Disclaimer: I don't own Beyblade
Long story short, I am re-making all my stories since they're a good four years old. And they are all poorly written. So, I am going to try and fix them up. Read on
Enjoy!
Chapter One: Vacation
There were about a million of them crawling. They were crawling from the tips of his toes, slowly inching their way up. They left a dark brown slippery trail. They were planning to suffocate Tyson. They were planning to torture Tyson. They were planning to make Tyson eat them. They were chocolate covered strawberries.
"No! No! You can't--" Tyson pleaded, "You all can't do this to me. I want to eat you all, but I just can't!"
The strawberries chanted, "Eat all of us or suffer!"
"I said I can't! Stop crawling all over me!" Tyson screamed. "I can't take this! Someone, anyone, help me!"
"No one will save you. We are going to be the death of you," the strawberries continued.
Tyson finally gave up and plucked one off his knee and slowly brought it to his mouth with hesitation.
"Go to hell strawberries!" Tyson roared as he sprang up from his seat.
Tyson was breathing heavily and glared at the first thing he saw, which was Hilary's fist.
"Tyson, you are so rude! Mr. D is talking about something very important and all you care about is sleeping!" Hilary scolded.
Tyson didn't exactly comprehend anything Hilary said because his head was throbbing from the punch Hilary threw.
'Who the hell taught her to hit like that?' Tyson wondered. 'What was I doing before this anyway?'
Tyson sank back to his seat and looked around. Hilary returned to her blue arm chair that to the right of Tyson. Kenny was sitting on Hilary's right side. Max was seated on Mr. Dickinson's last office chair to Tyson's left. Ray was leaning on Max's chair since there were only four chairs available. Kai was just hunched to the side looking out of the only window in the tiny office.
Ray coughed a bit to bring everyone out of their startling surprise of Tyson's outbreak. "Uh, Mr. D you were saying something about an International tournament?" Ray asked.
"Oh, yes about that. There is a private International tournament--" Mr. D started.
Once Tyson registered the word 'tournament', he was wide awake. "There's a new tournament? Yes! I've been waiting for this for the longest time. Finally, Dragoon hasn't had a good clean and even match in a while." Tyson said with his cocky voice.
"I'm afraid, Tyson, it's not one of those easy ones. There are only going to be a certain amount of teams. Like I said, it's an International private tournament, with highly skilled players. You all are not just facing the usual people this time. I heard the home team of where the tournament is being held, is really good. They haven't lost any challenge." Mr. D warned Tyson.
"Well, they better be ready, because we are going to be the first people they are going to lose to," Tyson scoffed.
"If they haven't lost a challenge yet, why have we not played against them before? If they were that great, they would have come to our world tournament." Kai voiced his thoughts for the first time of the meeting.
"Good question Kai, but we honestly don't know why they didn't attend." Mr. Dickinson replied and scratched his bald head to ponder a bit more.
"Mr. D, where is the tournament held?" Max asked excitedly.
"That's the interesting part of it, in the Hawaiian Islands. Honolulu, Hawaii in the United States," Mr. D answered with large smile that took a good ten years off his face.
"Hawaii? I always wanted to go there! I hear the beaches are amazing and the sites are just gorgeous. I had a pen pal that lived there once and she said it was all just breath taking!" Hilary shrieked and rambled on with a dreamy face.
"Hawaii?" all the boys chorused except Kai.
'Hawaii?' Kai thought instead.
"Yes. It's interesting because they never hosted an international tournament. But it's true. If you all get permission and are free, we will be leaving in about a week. When we arrive there, we will be staying at the Ala Moana Hotel. While you settle in, you have about more than two weeks to practice before the preliminaries. You all could go site seeing before the tournament starts as well," Mr. Dickinson explained.
'I don't think I'll be able to go. I promised my mom I would go to London with her this summer,' Max thought sadly.
'This is going to be a great tournament, I wonder if White Tigers are attending' Ray thought.
