Hey I 'm new at this but I have this dream which, thanks to my english teacher turned into a story. please review this story.
I'm really detailed so it might be boring, but I have to say this:
I have created e few characters and one of them is the main person, Vivi Uzenza.
don't own naruto, but i do own some characters i created including Vivi Uzenza.
there is some stuff added to it like Michael Jackson, whatever i say that he does in the story is made up don't know his personal life, twilight, and any other shows, books, and people.
don't hate
it's a love story between Itachi and Vivi, but it won't show till late
it's about vivi when she was 2 years old she was accused for murdering her parents and was kicked out from Konoha and she is a half human half vampire not like Renesmee she was created, and you'll find out more in the story.
Please review and tell me if I should write it.
Oh, and the title I'm not sure of yet but I think it might be called "Don't Forget"
I chose this cause it seems like, years later, Konoha forgot Vivi.
Itachi's mine and don't forget it...sorry obsessed with him.
it's mostly about Vivi so there are some parts i've added to it so when it goes to another scene it's because it's a part i've added or if i want to put a scene you already know.
wish this was the beginningj of the story but didn't want to explain this on the same page as the story.
