Just something that I wrote and I thought I could fit pretty well with Mia. She's a little girl (also why the grammar may not be perfect) off to visit a friend and she's getting ready to go. 'Right then here we go…
Make Over
I admire myself in the mirror. I see my mother do this over and over again. I turn my face to the side. Somehow, though, this didn't look exactly right. My cherry lips, peach cheeks, and blue berry eye coloring thing made me look like a porcelain doll, a porcelain doll that had been left outside in the rain and wind. My dark chocolate hair was up and held with several clips but some strands fell out, framing my face. I purse my lips to try and even out the sticky lip stuff but it only resulted in it spilling over the edge of my lips into my mouth, leaving a foul taste, and making my smile seem completely lopsided.
I hope my mother comes back soon; I've a ball to go to at the kingdom not far from my own.
I look down to where my kitten, Fat Louie, was looking up at me with large curious eyes.
"You're right, what I need is a gown."
Author's Note:
Again another piece that I wrote for my English Honors class and I thought I'd put it on FF. Please no reviews about the grammar O.K. It's like that for a reason.
Yours Forever,
SpiritoftheBlackRose