Chapter 1 (Beatrice P.O.V)


I hear my name being called.

"Beatrice Prior"

I walk up on stage and accept the knife from Marcus, i go over to the Abnegation bowl, take a deep breath, and lightly slice my palm, i put my hand over the bowl and watch an Abnegation stone turn red from my blood. Everyone aplauds and i get greeted by a Abnegation leader,

"Hello, Beatrice is it?" she asks, i just nod.

"Great! So glad we will be having you as an Abnegation member!" she says

"Thank you." i say and bow. I walk over to an empty seat and sit down, I zone out while everyone else chooses, i think about how different life will be without Caleb and what job ill choose, and if ill get married, i hope i get married, i dont want to be alone, i i think about the future until i hear an familliar name being called,

"Robert Stevens"

he walks up on stage and accepts the knife from Marcus, he slices his palm and pourshis blood on the soil. Robert has walks off the stage and joins the Amity group. Then Marcus says,

"Susan Stevens"

She walks on stage accepts the knife from Marcus and pours her blood on the Abnegation stones. She walks off stage and i greet her with a bow as she sits next to me, at least ill know someone here in my initiation class. After every sixteen-year-old chooses we head to the Abnegation compound and right before we go through the entrance one of the leaders stops us,

"Hello, im Madison, ill be the Abnegation transfers Instructer,while over here will be the Abnegation Born instructer, , Would you like to tell us what we will be doing in our 4 days of initiation?" Madison asks, only four days of initiation? Wow. Well being a Abnegation is not hard.

"Of course, , The first two days you will be herewe will teach you to be selfless, The last two days we will teach you how to help the factionless, then on the last day we will give you an certificate of an 'Official Abnegation Member', everyone understand?" asks, we nod and she bows,

"Follow me." she says, and we do. She shows us around the Abnegation Compound, The factionless sector and where our food suply comes in, after she shows us everything we end up back by the entrance of the compound, she turns to us,

"Since we all live here, go home to your families, just make sure to catch the 12:00am bus to get here in time for initiation to begin, your dismissed." she says, she bows, and walks through the door of the entrance,we all just stand therefor a second then slowly start to leave, Susan finds me and we walk home together, on our way there she speaks up,

"Do you ever wonder how we will be when were older?" she asks, wow, Abnegation arent supposed to be curious but, i have to admit i wonder that alot to.

"Yes" i answer

"If we'll get married, what job we'll have, who our husband will be?"she says, more like questions.

"Yeah, i wonder that alot acctually." i answer.

"Me too. Like who do you like?" she asks, i walk, shocked, i havent really thought about that, i dont really like anyone.

"None really." i answer flatly.

"Yeah, i guess me either, i mean i liked your brother, but, as you know he transfered." she says putting her head down. i absolutly understand her.

"Who knows Beatrice, you might meet someone mistirious one day and just fall in love!" she says as we get to my drive way. i roll my eyes and say

"Right" and she says "It could happen!" i start walking up to the front steps as i hear her yell,

"Bye Beatrice! You never know, is out there!" i laugh silently and walk through the doors, my parents arent homeso i cook them some dinner, put it on the counter and leave a note by it:

To: Mom and Dad,

I made you dinner. Im upstairs sleeping if you need me, ill be gone at 10:00 in the morning for initiation and Marcus Eato needs to speak to me. Love you!

Love,Beatrice.

i put the note by the plates and make my way upsatairs, i change into my sleeping clothes, brush my hair, brush my teeth, and lay down and think about what susan said "Maybe is mistireous and you fall in love."or "Someone you know but have never met before." the only person i can think of that i now but havent met before is: Marcus Eatons son.

Tobias.

Ive always wondered what he was like, his father always said he was busy so he could never come to any dinners at our house or anything, thinking about what he's like makes me want to meet him more.

I drift off to sleep thinking about the future


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Emergent: *while tris is 'Dieing'*

What wil happen when Tris' mother tells her she's not finished in life?Wil she even survive Davids rath and survive? Will Tobias save her? Or will Caleb?

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Resurgent:

What happens three years after Tris dies? When Mathew and Caleb create a serum to bring the dead back to life?Will it work? When she goes to find Tobias she finds and unwanted guest! Who wil it be?

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