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THIRD PERSON VIEW
The year is 2277 its been 200 years since the world went in to a nuclear war. Anyone not inside of a vault was incinerated upon impact or mutated into something of the unknown. As time went on people in the vaults began to wonder what had become of the outside world. People opened their vaults some were meet by extreme amounts of radiation, or meet by hordes of the "undead" at least they seemed that way. The people that survived the attacks and radiation radioed the other vaults to tell of what they saw. People began to fear the new world and never opened their vault doors other began to wonder if the "ghouls" as they called them had a reason behind the attacks or if they were going off of instinct, and if the whole world was affected. They began to design suits to explore the world some were gigantic and completely sealed you away from the world while other were no more than a radiation suit with an exoskeleton. As people explored they came upon gigantic creatures that looked as if they were not from earth the "kaiju" as they called them were timid and avoided people. From time to time people would find groups of survivors no-one had a true reason but everyone seemed to want to get away from the coasts. As time went on people discovered that most of the world was not destroyed but simply untouchable they began to rebuild the world while others took power and enacted kingdoms. The worlds technology was the same but kings and queens made laws and simply controlled others. People tryed to start revolutions but were stoped and suffed serious consequences for trying to overthrow their kingdoms. Most didnt mind the royals as they were nice, but there is always conflict. The kaiju became less timid over time not really bothering people but from time to time rampaging through the kingdoms. The kaiju are massive and can easily destroy a kingdom within a few days. People began to riot and complain about having to rebuild their homes and places of business so all the kingdoms united to come up with a solution. The solution being gigantic mech suits called Jeagers useful but slow moving and stiff all analog controlled as more kingdoms were damaged they made digital controls that made the suits faster. They held off the kaiju when they came to close to the city's. People began to congregate in large city's around the ruins of northern Texas and southern Oklahoma these lands were not hit as hard as the rest of the world because it is mostly farm land. The attacks became more frequent and the kaiju became larger, so the Jeagers became larger as this happened the scientists realized they needed two pilots to handle the systems in the Jeagers. An Eastern hemisphere (left) and a Western hemisphere (right) all of this happened a long time ago we have just been fending them off since