just wanna say this is the first time i am actually writing a fic, and i hope it's isn't that bad... please do give your comments, so i can improve ... thanks ... - DNA
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Watching You
"yu~~~~ki" shrieked the pink goofball before latching his arms round the blond's neck in a death grip
"baka"
"yu~~~~ki, stop being a meanie!" whined shuichi, "does it hurt to be a bit nicer?"
"yeah"
"fine ...carry on being mean" pouted shuichi, as he losen his hold on yuki. Deep down, he knew that yuki cared, just that the blonde is too sturborn to come to terms with it.
"want to take a bath with me?" asked shuichi, purposly lowering his voice to husky whisper.
"no ... "
crestfallen, shuichi got off the blonde and walked off silently not wanting yuki to see his tears...
"baka... tat's because i rather watch you..." yuki smirked.
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Yuki's POV
'know why i love to upset you just before u bath? coz only then you will take a long time soothing out the hurt in the hot water...'
'think i didn't notice the tears? think again ... i notice every little emotion on you... from ur loudest bawling to the smallest whimper you make when u snuggled up to me for warmth during the night..'
'do u know u caused the greatest reaction out of me, my pants tighten till it hurts whenever you talk in that husky voice of yours. for a moment i wanted to flip you on your back and fuck you senseless ...'
'i love your voice... i do especially when you moan, god .. it gets me high ... and hard ... real hard ... '
'watching you slowly revealed your naked little self, watching you lower you slim figure into the inviting water, watching you ... never have i ever been so jealous of anything at moment ... especially when you let out a soft sigh ... enjoying your bath right? as i am enjoying the view of you ... my naked shuichi'
Eyes never leaving the pink head in the bathtub, yuki slowly unzipped his own pants, releasing his aching organ out of its confinement.
'aaarrh ... that's better ...'
TBC
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yeah ... that's not the end of my fic yet ... just want to know if i am going on okay ... yeah ... please review me kay? thanks ~~
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Watching You
"yu~~~~ki" shrieked the pink goofball before latching his arms round the blond's neck in a death grip
"baka"
"yu~~~~ki, stop being a meanie!" whined shuichi, "does it hurt to be a bit nicer?"
"yeah"
"fine ...carry on being mean" pouted shuichi, as he losen his hold on yuki. Deep down, he knew that yuki cared, just that the blonde is too sturborn to come to terms with it.
"want to take a bath with me?" asked shuichi, purposly lowering his voice to husky whisper.
"no ... "
crestfallen, shuichi got off the blonde and walked off silently not wanting yuki to see his tears...
"baka... tat's because i rather watch you..." yuki smirked.
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Yuki's POV
'know why i love to upset you just before u bath? coz only then you will take a long time soothing out the hurt in the hot water...'
'think i didn't notice the tears? think again ... i notice every little emotion on you... from ur loudest bawling to the smallest whimper you make when u snuggled up to me for warmth during the night..'
'do u know u caused the greatest reaction out of me, my pants tighten till it hurts whenever you talk in that husky voice of yours. for a moment i wanted to flip you on your back and fuck you senseless ...'
'i love your voice... i do especially when you moan, god .. it gets me high ... and hard ... real hard ... '
'watching you slowly revealed your naked little self, watching you lower you slim figure into the inviting water, watching you ... never have i ever been so jealous of anything at moment ... especially when you let out a soft sigh ... enjoying your bath right? as i am enjoying the view of you ... my naked shuichi'
Eyes never leaving the pink head in the bathtub, yuki slowly unzipped his own pants, releasing his aching organ out of its confinement.
'aaarrh ... that's better ...'
TBC
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yeah ... that's not the end of my fic yet ... just want to know if i am going on okay ... yeah ... please review me kay? thanks ~~
