A/N: A new commentary! This one is probably worse than jo bekle.
For those of you who don't know, Darryl Trucker (as it is normally spelled), is Jo Bel's boyfriend.
Chapter 1:
An: Thanks 2 jo bel 4 edidin da sturee. I LUV U GURL!1111111111111111111111
You're already off to a bad start.
Harees new truk.
Oh wow…
Chappy 1
I luked arund da rume. Mi Mi nam iz harry poter. I dfeeted da durk lard. How hard was it to fight to lard? I am cull. I hav a wif named Herminee. Since when? She iz relly hot. She iz also relly smurt. Oh help us.
1 dae i was walkin across te street. I was goiin y2 get a new truk. I went into da truk stur. Mr weeslee waz saleing truks. Mr. Weasly selling trucks… Strangle enough I can see that. Rite now he waz throwin out sum stupid blak people that thote they culld bi (becuz those stupid blak people r bi)! Sumthin. I can't see this though…
I wen up 2 him. 'can I BUY a truk?" I esked.
Your grammar is worse than jo belkes.
"sur,/ he sed.
I bught da best 1. Why I am I not surprised… it waz relly cool. I den drov it dowen 2 mi hose/ hermmineone screemed wen she sawed it. Why was it so scary?
"OMg harry, I luv yu!:
Oh… Happy scream.
"I know I luv u 2/'
"Di is the best ting evr." Lets tak it 4 a ride.":\
PErveriew of da nex chptr:
Da caar pulld 2 a stup, it waz… … … … … … … … … … … … .. FLUR DECORE
Wow… help us!