'The food better be good there! And not serve it in leaves or anything,' Tyson thought. (A/N: someone from the mainland asked me if we lived in shacks and hunted for pigs when it was dinner time. Hell no! We don't live in shacks nor do we hunt pigs for dinner!! We have houses, plates, utensils, markets, and technology thank you very much! )
'There better be worthy opponents there to challenge' Kai thought with a strange nagging feeling in the back of his mind.
'My friend also told me there are a lot of hot guys there!' Hilary thought with famous Hilary evil grin.
'At least the tournament will have great weather forecast to beyblade in. I get to gather even more different styles of blading!' Kenny thought.
The week passed by really slow, due to everyone's giddiness and excitement. But sad news was revealed that Max would not be able to accompany them on this tournament because of his promise with his mother. But that week consisted of a lot of planning for certain people like Hilary because she had a problem of 'packing lightly'. Kenny was fussing over which equipment to bring just incase any repairs might be needed. Ray was just excited to travel to a place he never been before. Kai on the other hand wasn't too sure about the trip after the meeting.
'Dranzer, why do I have this nagging feeling?' Kai pondered while walking out of Mr. Dickinson's office.
Time will only tell… Dranzer mysteriously answered.
'I really do hate it when you do that,' Kai mentally sighed.
No answer from his life time friend.
But time still kept going and eventually, it was time to start a new adventure—that is, in a completely new setting.
"Thank for you patience, once everyone is seated, we will go over safety procedures." The flight attendant informed over the intercom in the airplane.
"Tyson, why are you bringing your own food? Are you crazy? You can't bring them on the airplane!" Hilary scolded Tyson.
"They are just back up food, Hilary! What if they start serving us food we don't even know about? And I am not going to starve there!" Tyson protested as he took the window seat.
"Tyson don't be dull. Of course there is food we may not know of but, it's a great learning experience!" Kenny said while sitting in the same row, but in a different column.
The plane ride pretty quiet because Tyson was already in dream land before the plane even took off, despite his complaining of 'no good food in Hawaii'.
At the airport in Hawaii
"The ride wasn't that bad was it?" Ray asked ask he stretched out his sore limbs from sitting too long.
"Boys, you will catch this shuttle bus that will escort you to the hotel while I take care of luggage and the hotel rooms. Wait for me in the lobby of the hotel. You can look around but don't get lost," Mr. D said before he left in a separate vehicle.
The boys including Hilary got on the shuttle. Once the shuttle started picking up more passengers, there was a little bit of a commotion because there were some fans that recognized the Bladebreakers. The commotion started when a die hard fan nearly fainted because she brushed up against Kai's shoulder. Of course Kai simply did not care at all and gave his I-don't-care-if-you-even-died look; which sadly did not scare the crazy obsessed fan away, to Kai's disappointment.
Finally, they got to the Ala Moana Hotel. They walked around the hotel and there was a lounge and a mini bar with a piano. There were also mini stores with souvenirs and other items. The front desk was the first section the Bladebreakers saw. There was also a restaurant called Plantation Café, first found my Tyson, which served buffets on Friday and Saturday nights. Right next to the restaurant there was a night club with their name 'Rumors' in big white letters beaming in the club entrance.
"Whoa! This is amazing! It's so big! This hotel can sure fit a lot of things, different stores, the lobby, a lounge called Ma-hi-na Lounge, and a restaurant," Ray commented while looking around.
Tyson and the gang just sat on the couches that were so comfortable. Tyson was even about to lie down, but there was a high pitch scream. The gang jerked their head toward where the small shops were located in the back part of the lobby.
But when they saw where it came, they wished they hadn't.
There was a mob of girls pointing and yelling, "The Bladebreakers, oh my goodness!"
