Wooho! My first fanfic! Lets Go!
BLUES
"NO! Don't let the evil water kill my flowers!" yelled Caboose.
"What? Caboose, you are the craziest person ever. It hasn't rained here in like, a million years!" Church said. Church was used to Caboose calling rain "evil water", because he told the blues a very brief story of how rain once hit him in the eye when he visited France for "collage."
"WOO! It's RAINING." Sister said entering the room.
"Woah, Caboose was right! It IS raining!" Church said, looking out of the entrance.
"RAIN!"Tucker said, walking down the stairs. "Get some buckets!"
It was on the very rare occasion that it rained, the blues would get buckets, and collect free water. Normally, they had to PAY for water, since no one but Caboose was willing to get water from the spring in the caves, and he only used it for his flowers and cleaning Sheila.
They all set up their buckets, Caboose holding a 12 gallon lead bucket. Having super strength, he could carry this easily. Caboose shyly peeked out of the base, and ran out, set the bucket up, and darted like a cheetah back into the base.
"Oh boy, I hope the evil water didn't hit me."
REDS
"Hmmm... I smell... water... GRIF! DID YOU WET YOUR PANTS? Sarge yelled.
"NO! I'm past that point in life!"Grif retorted.
"Are you sure?"
"Yes!"
Simmons and Donut came in through the front, doused with rain.
"It's raining, sir." Simmons said.
"Oh, well... NO. I'm NOT sorry Grif!" Sarge muttered. "Go get some sniper bullets, Grif! Well shoot the Blue's buckets! BLAMO!"
Grif came back with 4 sniper bullets.
"This is ALL?" Sarge hollered.
"Yeah."Grif lazily replied.
Sarge cursed under his breath."let's go."
PING!
Sarge's first shot at the lead bucket merely dented it. "Dag nabbit!"
He aimed for the other buckets, but Tex and sister walked in front of them. "RAH! I CANT HIT GIRLS! GRIF! ORDER BUCKETS ON THE INTERNET! WERE STEALIN' THE BLUE'S IDEA!"
So, Howdya like my first chapter as a writer? Good? Horrible? Okay? Harsh feedback wanted, i need to improve! I know its realz short, but, ill make future chapters larger.
