Well this is my first fan fiction so please review and give ideas also after every chapter I make I am going to ask questions who ever answers correctly first will get a shout out in my next chapter
Tobias
I walk to my apartment to sleep. Zeke and Uriah were having a party but I left early. I guess they stopped the party when they realized I left. When I got to my apartment the door was cracked. When I walk in Tris is on the couch. "Um sorry, Zeke wants to know if you want to play Candor or Dauntless". "OK . Who's all coming?" I ask. "I don't know who all but I do know Christina, Will, Uriah, and Zeke of course". "OK let me get changed" then I go and get dressed.
Tris
I didn't know if he wanted me to stay or go, so I stayed. "OK let's go" he says. He got changed in to a tight black shirt and black pants. He was handsome. Then I realized that I was staring at him and he was talking. "Tris!" he yells. "What, sorry I thought I heard something" I said nervously. "OK well let's go"