Hi:
I am a student in Vancouver, BC, Canada, and I am in my last year in high school. While I had never quite learnt writing formally, I do have a series of primitive works that I would like the greater Internet community to critique, and preferably enjoy.
In this particular series, I chose a rather unknown perspective with a character drawn from the Hunger Games, Cato. We know about Snow's tyranny, but what about his minister? Did he have unanimous support in government? Was he really as powerful as he appeared? These questions, pricking my skin as I read the novel, I strive to answer in this series to the readers' satisfaction.
Throughout this extended series, I use the "third person objective" perspective. That is to say, I won't tell you anything besides actions, scenes, and speech. You will be the observer and tell what's behind each character as they present themselves to you. I can't reveal anything to you except for objectively observable facts.
The principal focus in these stories is on a character called Alex Caelum, first a knight, then a minister, then prime minister as we see at the end of the story. He has some rather unusual experience, and most stories revolve around the brutal Cato and his interaction with Caelum. Most of which are quite harmless and humorous, but in some stories I do go into great graphic detail, and I will note it if this chapter I consider unsuitable for younger readers.
I have to warn you about some of the technicalities of the story. Since there is much government policy involved, you probably need a basic understanding about Westminster-style government, especially towards the end.
Therefore: enjoy!
