Fallen Angel chapter 1

The investigation

Author notes

Ok well this is my first fan fiction ever I hope you guys like

note this is EdXOc

Disclaimer: I don't own Full metal alchemist if I did there would be more suspense and another newer series of him at 21

btw ed it 21 and is like 5"7

Pre-chapter

A long time ago he gave up ideas of angels and fluffy shit like that, they were gone like his youth it had been years...years scince he had fought with alchemy, losing the want to, especially after al...gave his life, giving up his youth and putting all things aside he became an official state alchemist (one that did his job) always longing for that rebellious attitude to resurface, but to focused on his promise...never to become involved in the dark part of alchemy, never to love again, humunclas ,human transmutation both had brought him nothing but sorrow but what happenes when an angel comes under his guidence , one with a hectic past one that hold everything he vowed to leave behind , one that would change his mind forever.

Ed's POV

It all started as a mission ordered by military headquarters, a tip on a man trying to carry out human transmutation ,the worst of all alchemic sins.

Standing in pure darkness looking up at the starry night sky, looking around the only thing Ed could see was the lit mahogany door of the suspect's house, gripping the small hand gun for the impact sure to come, expecting the worse, kicking in the door he finds nothing.

As he continues into the house he see's nothing but walls lined with books of alchemy, walking from room to room he searches for any hints of alchemy or transmutation circles the only thing noticeable were pictures of one man and two girls one with raven black hair and the other with almost goddess like honey blond hair.

slowly walking into the kitchen Ed notices a pool of blood and drops leading to an obscure cellar door while following the path of blood into the murky basement he hear's a scream and quickly runs toward it.

LPOV

Slowly awaking with a pounding headache, Lillian began to look up at the horror of her half-crazed father holding her defenseless sister imprisoned in his vice like grip.

Frantically looking around the unfamiliar room she see's transmutation circles written in what looks like . . . "oh god blood".

Fearing for her twin's life she attempts to attack her insane father. With horror Lillian finds herself unable to, because she is pinned to the wall by silver chains unable to move or stop him as he slowly starts to transmute her sister.

Crying from her now helpless state of being. Lillian begins screams at her father she now realizes this would be the last thing she saw of her father. Watching with empty eyes she watches as a black hole grows underneath him and he was slowly ripped to pieces by shadow like hands.

Still frozen from the shock she begins to become dizzy, hearing a monster like screech and three bullet shots she slowly slips into unconsciousness.

Ed's POV

"Holy Shit, It couldn't be " Ed yells as he started shooting at the heap of what looks like internal organs and blood, as it open's its mouth and made a sound that could wake the dead. Standing there in shock he notices a female figure in the far corner of the blood filled room, As he approaches the individual, he notices she is bound to the wall by chains and not awake, pulling at the hard metallic chains he unsuccessfully tries braking the bonds, without a thought he found himself clapping his hand together and slapping them against the wall watching as the chains dissolve and the tall light-haired maiden falls into his arms.

As the other investigators enter the scene of the crime he approaches one and request an ambulance as he carries the heavy blond upstairs. He notices the same picture on the desk and realizes one of the two girls is the same one he's holding only older, grabbing the old picture and placing her into the ambulance. He gets in his car and drives behind the ambulance to the hospital.

Upon arriving at the hospital he followed the doctors to her designated hospital room to find out the reason she was passed out. Entering the room he noticed three men and his female superior officer, approaching them he realizes that one of them was a investigator the other two were doctors. One of the doctors turn around and looks at him and starts to speak "hello. . . Mr . . .?", "Elric, im the person who found the girl, do you know what happened" the doctor blinks "yes we believe that the girl in front of us is unconscious from the stressful events that happened now doubt overwhelmed" ed rolled his eye "no shit", the doctor ignored the comment and continued "we believe her to be Miss Lillian Abigail Rose".

During there conversation the superior officer approached the two and interrupted right then "her father is missing and her sister is dead , we need someone to take her in . . . well?" obviously staring him down. Ed struggled to fight the blatant request "but. . . I . . . I cant!"she quickly cuts him of in mid sentence "if I remember correctly you have at least 2 rooms open in that huge old house of yours, and no wife or kids to argue her staying. . .right?" Ed sighs "correct" "then I see we have no problem here , when she is awake and able body she will leave with you". The superior red head walks off happy that she didn't have to take her, leaving Ed and the still placid doctor baffled.

As the doctor begins to speak, he again is interrupted by everyone starting to stare at the female lying on the bed as she starts to move, and is starting to awake from her listless slumber.

Lillian's POV

Slowly opening her eyes Lillian finds her self in a all white room with open windows showing the bright day light. Finding her self being stared at by quite a few people she opens her mouth and meekly states "where am I, how did I get here?" a Red headed woman walks up to her and simply states "you are in the hospital, because you were unconscious" still confused Lillian looked at the woman with questioning eyes "why?" "Well lets start with this ,can you remember anything that happened before this"she stared at the woman and slowly stated "all I can remember is eating lunch after that nothing". . . . .

The doctor frowned "amnesia"

well being that this is my first time writing I hope the readers/reviewers aren't hard on me I realize this is a bit out of character but I tried hard to make his personality still show at current I will rate T+ but there may be a lemon farther on in possibly ,don't worry more drama is to come

p.s I will try to update every week depending on if I get good reviews