In this story I decided to give a sickness to Donnie. I will reveal said sickness in chapter 2. Until then I will leave you guessing. Guess in your review so I can see if I made it to obvious. Please review and follow. Love the support. Now to the story…..


Raph's P.O.V.

Donnie has never had the strongest immune system. Due to a little more exposure to the mutagen than the rest of us, he has never been the strongest. He always gets at least half a dozen colds in the winter. Because of this we just didn't think much about his latest sickness. How we would regret that.

While we were training one day Donnie seemed unfocused. But he also looked slightly in pain. I just brushed it off thinking he had stayed up all night in his lab again. What a fool I was.

After training Leo asked Donnie if he was ok. Donnie said he was fine and just had a headache. But when I looked at him he looked a little pink.

"Donnie, you sure you're ok?" I asked "You look a little pink"

I then proceeded to feel his forehead. It was as hot as pizza straight out of the oven!

"Brainiac, you're burning up!"

"Really?" he replied "I feel cold"

"Why don't you take a nap. You should feel better for patrol tonight"

"Ok, but get me 2 hours before so I can work on the ShellRaiser"

"Fine, just get some rest"


Donnie's P.O.V.

I know Raph told me to get some rest, but I was so cold that my shivering kept me up. And to make matters worse, I felt like my breakfast was going to come up at any moment. My back ached and I had a really dry throat. I kept coughing and could not stop. When the coughing did stop I finally fell asleep.


Leo's P.O.V.

I knew Donnie was not well when training started and he seemed tired, and more than usual. When Raph had him go to bed for a couple hours I thought "Oh it's just a little cold, nothing that out of line". How wrong I was.

After Raph got Donnie up so he could work on the ShellRaiser, I looked and saw that he looked worse than before. He was sweating but shivering at the same time. And when April came by after school to train with Master Splinter, he didn't give his usual reaction to seeing her.

"Hey guys" said April.

"Oh, hey April" replied Donnie, very lazily.

About 10 minutes after April got there Donnie ran out of the lab to the bathroom holding his mouth. A minute later we smelled vomit. When we went to check on Donnie though, we found him on the floor, unconscious.

"Mikey, go get Master Splinter and April!" I said

As Mikey ran off to get them, Raph and I carried him to his lab and set him on the exam table.

"My sons," said Master Splinter "what happened?"

"I don't know Master Splinter" I replied "Donnie ran out the lab earlier holding his mouth. When we smelled the vomit we went to check on him. That's when we found on the floor, unconscious"

"Let me check him out" said April

After several look overs and some blood tests April got the results.

"What's wrong with Donnie?" asked Mikey, with fear in his eyes.


To be continued…


So what do you think is wrong with Donnie? Will reveal that in the next chapter. Please review and tell me how to make my stories better. In your review if you can guess what his sickness is you will get a shoutout in this story! A small part but still… will try to update by next week.