Hey people Bramble here just starting a new fanfic! I recently have been having no inspiration for my other story, or should I say strory. Hope you likeeeeee! This is going to be practice for writing STAAR so please tell me how to make it stronger, but be nice! Now to the story
Allegiances-
THUNDERCLAN-
Leader- Bramblestar- large dark brown tabby tom with piercing amber eyes
Deputy- Lionblaze- golden tabby tom with amber eyes (just until squirrelflight is out of the
Nursery)
Medicine Cat- Jayfeather- gray tabby tom with blind blue eyes Apprentice- Lilypaw
Warriors-
Brackenfur- golden brown tabby tom
Cloudtail- long furred white tom with blue eyes
Thornclaw- golden brown tabby tom
Sorreltail- tortoiseshell and white she cat with amber eyes
Leafpool- light brown tabby she cat with white patches and amber eyes, former medicine cat
Spiderleg- long legged black tom with a brown underbelly
Birchfall- light brown tabby tom
Whitewing- white she cat with green eyes
Berrynose- cream colored tom with longer fur
Hazeltail- small gray and white she cat with blue eyes
Mousewhisker- gray and white tom
Foxleap- reddish tabby tom Apprentice- Cherrypaw
Icecloud- white she cat with pale blue eyes
Toadstep- white tom with black patches Apprentice- Seedpaw
Rosepetal- creamy colored she cat with pinky amber eyes Apprentice- Molepaw
Blossomfall- tortoiseshell and white she cat with green eyes
Bumblestripe- pale gray tom with black stripes
Ivypool- silver and white she cat with dark blue eyes
Cinderheart- gray tabby she cat with pale silvery blue eyes
Dovewing- pale gray she cat with dark blue eyes
Queens-
Brightheart- white she cat with ginger patches and a green eye (mother to Cloudtail's kits,
Snowkit- white tom with amber eyes, Amberkit- gray she cat with white dapples and amber
eyes, and Dewkit- dark gray tom with light blue eyes)
Squirrelflight- ginger she cat with one white paw (mother to Bramblestar's kits, Sunkit- pale ginger tom with pale green eyes, Sparrowkit- dark brown tabby tom with piercing amber eyes exact copy of Bramblestar], Flarekit- deep ginger furred tom with pale amber eyes, and Tinykit- mall she cat with a mottled pelt of light gray and pale ginger with eyes the color of leaves)
Daisy- long furred cream she cat with blue eyes
Briarlight- dark brown she cat with amber eyes, paralyzed from the middle of her back down
Apprentices-
Cherrypaw- dark ginger she cat with green eyes
Molepaw- brown tom with cream patches
Lilypaw- dark brown tabby she cat with white patches and pale green eyes
Seedpaw- very pale ginger she cat with pale amber eyes
Elders-
Purdy- tan tabby tom, very plump
Graystripe- long furred gray tom
Millie- striped gray tabby she cat with silvery blue eyes
Dustpelt- dark tabby tom
Sandstorm- pale ginger she cat with green eyes
Shadowclan-
Leader- large white tom with one jet black fore paw
Deputy- Rowanclaw- bright ginger tom
Medicine Cat- small pale tabby tom
Riverclan-
Leader- Mistystar- gray she cat with blue eyes
Deputy- Reedwhisker- black tom with long whiskers
Medicine Cat- Mothwing- dappled golden she cat with amber eyes Apprentice- Willowshine
Windclan-
Leader- Onestar- light brown tabby tom
Deputy- Ashfoot- gray she cat with heather blue eyes
Medicine Cat- Kestrelflight- mottled gray and tan tom
Prolouge-
Shock rakes his body as Cherrypaw whispers in his ear,
"the kits are coming".
He orders his deputy to finish thunderclan's report to the rest of the clans, and then begins to race back towards the camp. His heart ordering his brain to ignore the pain from loose thorns or trailing brambles, causing little dribbles of blood tracing his path. Once he finally reached camp, Briarlight was guarding the entrance to the well woven nursery that his mate was inside.
Briarlight speaks, "Bramblestar, you know, mates can't enter the nursery until the kitting is over!"
As if in perfect timing Lilypaw steps out to say the kitting is over, and Bramblestar brushes past her to see his beautiful mate and their new kits. The soft sand beneth his paws, the scent of milk in his nose, and the beautiful sight of his mate with three tiny bodies suckling at her belly, he cant help but whisper,
"oh Squirrelflight, they're so perfect!"
"Shhhh… I don't want to address them until they have names, I already have his picked" she says flicking her tail to deep ginger tom, "Flarekit, after my father. And look that tom looks exactly like you! His name has to be perfect so… um… uh… you choose!"
"I am so flattered" he murmers unhappily, but with a glint in his eye so that his mate knows he's joking, "What about Sparrowkit, we always share a sparrow after something great happens. Only one more to go! I assume it's a tom also," he murmers disappointed.
"his fur is so pale, so we must name him after something bright! Let me think…. The stars are bright but Starstar, that cant happen." A long pause occurs, then she almost shouts, "SUNKIT! The sun is sooooo bright!"
"its perfect, just like you, but I am going to let you sleep now." He murmers, licking her on the cheek, but suddenly a strong ripple shoots through her body. Followed by a blood curdling shriek.
"JAYFEATHER!" Bramblestar screams not knowing what else to do, and the gray tabby tom was by his side in seconds.
"There is another kit that didn't want to come out with its siblings. These can be rough" Jayfeather says turning his blind gaze towards Bramblestar, "I am going to have to ask you to lea"
Jayfeather got cut off as Squirrelflight's muscles were rapidly contracting in order to get the kit out of her body. The unexpected pain knocks the she cat out as a small pool of blood starts to form, soaking into her rippling fur.
"Bramblestar, lets move these little ones over to my nest until this" Daisy mews she whisks her tail towards squirrelflights belly "little trouble maker is born."
Bramblestar nods, in shock, and picks up Sunkit by the scruff, as Daisy whisks up Flarekit and Sparrowkit. The pair calmly walks over to her nests and put the bundles down.
Bramblestar wakes up the next morning to Jayfeather shaking him, "Your mate wants to see you, and hurry up its past sunhigh."
So there cha go. This is going to be from the surprise kits pov, Tinykit. Just a warning, this story might contain some details not suitable for some people. I will say so in the author's note at the beginning if something is going to happen! Hope you likey!
~Bramble
