A memorable senshi

Hi everyone, this was my first story (that I have actually "typed" and "posted" somewhere else. Now that it has been about ten years I decided that it's not that great anymore so I wanted to redo it, make it longer and better. A more thought out story. Of course, this is not the very first story I thought to do and I have many others that are still saved in my notebooks that I had hand written when I was still going to school. This is my first complete story that I "was" proud of but after rereading it I found many flaws and room for improvement so here I am trying to make it into a more detailed story.

Now a little about the story,

This will be completely based off of the Anime version of Sailor Moon since I never finished reading the manga, and come on, the anime is much more fun to watch than motionless books. Anyway, in this story, Yaten is slightly different and has more abilities than just empathy. (S)he is a powerful psychic but since earthlings doesn't accept ppl with abilities easily (s)he never used any of her abilities.

Aside from that, Yaten is also a princess but her kingdom had been destroyed and so she is also training as a senshi because she wants to help out. The people of Kinmoku know her as Princess of another place so they treat her like they do with Kakyuu.

There is also the rumor about Metalia's granddaughter that I had incorporated into this story at the time so I'm not taking that out meaning Yaten will be the princess of the dark kingdom too.

In addition to abilities, she'll have healing like Hotaru. I'd feel weird that she is sailor star healer yet she can't heal anyone. That's just not right.

Now, I don't know, I probably will take out some things from the original story and change a lot of plot. As for the enemies that I created, they will have a bigger role, or I'll try to give them a bigger role and make it so that they aren't as lame as how I made them to be the last time I tried with this story. If you read it before you'd know what I'm talking about. I'm taking out some characters, and adding other ones.

Summary: Yaten gets killed taking a hit for Seiya and then gets reborn on earth. The senshi tries to find her and fend off the enemy that seemed to have followed the starlights. Seiya falls in love again and will soon become a father. Ironically the mysterious girl he now loves becomes an ally because of her little sister's identity.

Now since I have 3 Sailor Moon stories to work on, I'll be alternating between these stories. For this story, I'll be updating as soon as I complete the updated version of each chapter. I don't know how long this will take. Like I said in my other stories' notes, I like reviews. If I get a good amount I might be able to crank out a chapter sooner.