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Authors Note: This is my first story that I put on Plz review and tell me what I did wrong and what u liked.

Ral was a 14 year old boy, with black hair and brown eyes. He was a normal person in some ways, but he also had some strange physical appearance like his ears were pointed and he could move faster then a normal human.

His father had left their family of three kids and a wife for another woman. Ral barley knew anything about his father, just things he had heard from the locals. Whenever he asked his mom about these 'things' she just said "I can't talk about it now, ask me later". Yet whenever he asked her, she would change the topic. Some times he wondered if his dad was a hated person because no one ever talked about him.

"Come on fish, get in the net" said Ral to no one in particular. He was fishing in the lake right then for food. Yet the only thing that did was make the fish move away and him get more disappointed.

"Oh man looks like it's going to be another day without food," he thought. As Ral was about to leave something caught his eye. It was a golden, oval shaped stone.

"Wow, its beautiful," thought Ral. "Maybe its worth something?" So he carefully picked it up and put it in his backpack. Then he packed up everything else and left.

Ral's house was a few miles from home so it usually took him some time to get there. In that time he liked to enjoy the nature and animals around him. Usually on his walk he saw birds and other kind of animals. He had heard rumors that some people sometime ago had seen a dragon out there.

Soon he got village named Kalioharl. The village had around a 75 people living in it. Ral didn't have a lot of friends because of how he looked. The kids in the village called him an elf and other things about him not being human. His only friend was his little brother and sister who looked like him and could move like him. Soon he got to house and went in.

"Mom I'm home!" shouted Ral. His house was one story, with a living room, kitchen, one bedroom and an out house. In the living room the kids usually played games or when they had guests they would talk in the living room. The kitchen was where his mom made the food and the bedroom was where the whole family slept.

His mom came out of the kitchen and said, "Hi honey, did you catch anything."

"No, sorry mom, but I did find this stone" Ral said showing her the stone. She let out an amazed gasp.

"Do you think it's valuable?" asked Ral.

"No I don't think so honey….. I think you should keep it for now" said his mom clearly shaken. It was clear that his mom was hiding something but he didn't want to exploit it because his mom was already in a bad condition.

"Mom are you okay?" said Ral. His mother was shaking and it looked it like she was really scared.

"Fine honey, just thinking of a memory." said his mom. "Well since you didn't catch any fish were going to have to not eat anything for dinner today, go tell Jack and Kim" said his mom.

Jack and Kim were his little brother and sister. Ral went into the living room and saw that Jack was playing with a stick pretending it was a sword. Kim was using a sling shot to fire stones at a bull's eye she made. Jack, 9 years old, always dreamed of becoming a warrior and he also always trained with sticks pretending they were swords. He was nice but when he got mad he was a force to reckon with. Kim, 8 years old, was a soft hearted girl and always gave things to anybody who needed them. She also loved archery and practiced it whenever she had the chance to. She was one of the best archers in the village considering her age.

"Guys, today we cant eat dinner since I didn't catch anything, sorry," said Ral to Kim and Jack.

"Ah man, I was really hungry…" said Jack. Then they heard a yell and the sound of clashing weapons. Jack quickly went outside to see soldiers coming through the entrance looking as they could kill anybody in there way.

"Jack and Kim stay here!" shouted Ral over the sound of people shouting. Then a thought struck him, where was his mom?

"MOM! MOM?! Where are you?" shouted Ral. Ral quickly went outside and started looking for his mom. He saw people from the village he knew getting killed by one slash from the soldiers. People were running and screaming for their loved ones.

"MOM!!!" shouted Ral. His eyes were frantically looking around to see any sign of his mom. As he was looking for his mom he saw a soldier falling down. He went over to the soldier and took his sword.

Ral saw a soldier about to kill a little girl. Ral ran over there and right before the sword hit the girl he put his sword in the way and blocked the attack. The warrior started attacking him with full force.

Ral then felt something; he was loosing control over his body. His body started fighting with amazing speed and grace. He felt like he was watching the whole scene happening form somewhere far away. He saw that his body was fighting soldiers and killing them easily. Then suddenly he saw a soldier coming up from behind him but it was too late. Suddenly he felt everything go black.