Okay so this is my story and there are a couple of things different from the maximum ride story and this story. First of all Fang's name is different but he still wears all black and has long black hair but i guess his eyes are different. Also they don't have wings here. With max she still has blond hair and different color eyes and her attitude WILL become snappy. I LOVE THAT. Also they have English accents! WOOOO!!!!

Nikole(Max)- Well I BETTER become more snappy!! I DONT like me!

Me- Calm Down you WILL become more snappy *murmmurs* after the first 'bout 4 chapters.

Nikole(Max)- WHAT?!?!?!?

*Throws Watermelon at me*

Me- Yummy watermelon. You're gonna have to do better!*in sing-song voice*

Max-You really wanna try me?!?!?

Me-noma'm!

Well on to the story


The Dark Angels And Their Goddess

A Story By: Noella Abarca

Oh my god isn't school like the worst part of the day? Well for me it is and mainly because we always have a bitch war going on. It's me vs. the devil, Sarah. She used to be my best friend until middle school came along. Okay so here's the deal before 6th grade we made a promise to each other that middle school wasn't going to change us but it looks like she didn't keep her promise because now she's one of them, the bitches. By the way Sarah has wavy light brown hair with brown eyes.

I might be the most popular girl in school but I'm not a bitch or think I'm all that unlike my friends expect one. Oh by the way my name is Nikole and I'm in high school in my sophomore year. Today is Monday UGHHH I HATE Monday's! Well I'm wearing a ummmm…. hold that thought *looks down*, OH YEAH a tight, white strapless shirt with a black mini-skirt. And *looks down* White boots with a black cap. I have straight blond hair, with bangs (not side-bangs) and green eyes. I always smell like strawberries because of my shampoo. Also I guess I'm from England because I have an English accent. It get annoying. I stand about five feet and six inches.

"Nikki!!!! Did you hear a word I just said?" Melanie asked.

The instant she said that I snapped out of my thoughts, by the way she's my best friend now and she's the one I was talking about, she's different then the others. Today she's wearing a blood red shirt with blue skinny jeans and red converse. She has wavy black hair with hazel eyes and always smells like vanilla shampoo. She stands about 5 feet and six inches.

"Huh? What? Oh, um... of course I did?" I said nervously. And I bet you could tell I was lying.

"Okay then what was I saying?" Melanie said suspiciously. She knows me so well. Sigh I CAN NEVER DO ANYTHING WITHOUT BEING CAUGHT BY HER!!

"Umm... pudding?" I asked.

"No; she said we have new students and they don't seem to have a fashion bone in their body" said Caytlin. She's one of my "friends" she has straight red hair and blue eyes. Today she's wearing a blue Abercrombie tank-top and super short shorts. And I mean SUPER! She stands about five feet seven inches. Me and Melanie looked at each other the back at her.

"And may we ask how you know that?" Melanie and I asked.

"Because they're over there" Caytlin pointed to the school door. There stood a very pale boy with straight black hair and blue eyes, he was skinny had a black shirt on and black pants. He was about five feet eight inches. Beside him stood what seemed to be his sister she also was pale, skinny, and had straight black hair with blue eyes but she had a black dress on. She stood about five feet six inches. They started heading over to us. They looked like dark angels walking toward us. It was so perfect. THEY were so perfect. Soon they stopped next to my locker. So I greeted them.

"Hello, my name is-"

The boy interrupted, "Nikole, I know my name is David and this is my sister, Gabriella." WOW they have an English accent. Could HE get any more perfect. Wait what am I saying I JUST MET THE DUDE!!

"How did you know my name?" I asked. Okay I know I'm popular but news like that don't even spread around THAT fast.

"You're the most popular girl in school how can we NOT know your name?" Gabriella added.

I knew they were lying but I let it slide after all it IS their first day.

"Oh yeah. So where are you guys from?" I asked.

"We're from-" Gabriella nudged David then gave him a look that (I think said) you-idiot-what-are-you-doing and we-have-to-keep-this-a-secret sort of look .Then looked at me and said "We're from Brazil." Brazil Yeah right for one their too pale and secondly they do NOT look Brazilian. Those little liars. Those little BEAUTIFUL liars.

So I hope you liked it!!! LOL Well go on press review you know you wanna!!

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