Well, this is my first fan fiction poem; it is about Jak, and the citizens of Haven City, and how they treat him after Jak 3.

Enjoy.

Oh, and I don't own Jak and Daxter, not even if I tried

A Touch Too Dark

It was horrible, so horrible

Their Eyes, prying into his soul

The grand "Saviour" of the city

They all should be grateful

For ending the war that had no end

Yet they were all spiteful

Knowing his dark secret within

As he walks into the bar, everything is quiet.

Glasses are dropped, laughter is stopped

All eyes look and stare

The hero feels embarrassed

Feeling as if he is bare

Secrets revealed, scars not healed

All for the crowd to see

He walks through the slums, the port and the market

And everyone acts the same way

Children stop playing, adults stop trading

Then they all slip away

Children run indoors, crying for their mothers

Adults call their friends, searching for their brothers

Hoping that they have not met their end

Screams continuously fills his head

The metal chair becomes his bed

As all his cheery dreams disappear

The torture replays over and over again

The needles stab his darkened skin

Cries erupt from the pain

Struggling to keep him restrained

Death reeked from his body

Darkness was all in his eyes

The eco flashes like lightning

His skin and hair pale to a distinct grey

Black claws grows from his nails

Blocking the light of day

The devil laughs and keeps jeering

Killing with no feeling

Enjoying the screams of the prey

Children were crying, mothers were dying

All by the swipe of his hand

His lover stares at the wall

Asking why did he change

His cheer is gone, along with his smile

Despair and anger are found instead

Despite the growing light

The angel found inside

The people found only the worst of things

Blind to the hero that gave them life

So Ungrateful, So Spiteful

Those two they were to the heir

For now, nobody wanted him

Nobody cared for him

People leave and abandon him

To all, he was just a touch too dark

Yeah, that's about it, and this is the first time I've done it. Please Review.