I had to redo the scene where Terra and Raven fight. Raven should have totally won, the reason why is because throughout the entire battle Raven only releases bits and pieces of her anger. She literally is the daughter of evil, she's a lot stronger than what they showed. This before she battles her father, so Anger is obviously not under total control.

In my rewrite, she uses a different incantations, and her powers totally consume Terra, until she releases her.


"My emotions are under control."

It was partially true. Raven did have control of her emotions but she felt herself slowly slipping. She could barely hear Terra mimicking her over the blood beating in her ears. In the front of her mind, Anger was taking shots at her in a different way.

Really Raven? Control, as if.

Are you gonna let a little dirt pixie beat you?

Wow, you are weak. Huh?

Raven took another halfhearted shot at taking Terra down, and she just ended up back in mud, face first.

The smell of mud was making her sick, her hands were sticky, her uniform was dirty.

This was going to take forever to get out of her clothes. Raven was frustrated with trying to fight two battles, one in person, the other in her head.

It was tiring and she felt physically and mentally worn out.

Anger continued taunting her, teasing her.

Raven felt trapped and choked. The taste of mud sat in the back of her throat.

Terra began enclosing her in mud. Taunting as she got in her face. "Come on Raven. What stings the most?"

Raven. . .can't breathe?

Isn't this overwhelming to a weak little demon girl like you?

Losing control Raven?

"That I tricked you?"

Born of evil. . .

"That I nearly wiped out your team?"

. . .yet you conceal your evil. . .

"That everyone liked me better than you?"

. . .you breathe the breath of evil. . .

"Or was it that deep down inside you really believed that I was your friend?"

. . . now release it!

Raven lost herself to her emotions. She was exhausted, and couldn't bear the anger. She fell inside herself, she lost one battle, her Anger wouldn't let her lose the other.

"Listen here, dirt pixie, you think because you throw a few rocks, you'll beat me!?"

Terra backed up in fear of what she just released from Raven. It looked like a demon from her nightmares.

"I am born from the very thing that you fear. You listened to Slade. You're a traitor! A Pathetic, lying, traitor!"

Terra attempted to fight her back. Trying to use hands from the mud to bring her down, but she was unstoppable.

Her red eyes locked on Terra, ready to bring this to an end.

"Malum Vaserix Abolefacio Exsolvo Combrum!"

Raven's cape opened up and a red raven came and took Terra inside and she was consumed by the evil inside.

She lost the energy from her anger, and collapsed in the mud, not moving.


Raven groaned and shifted, before slowly rising up. She blinked, her eyes adjusting to the light of the room she was in, she looked around, the bright lights temporarily blinding her. Her head hurt like never before, and her body ached with new pains.

"Raven?" It was Robin's voice calling out to her, yet it seemed so far away. "Raven?" She focused on the sound and found that he was sitting beside her, kneeling beside her, on the couch.

"Y-yeah?" She said, making out the details of his voice, studying his face for a few moments. "Robin?"

He smiled hearing her say his name. "Yeah, it's me. Are you okay?"

She wanted to nod, but the movement would've brought up pain, and her lunch. "A little sick, but I've been worse. What happened?"

"We were about to ask you the same thing. You were covered in mud and Terra was gone when we found you." Robin helped her settle her feet on the ground, and she saw the other Titans standing across the room.

"Raven!" Starfire rushed over. "I am most delighted that you are alright." She enveloped the empath in a bone crushing hug.

"Thanks Star." Raven breathed as Starfire released her from the hug.

Cyborg gave her a smile. "I'm pretty sure you saved us, Rae. Thanks." He came over, sitting across from her on the couch.

Beast Boy stood alone, slinking over to her slowly. He peered down at the dark girl sitting in front of him. "Raven, what happened?" He whispered.

She shook her head, sorrow and disappointment met when she looked at him. "My Anger got the best of me, I lost control."

"Where's Terra?" He pondered. He wrung his hands in nervousness.

Raven sighed, looking down at her hands in her lap. "I'm sorry, Beast Boy." That was the most she could offer. Her memory was quite hazy from the ordeal.

"What did you do?" Something different filled his voice when he asked this question, it wasn't sorrow anymore. It was. . . fear.

She looked at him, exhausted from fighting, yet pain filled her voice. "Don't do that to me, don't make me sound like some kind of. . .monster." Realization filled her as Raven looked at him. "That's what you think I am? A monster?"

"No Raven, no. But when your angry, you can be really scary." Beast Boy scratched the back of his head, trying not to sound like he was accusing her of killing Terra. "What happened to Terra?"

Regret left her when the accusations came across. She rose to her feet, indifference hardened the features of her face, remorse left her heart. Raven stared down Beast Boy, the loss of compassion turned her violet eyes near gray. "I don't know. And frankly, I don't care. It wouldn't have happened if you hadn't told your girlfriend all of my secrets. Some family you are." She scoffed starting to exit the room, Beast Boy ran and grabbed her shoulder readying an apology. "Don't. You've already said enough."


SO ?

Did you like it ?

Was it too dramatic ? I have a bad tendency to do that .

But , I loved my ending.

The words Raven said were in Latin .

Malum - Evil

Vaserix - Incantation from another episode "Spellbound" I believe. . .

Abolefacio - Destroy

Exsolovo - Release

Combrum - Consume

I really hope you guys liked it, and make sure you drop a review below.

Sequel Maybe ?