Hey everybody. This is my first fanfic and I know there is already like 3 of this type of story out right now, but it seemed like a lot of fun so I decided to try it out. This is just the first chapter so I can see if people are actually enjoying my writing. If nobody likes it I'll end this story. Enjoy :) BTW every story I'm going to write will be M just so you know haha. The other ratings just take away all the fun ;)
Stuck: My Little Pony
"What… the… Hell…" The three words sputtered out of his mouth in a tone to show how completely dumbfounded he was. It was all Nicholas could think to say at this sight. He was in complete shock, yet completely amazed at the same time. He had no Idea where he was yet for some odd reason everything looked so incredibly familiar. He was standing by his window completely stolid. After about 2 minutes of being completely motionless he came back to reality (or as it seemed) and walked downstairs. He slowly opened the door and ambled outside. His entire house had landed in what looked like the middle of a field. He felt like he was about to go insane so he charged right back into his house.
The boy's full name was Nicholas Moore, but all of his friends call him Nick. He was 16 years old, about 5 feet 8 inches tall, with brown eyes. He was on the skinnier side, however, he had nice abs and his muscles were quite toned. He was very smart and was more then less on the attractive side. He loved heavy music with his favorite band being Linkin Park. However, he does love all types of music though including dubstep.
He needed something to calm him down right now or he thought he would just completely go nuts. He got out his Ipod and played Spit on a Stranger by Nickel Creek. It was one of the only calming songs he has on his music player. He sat down and a tear came to his eye. "What If I never return home again?" he asked out loud hoping somebody would come and find him. The only thing keeping him from going crazy was the familiarity of this place he is in.
Not to far from where his house had landed stood a yellow colored pony, a Pegasus to be exact. Her name was Fluttershy. She had a long pink mane and ocean blue eyes. She was considered one of the more beautiful ponies in Ponyville, but her shyness seemed to be a turnoff for most people. When the song he had been playing hit her, her ears perked up. "What is that beautiful song?" she asked herself. She tried to ignore it, but her curiosity got the best of her. She began walking in the direction the music was coming from. She came upon a house, an extremely large house in her mind. She had never seen a house this big before. She slowly, but surely walked up to the door and knocked.
The sound of the door being knocked was something he desperately wanted to hear. He sprang up from where he was sitting and charged to the door opening it with much intensity. The force that the door had been opened was too much for Fluttershy making her curl up into a ball. Nick stood there with a huge grin on his face, but it suddenly faded when he realized nobody was there. He was about to shut the door and walk back to his couch even more sullen then before when he saw the small pony quivering with fear on the ground. He had never seen a pony this pretty before. The only ponies he saw were black, white, or brown. He moved his hand down to pet it when a small voice came from the shaking pony. "H-h-hello…" she said. "P-please d-d-don't hurt me."
"ummm… Did you just talk?" was all he could respond with.
Well there you have it! Chapter 1! Sorry for the length of it being so short, but I wanted to make sure people are getting entertained by the story before I finish it. Constructive criticism is wanted but no outbursts of rudeness haha. I will start chapter 2 if people actually like this story. This is my first story again so I'm fine with people being harsh, but just keep that in mind when writing reviews. I love you all!
