Hey people here i am with my next story, so heres the deal im debating making this be a one-shot but i might not, so i need some feed back so i can know if you want me to continue or not
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P.O.V. TIGRESS
I was walking down the valley when i heard some bunnies shriek, so i decide to do what i would do any other issue. As i round the corner i see a Panther talking to some bunnies, they obviously looked afraid. I throw a punch straight at his head looking for a knock out. His head moved suddenly and avoided the Punch. "You know whisker's, it's not polite to attack someone when you think they can't hear you" I was taken aback for a second, one for the fact that he knew i was attacking him, two for the fact that he just insulted her. I growl lowly. "You know that it's not polite to insult an enemy you know absolutely nothing about?" i say, "maybe he wont have anything witty to say this time."I think to myself "Well master Tigress i know allot about you, one the fact that you train at the jade palace, two you lived at boa goo orphanage until Shifu taught you to control your temper. and third i know that you will not further pursue me, unless your stupid that is" Now i was in utter amazement, first off at the fact that he continued to insult me, and second at the fact that he already knew all of that about me. "What makes you think I'm Master Tigress?" i fire back at him.
"Simple you don't smell. The dragon warrior stinks something fowl. Master Mantis smells like bean buns. Master Monkey smells like bamboo. Master Crane smells like well avian. Shifu smell like sandal wood incense. Master Viper smell like lotus blossoms. And you, you don't have a smell, well a smell iv ever noticed before, that why your easiest to find." The panther replies voice showing no emotion. "And how would you know our separate scents?" i reply I'm staring to get slightly concerned for this Panther. "Well that's the easy part, i was born with an unusually strong nose, and i have almost photographic memory so all that iv really had to do was get near you warriors once and problem solved." he says.
"Well give me one reason why i shouldn't still smash your face in?"i say, i really didn't like this guy, he seemed to calculating as if to anticipate my next words. "Because the Super intend-int has hired me specifically to work here and do what you guys can't, and when it comes down to it the super intend-int didn't even hire me one of his secretaries did it...from what iv been hearing he does nothing"He says becoming slightly off track. "So Woo hired you? then you must have received some sort of confirmation, and secondly what do you mean you were sent here to do what we can't?" I say an edge to my voice very clear. "Well the answer is very clear. You see I'm a mercenary when it comes down to it, i just get the job done, emotions can wait." He say's voice calm "So you think just because your some fancy mercenary you deserve our respect and coöperation?" i ask, now i was really starting to not like this guy.
He turns quick as lightning, and i see a flash, next thing i know there's a very sharp-looking serrated blade at my throat. "No, that's supposed to get your respect and coöperation, and if it doesn't well" he sighs, and as fast as the blade had come it was stuck into a nearby wall, and it was stuck in very good. "Then in sure we can make out our differences." he smiles and conceals the blade back into his vest. I look at him again, just this time not with dislike but with a slight sense of respect before i could even flinch he had, had a blade to my throat. "So, you know my name, so its only fair if i know your's since we'll be fighting together." I say semi-friendly. "Well i don't know the name i was born with. So when i was young i called myself 水銀. meaning QuickSilver. and it's just kind of stuck since then." he says with a sigh. "So,if you just get the job done nothing else then why smile?" i ask, it seems as though that part about him kind of reminded me of someone i used to know. He looks at me with an emotionless expression and cold dead eye's "Believe it or not looking around like this is not good for business" he says with a cold hardened voice.
"Like i said master Tigress a smile is good for business. Just as long as the job get's done" he finishes voice calm, but not friendly. "We should probably go and check in with the rest of the masters and master Shifu to tell him of your orders." I say, careful not to sound threatening. The last thing i need is this guy to feel threatened. "Of course." he say calmly, when he walks out i get a glance at a few hard spots of his vest, by the looks of it, this guy carries allot more than just a sword with him. We walk in silence for a few minutes till we reach the stairs. "So, how many blades do you have in that vest?" he looks at me with some what excited eye's "do you really what to know?" he asked with an almost slightly childish tone of voice. I look at him, he is in a lot of ways how i used to be, but in some ways he seems so much worse. "yes, i wouldn't have asked if i hadn't wanted an answer." i reply semi annoyed. he looks at me face calm.
"Twenty seven."he just keeps walking."Wait Twenty seven blades, that's only one vest though?!" i exclaim, how in the world could he have even managed to get all of those in a vest, let alone leave them hidden. "Most of them are needles or throwing blades of some sort or the other, i really only have about three actual close combat blades, in the vest." he finishes gesturing to the first blade he pulled, and two other's on his sides. "So, how long have you been a mercenary?" he looks at me. "Since i was ten years old." me expression as you could probably guess went from curious to 'what the hell?' he notices my expression. "Well unlike you i didn't have a master or an orphanage so, i found work, at first all i really did was go and look for kids that were missing, but as i grew older they started having me do more dangerous things, and now fifteen years later here i am." he opens his arms wide. "Here we are. The Jade Palace."
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