hi every1 this iz my 1st storee and im kinda nervus about it............so plz review so i no what 2 fix bc theres probably a lot..........im sorree if u hate it............i spent a long time on this........ so plz reed and tell me what neds to b fixed plz......
one day chef was tired and wanted his pay so he went to chris and asked wheres my money? But then chris said sorry it hasnt come in yet. and then chef got really really mad and pulled out a bazooka out of nowhere and it was loaded with nets instead of that other stuff and then he trapped chris and all the campers cheered because they got to go home and when they got home dunken and cortnee broke up and said they hated each other. so then jeff and bridget reelized that their was more to life than kissing so they stopped. well every1 else lived happly eva after because chris was taken to the dog pound wear he got fixed and was put into a sell by hisself on a short chaine. plus he has flees now. eezeekeyal finaly admitted he luved eva and no-uh was just readin his tinee book while justinn looked at hisself in the mirrar. and then k-t deesided she was better off w/o say-d so she left her and say-d cried alot. tieler and linsey were making out and all, and so we're issy and owin but not gwen and trentt bc they r awsum togehter and stuf. k so thats the mane charicters so then cortnee rote a store and said plz review and comment I think my store iz rly good and I want ur opinyun so plz tell me how incrediblee awsum it wuz, kk? thnx so muchhhh and I luv you awl and yeah. then every1 gets mad cuz they want to rite 1 to. oh well sum things never chainge
im sorree if it wuz baddddd.................i no it wuz...................im just lookin up 2 ppl on hear and want to rite like them................plz dont comment bad plz................can sum1 help me with this??????
ps plz tell me if u like the genral idea bc i mite make better storees and mor like it when i get better at writing....thnx so much............bye
