Don't know what im doing. Guess imma just write this as it comes along.
Story prompts appreciated. :) Stil not allowed to own Divergent ;(
The rain began to pour down as the intiats lined up on the roof. Four led them to the edge of the tall building and looking down he began to speak.
" Now, I think you guys can guess what you get to do ? "
With big eyes the teens looked down beside him and swallowed hard. Shifting their gazes to the young intiate trainer they silently begged him with their eyes to let them be wrong.
" Yea, You guys get to jump. Sound fun? Well it should ...your dauntless now! "
Four couldnt help the small smirk when he saw their faces. He'd missed this, the look of terror on the new transfers faces. Now that he thought about it, he wished he could have been up here when Tris had jumped for the first time. Her face had probably been priceless.
"Alright! who's gonna go first? C'mon dont make me assign you numbers to get you going! Are you dauntless or what? Hell even the Amity aren't afraid of heights." His Voice softend with an urgency even he didnt fully understand.
"You guys have courage, you have to have it in order to leave your home, family and faction to come to an uncertain future. So far I still have all my transfers, thats a first in Dauntless history! Lets keep the ball rolling. Whoever cannot pass the training will be considerd factionless, so dont ruin everything over the first initial fear! "
To his surprise a stocky kid came walking from the back of the crowd. Four had been watching him for the last hour with a little contempt.
I mean come on, the guy was white and looked like a ghost already, how was he supposed to jump first ?
The young man pulled a Tris on four, with a sudden smile at the group the young man turned backwards and fell lightly from the roof. His face never once falterd or showed fear, instead it was almost like a relief for him. Four never heard a sound as the kid fell, untill the cheering and laughter began from down below!
The kid was Amity.
"Alright, who's next? "
Slowly the group all began to shuffle foreward. Next to step up was a bouncy girl who looked out of place for any of the factions. Her dark brown eyes sparkled as she grinned at him
"I guess i may as well throw myself off a building now as any other time. I have a feeling this will be one of the easier things we deal with? Thought as much"
As Four nodded at her towards the end of her speech she just stared at him and then jumped
This time screams on the way down and laughter when she hit.
Slowly one by one the teens began to jump off the building some screaming as they fell and others laughing. Most just grit their teeth and took the fall.
When all transfers had jumped Four gritted his teeth and jumped after them.
Damn he hated heights. He was gonna get Tris for making him take this part of training.
There we go ... Love it? Hate it? Review it! :P
Constructive critisism appreciated! (very simple almost boring story i know )
