Yay my first FMA fanfic! :D Please let me know if I get something wrong and I'll fix it as soon as possible.

Disclaimer: I don't own Fullmetal alchemist but I do own Alice she is mine and you can't have her.

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We had just finished getting the ingredients together and now we were adding our blood to add spirit material. Ed went first, then Al went, lastly I went. Then we went to the edge of the circle and placed our hands on it.

"Kay this is it Al and Alice" Ed told us.

The circle started glowing but almost immediately we knew something was wrong.

"Ed something doesn't feel right," Al said concerned.

Suddenly Al started screaming and a scream came from Ed, then I was hit with pain in my left shoulder. Al was yelling for help. "Ed help! Ed! Alice!" He was disappearing before mine and brothers eyes. Ed reached for him but it was to late Al was gone.

Next thing I knew I was standing in this white space with a giant door and some person. The door opened and these black tentical thing dragged me in. I screamed but it didn't help. What I saw hurt my head and I wanted it to stop and suddenly it did. I was back and saw brother laying on the ground not moving.

"Brother?" I asked weakly. He suddenly started screaming and holding his leg. He started crawling.

"Damnit thiscan't be happening. It can't be. This wasn't... this wasn't suppose to..." he screamed in pain. "He's gone what have I done!" he screamed.

"Brother!" I shook him but he kept going. "Somebody help me. Please Mom. Mom please..." he then saw what we created and I looked too. It was horrible. "No. This is wrong, this isn't what we wanted. Al...Alphonse, Alphonse!" He started calling for Al. I knocked over the suit of armour as Ed dragged himself over to it.

"Damnit you won't take him too. Give him back. He's my brother. He's my little brother!" brother yelled. I watched as brother drew the circle in the armour. Ed clapped his hands together I saw a flash but then I fell into blackness.

I awoke slightly and felt something carrying me but then the darkness claimed me again.


I awoke again a few days later at Winry's house. That day a military amn stopped by and said he had heard about my brothers and I, that we were gifted alchemist. He said we could maybe even get our bodies back to how they were. He then left and I could see the fire in Ed's eyes and I knew he saw them in mine. We then ask Pinako and Winry if they would fit us with automail. They said they would and that recovery would take three years.

"I'll do it in one." he stated.

"So will I," I concurred with him.

"You'll have yourselves spitting blood you know that," Pinako said.

"Al just hang in there a little longer ok? We're gonna get you your body back," Ed said to Al

"Yeah Big brother just you wait we'll have you back to normal in no time," I added.


Ed and Al were sparring and I joined the fray so I could practice too. When we finished Ed decided he was gonna try some alchemy so I did too. Brother clapped his hands together and made his arm in a sword like thing. I did the same with mine.

"Brother, Alice that was amazing. You didn't even use a transmutation circle. You guys perform alchemy the same way teacher does." Al exclaimed at both of us.

"You can do it too can't you?" Ed asked him.

"Me? No, no way." Al said.

"You didn't see it Al?" I asked him.

"See what?" Al asked.

"Uh... Nevermind." Just then a wrench hit Ed in the head. I couldn't help but start laughing till one collided with my head too.

"Hey you two don't mess up my automail! You know how hard I worked on that!" Winry yelled at us.

"Why did you have to throw a wrench at me too Winry?" I exclaimed holding my head where the wrench hit. Winry went on to say we were stuck with her weather we liked it or not.


Ed and I went to take our state exams and passed with flying colors. He got the title Fullmetal and I got the title Soulheart.


It took me forever to come up with her title just letting you all know that. And yes it's base off the second episode of brotherhood. Oh and I'm also drawing Alice so when I'm done I'll post it on my deviant art account so I hope you'll check it out when its done.

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