil which seem to be laughing about something. "What in the world is going on!? Where is that voice coming from, and why is that female voice calling for help!?" thought the youth as he came to the source of the fire. He was shocked as he came to a castle town that was completely set a blaze! There were various town people fleeing, cry, hurt, or just plain dead. It was a horrible site to behold, but the evil voice that he had heard before let out an evil laugh.

"What in the world happen here!! Why am I here!? Where am I don't understand!!" shouted the youth in confusion as he stood there in a daze.

"Quickly to the garden. Ah!!" Screamed the female voice causing the boy to snap out of his dazed state and head for the castle garden.

The site at the garden shocked the youth even more then the burning town. There on the ground were countless dead men covered in blood and scattered around the place. The ones in silver chainmail and armor where probably the castle guards, but the one in the red suits with chainmail and armor helmets is what really shocked the boy most.

"What in the worlds going on!! Why in the world are the Desians here!? Shouted the youth as these events were starting to confuse him greatly.

Not dwelling on it to long the boy continued into the castle, but the scenery inside was even worse than outside. It would seem that the bigger part of the battle had taken place inside the castle as more Desians and castle guards laid dead on the ground. As he continued to explore the castle he finally entered the throne room. In here there were more dead Desian body then there were castle guards. However the guard's armor in here were different then the guard's armor that were outside or in the hallway. As the youth came to the throne there sat a man in golden armor with a red cape, and a golden crown on top of his head. However it would seem that this man was dead as a lance stuck out of the left side of his chest like a stick. "This guy must have been the lord of the castle." thought the boy as he looked at the lifeless body.

"Help… Please he… " Said the female voice it couldn't finish it sentence.

"That voice it coming from someplace in this castle." thought the youth as he left the throne room as proceeded to search the castle for the source of the voice. It few hours later as he came another corridor. He had searched everywhere, but he couldn't find the owner of the voice that was talking to him. All he found where more slaughter guards and Desians alike, and it was starting to get him. Finally he came to a door that he hadn't come to yet. It was decorated with all kind of Symbolic symbol, and what caught his eyes most was the triangle that was in the center of the picture. "Why do I feel that the triangle in this picture is important." Thought the youth as he stared at the door for a little. Now noticing it he realized that he had a problem. It would seem that the door he was looking at had no doorknob what so ever, thus so he has no idea how to open it. Looking at the triangle at the door the boy ponder about how he was going to open this door.

"Touch the triangle in the center of the picture and the path to the basement will open." spoke a voice as a guard came around the corner.

"Hey are you ok!! Shouted the youth as he rushed over the guard and sat him against a wall.

"Don't bother with me it to late… But you must go and help our princess she in the basement all alone." said the guard as he breathed heavily as there was a sword slice that stretched around his stomach.

"Hey hang in there don't die on me!!" shouted the boy as he kneeled next the injured guard.

"Forget about me just worry about our princess. Please you must help her the enemy might try and attack her!!" shouted the guard putting more strain on his body.

"Please help her… Our kingdom is doomed, our king is dead, and she the only heir to the throne… Those monster came out of nowhere it only took them a few hour to wipe us all out… If only he was here…" spoke the guard as he faded away from life.

"May your soul find peace in the afterlife." said the youth as he touch the triangle on the door causing it to open, and with that headed into the basement.

The stair seem like they would go on forever as he continued to run down the stair. He was absolutely confused about what was going on. Why am I here in this world? Why did the Desians attack this place, and most of all how did they get here in the first place?" thought the youth. He was completely worried about the princess as the female voice had stop communicating to him for quite some time. "Please don't be dead!!" thought the boy as he reach the bottom, and approach a huge door that lead to the next room. Hesitating a little he finally pushed the door open and walked into the room. By far this was the most shocking scene that the boy had seen all day. Splattered all over was the chamber was red crisom blood, and hang from the ceiling were beautiful tapestry, but they were all burned in various place. However the youth quickly wonder over to something that was lying on the floor. Getting a close up look there laid the princess in a pool of her blood on her stomach.

Turning her on back the youth was horrify; there was a hole the size a fist puncture on her where her heart used to be. " Damn I was to late!! How horrible her hearts was completely ripped right out of her." thought the youth as he look at the once living girl with blood smeared on her cheek.

"Lloyd how in the hell are you here!!" boomed a voice as he turned around and looked at the person who was talking to him in shock.

There standing a few feet away from him was a man. He had platinum blonde hair, and emerald green eyes; he wore a Azure blue armor with a cross in the center of his breast plate, blue gauntlets, black pants, and, blue armor boots. He had a long sword in a scabbard strapped to his waist and a blue shield on his left hand with a cross in the middle just like his armor.

"Yggdrasil how are you alive your suppose to be dead!!" shouted the youth named Lloyd in disbelieve.

"That is none of your concern. However I'm glad that you're here because now I can finally get my revenge on you." said Yggdrasil as he pulled out a silver long sword from it scabbard.


Angelic Swordsman: Well that it for chapter one revised.

Lloyd: Wow that pretty good a lot better than chapter one, but don't you think you went a little overboard with Zelda's death.

Angelic Swordsman: Nope I think that it a little dramatic so to speak. Anyway this is the beginning of the revival please stay on the look out for chapter two of Legend of Symphonia.

Ganondorf: Ha ha ha can't wait until the next chapter I bet I beat you guys even worse than I did in the original chapter!!

Link: Well find out soon enough until the next chapter please review on this revised chapter.