hello my fellow reader's and here is a new story/book and i know that some of my reader's think that i need to concentrate on my other books but i say to thee i will finish them when i choose because a writter finnishes his book precisely when he means to not before and not after.
Garra was staring at the setting sun in his home village and was contemplating weather or not to become a ninja like his brother and knew he had an uncommon affinity to sand but there were no one alive who knew the art he also knew if there were they would be unwilling to train him or if they were they weren't going to be in his village.
"Hey Garra get over here it's dinner time."Boomed a voice not to far behind knew who it was it was his brother kankuro(Please help i don't know the exact spelling for the name?)it was really easy to identify his voice since it sounded like he hadn't drank water for days and instead drank sand and the fact that he was going into puberty so his voice cracked every time he spoke.
"Ok I'll be right there just give me a minute."Spoke Garra in a voice that sounded like it should have belonged to an a minute later Garra was at the dinner table waiting to be served was wearing his usual outfit witch consisted of a loose sleeved shirt thin pants and a hat witch was red like the rest of his brother on the other hand had a one piece black uniform with a circle in the chest area it was outlined in white and one half was the color of sand and the rest was also sister Temari had a battle dress on(I don't know the Japanese name for it) and a battle fan on her back.
"Hello Garra it's nice to see you."Said a voice more raspy thank kanuro' was lady Chio in her usual black dress (Or is it grey?)."How are you Garra?You rarely talk anymore."
"I'm fine lady Chio."Replied Garra.
"Ah Garra hows my son doing?"Said Garra's father behind him while scaring him.
"(Wait my father might be able to teach me how to use my sand)good father will you teach me how to use my sand affinity.I know its not gold dust but i thought since its basically the same thing that you could still teach me how to use it."Garra had said all this in a rush and was still able to make what he said coherent and understandable.
"Hmm let me think about it for a bit and I'll let you know if I can ok son."
"Ok father."
After dinner was over lady Chio took Kankuro for his usual lessons on went to bed after doing the dishes with his 's father went to bed as the morning Garra was going to go ask his father if he was taught by the third Kazikage to use his gold dust.
Ok people i know it wasn't a long chap but ive been going a little bit slow on this one so tell me how it is what i can do better and what you expect in the next thats a rap everyone go home and get some sleep.