The Bladebreakers felt true fear for they did not have good experiences with a mob of hungry teenagers. Their last experience left Ray without precious shirt, Tyson, with his left arm sleeve ripped off, and poor Kenny, his glasses were trampled over, and Kai, who suffered the worse, lost his right shoe, left back pocket, and his torn shirt had at least five different groups of lip glosses kissed all over imaginable. Basically it was a horrible memory that the Bladebreakers did not want to re-live.
"Let's get their autograph! And we might even get a kiss!" one of them shouted over the rest of girls.
They all charged in a unified group that would put army groups into shame.
"Run! We are going to turn in to rag dolls, again, if we don't get a move on!!" Ray yelled while running away from the mob of girls.
"We are right behind you!" Tyson shouted fearing for his life.
They ran but the girls just followed where ever they went. Ray led them toward the mini stores. But what was the use? None of them knew where they were going. They just arrived there for Christ sake and did not know where the hell they were going.
Doubling back through the mini stores, Ray spotted an 'Exit' sign.
"God loves us! This has to be a sign from him. Oh--- praise-- the Lord!" Tyson praised with golden smile as he sandwiched the door knob between him and the door.
"Just shut up already and open the damn door!" Kai snapped as glanced at the love sick mob gaining speed.
Tyson wrapped his shaking fingers around the cold gold knob and tried to turn it.
Tyson's smile dropped in .03 seconds.
Kai popped a vein.
Ray just stood there dumbfounded.
"Need some help?" a voice asked.
Kai jerked back ready to fight off the mob but only saw… one girl?
"Who are you? Don't you dare try and go for my left back pocket!" He warned sharply with eyes that could kill.
"I would be the last girl to try even reach there. Trust me… unless you and your friends rather be eaten alive, that's fine with me too" she suggested breathlessly while shaking a pair of keys in the group's vision.
"Open. Door. Now!" Kai threatened as he took a step closer.
"Fine, ruin the fun then. Gosh!" the girl muttered as she unlocked the exit door.
They all went through the door and closed it before any of the girls in the mob tracked them down. While all of them catching their breath, Kai just stared at the girl who helped them.
"Are you just going to stand there and stare at me or are you going to thank me?" she asked irritated. She didn't even look back but knew Kai was staring at her.
She had dark brown hair down going down her spine above her waist by an inch or so. She had brown eyes as well, but nothing special about them. She was wearing the souvenir store's uniform that was plain, but what attracted his attention was her thin silver chain bracelet that seemed to glow but died down.
"Thank you for saving us back there. I guess we owe you one. What is your name?" Ray asked with a warm smile.
"I don't need to tell you anything. And you don't owe me anything. I just helped you so you guys would be in one piece. I just couldn't let the opponent be in pieces, now that wouldn't be fair now will it?" she scoffed with a smirk. She started walking away, but Tyson grabbed from behind on her right arm to ask where the exit led them to, but, in a second Tyson was on the ground. In a swift movement her left clasped Tyson's hand jerked out of his hold and hurled him over her shoulder.
"Do not touch me," She glared at Tyson, "down the alley and take a right and walk straight ahead and the front of the hotel will be on your right."
"Thanks, I guess," Hilary said slightly confused from this girl's random mood swings.
They all turned to Tyson who was on the ground rubbing his head. "Do all girls in Hawaii flip people over for no reason?" Tyson growled.
"I am Silver and don't worry, I'll see you soon," she said in a cold voice as she went back into the souvenir shop.
Nobody said anything. They all just looked at each other.
'Who is she? She flipped Tyson as if it was the natural thing to do,' Ray though.
'What did she mean she will see us again?' Hilary thought.
'She flipped Tyson with ease, one point for her. But did the bracelet glow?' Kai thought
'Ouch! That hurt!' Tyson thought.
'I'll look her up in my data base and see what I can find on 'Silver'.' Kenny thought.
Okay, I just fixed up that chapter. I hope it's better than last time. Now, I have to move on fixing the next two chapters. Please do review
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