Draco:
"Now who will join me?" said the Dark Lord.
Everyone went stone cold as they faced the Death Eaters.
"Draco," said Lucius, "Draco come here."
Draco's teeth clenched together. He knew all eyes were now on him and he had to make a choice. His mother spoke too.
"Draco," she said, "come."
His mind was reeling. Disobey his family and do the right thing but probably die or obey and live an evil life with the Dark Lord?
He started to shake. Then he muttered something that nobody could understand.
"Draco," his mother said a bit more forcefully, "come here!"
Draco spoke a bit louder, "no."
Voldermort's face darkened. "What did you say, Draco?"
"He said no," said Luna.
"No!" said his father.
"That's right," Luna said again, "he said no."
Draco's father was furious. "Silence, girl. Let Draco speak."
Draco's head was bowed in shame but he spoke. "No, father."
A vein stood out on Lucius's neck "Fine," he said icily, "but don't come crying back to me."
Draco's eyes fell to the ground at the idea of his father leaving him. He felt a touch on his shoulder and looked to his left. A girl from Ravenclaw laid her hand on his shoulder as if to support him. Normally he would have swatted it away and told her to back off. But at this point he was too exhausted and drained to care. There was also a very small part of him that welcomed the supportive gesture.
"Last chance, Draco," Voldemort said, "stay with your petty friends and die or come with me and rule the magical world."
At this offer Draco did nothing but look down at the floor. Then another voice spoke up.
"No one would ever want to join you," said Neville, "even if it does mean living." He moved infront of Draco as if to form a shield.
"That's right," said Luna as she moved next to Neville.
In a matter of seconds Draco Malfoy was surrounded by his class mates of Hogwarts.
Draco: (after the battle is done and Voldemort is dead)
Draco Malfoy sat quietly on the half destroyed Hogwarts bridge. He had almost come to terms with the fact that he would probably never see his parents again and he would go through his final year at Hogwarts without any meaning. He fiddled with his wand.
Then something warm and gentle touched his shoulder and he looked up. It was the same girl from before. She said nothing. She only sat beside him and gave him a warm and understanding smile. After that she hugged him.
Draco didn't push her off and tell her he didn't need her pity like he normally would have done. Like before, he was too tired and drained to keep up his usual tough guy image. Instead he felt comfort in her hug and rested his head on her shoulder.
Gradually, his arms came around her and he bit his lip, because it was all he could do to keep from crying.
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