This is my first fanfic. I made one before but it did not work

I hope you like it and any feedback will help me thank you :)

Chapter 1 The meeting

She is looks beautiful. The men want her and the woman want to be like her. She is strong…yea very strong. With pnk hair and very big hands she usually gets attenttion often.

But she has alot of problems although she is very popular. Why just why is she so upset about something.

In a road with not many people living,there is a bar called "Laughing barrel"

The barkeeper is Gragas the big,fat but strong men who loves just to drink with his hands and to fight.

In the bar right now…

Twitch:" Oi where is our keeper Gragas,I want another shot of this good beer."

Olaf:" Yeaa wheerrre iss he "

While trying to act cool Ezreal responds:" Pff you guys are annoying. He has to do something he said but he should be back soon so just stay calm."

So the fun just goes on but while the humans enjoy the party twitch senses something.

Twitch:" What is this? I smell something...something that smells so disgusting good.

God I hate it."

Twitch screams at the other guys with emotions which they have not seen a long time.

Silence

Ezreal:" So can you tell me why you screaming like that?Sigh even it is something evil we are strong aren't we?

When Ezreal walks in front of the entrance,the door gets smashed and he gets knocked back through the whole bar...his nose is bleeding.

Everyone is taking their weapons...waiting for the one who did this to Ezreal.

Ezreal's eyes open and he looks with a shocked face:" No way...how is this possible?

Tell me how...are you so beautiful?"

The guys are looking confused who to attack.

A woman walks in with a straight look angry...no pissed.

Unknown woman:" Why...is EVERY MAN SO WEAK?

Olaf responds drunk:"So you come here...destroy the bardoor,hurt our friend and you do not even say your name when you get in. You need to get punished woman I am sorry"

Ezreal at the same time:" No wait you are drunk Olaf. Do not harm her.

The atmosphere is intense. The feeling of a fight shivering down the body of everyone until

?:" Oi Oi what is going on here. I just went to talk to a friend for a minute and the bar looks like this...hopeless guys bahaha.

Ezreal:"Thank god you are there...please...this situation is not under control.

PLEASE GRAGAS!

So this is it. I think I will continue when I get feedback. Or just tell me if I should just stop.

Have a nice day :)