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Chapter 1

"Please!" I begged. "Just please! Let me go! I've been here for five years! Quit hurting me and let me go!" crying was never going to work, it hadn't since I was eleven. I'm sixteen now. He didn't have a name that I knew of. He just kidnapped me when I went to get the mail on my eleventh birthday. I didn't know what to do. I pulled against my chains and cried.
"Oh shut up girl! No one can hear you!" He screamed in my face. "Just go take your shower" Shower time is the only time I ever got alone. After I finished up, I sat down in the basin and cried more. I finally stood up and wrapped a towel around my self and started drying my hair with another. He banged on the door and yelled at me to hurry up, which of course I didn't. I took my time and went slow. I could hear him yelling at me but I tuned it out. Not ten minutes later he barged in and pointed a stick that could literally kill people, I had seen it before, at me. He kicked me in the stomach and I fell to the floor. He proceeded to kick me and pummel me.
"You should learn to listen to me girl!" he screamed at me as I whimpered on the floor. He raised his stick and muttered something and I began to feel the worst unmanageable pain in my life. More painful than anything else he had put me though. I heard a high keening noise that turned out to be me.
Just then there was a booming at the door and a green light. He fell upon my broken and bloodied body, causing more pain. I screamed again.
"Son! Get her while the rest of us sweep the place!" some man yelled. A boy about my age, maybe older, ran over to me and pushed the body off me. He proceeded to sit on the floor and pull me into his lap. I began to cry uncontrollably. I felt him shifting underneath me and then his coat was around my shoulders. In the back of my mind I realized all I had on was a ripped up towel. At this point I didn't care.
"Shh. Shh. it's okay, we're going to get you out of here." He told me as he picked me up. Wrapping my arms around his neck and burying my head into his neck, we left the room. He carried me outside and sat me down.
"Can you ride a broom?" his father asked me. I saw about six brooms, one for each of the people who had come. I stared wide-eyed as the boy sat on the broom and pulled me into his lap. I wrapped my arms around his waist and hide my face into his chest.
"Don't look down." he whispered into my ear. "When we get you back to my house we will explain everything to you." I nodded into his chest. "Do you talk at all?" another nod. "Why don't you then?" his voice slipped into a smoother tone as we started getting off the ground. My grip tightened on him. I shook my head. "Are you really scared and overwhelmed right now?" I nodded He cleared his throat and used a tone I've never heard before. I tone that sounded like caring and loving. "What's your name, honey?"
I looked up at him and stared into his surprisingly cold gray eyes. Even cold, they were brilliant. "Sarpele Mortii Tod" I whispered. "And you?"
"Draco Malfoy" He announced proudly. I bit my lip for a second.
"Snake, serpent, serpentine..." I muttered.
"What?" Draco asked.
"Our names, they both have to do with snakes. In full, mine means Snake Death Death. The first two are in Romanian and the last one is in German. Yours would be... Draco Reacredint. "
"How do you know these things?" he chuckled.
"When I was eleven I liked studying these things." A tear dropped down my cheek. "Do I get to see my parents again?"
He stiffened. "Oh... well then...about that..."
My breath caught and I knew what he was about to say. My parents were dead. I tightened my grip on him, as if it where the only thing from keeping me here, and wept. I didn't want to believe it for one second. I cried my self to sleep, but unlike the times before, someone was taking care of me.

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