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Hey all my names sorrowfullchild and I'm sort of new here. And this is my first story so please be nice kay? And reviews and some nice criticism would be nice to see too. It helps inspire me.
Disclaimer: I don't own Bleach at all but if I did….well if I did it would be awesome!
(PPS just so you know Ichigo is a female in this story I write about him being a male all the time but just this once I thought it would be cool if he was a strong heroine)
Ichigo was tense. She felt a lot more pressure in the sky lately, as something horribly wrong were about to happen. She had no idea how right she was when it had happened. That day it was as normal as any other. She walked to school by herself, got onto school grounds and was greeted by Orihime, and Chad and even the ever reluctant Uryu. As soon as they reached her they could tell she was on guard. That something was bothering her, but that she didn't want to talk about it.
Orihime was starting to get worried. She had asked Ichigo if she was alright ten times today. And each time she was greeted with "I'm fine "or an "I'm just sleepy ". She though each time she had asked ichigo. But each of them could clearly see it was forced. And that was when Uryu had started to get as worried as Orihime Chad was concerned she wasn't feeling well, considering the even slightly tanned Ichigo was now paler than usual.
Finally getting enough of everyone hassling her, including her homeroom teacher who had begun asking questions as well. Had finally asked if she could go to the bathroom, to escape the epidemic rising.
Water splashed onto tile as ichigo raised her hands to her face, quietly and gently letting the liquid cool her off. She had had enough of the questions arising. People were beginning to annoy her, even more so than when Rukia talked about that damn Chappy the rabbit.
"Ahhh so tired." she mused aloud.
She looked down at the sink watching the water pour out of it noisily .she shook her head as if to stop herself from looking at something interesting. She lifted her head to look at her reflection for just a split second. Eyes widened, as Ichigo looked into gold filled eyes as the mimicked her actions.
"impossible." She shakily said. Gold irises reflected back at her. Gold no that was the color of her Hollow's eyes not hers. Slowly ever so slowly she backed away from the mirror. Eyes screwed shut firmly, she hoped that it was her mind playing tricks on her .slowly she opened her eyes hoping what she had seen was just an illusion her tired mind had made her see. Looking into the mirror Ichigo let out a breathe she hadn't known she'd been holding. Warm brown eyes stared back at her .Though ichigo was convinced she hadn't seen the last of those hauntingly beautiful gold eyes.
Ichigo calmly left the bathroom, returning to her home room were Tatsuki bombarded her with questions. And where Chizuru and keigo started they daily hit-on-ichigo session. Man what a day she thought.
Once again ichigo felt the tension rise as she looked out the window to look around at the baby blue sky. Ichigo kept studying it intently when something managed to catch her eye. It looked like a person standing their. Starring straight at her. She blinked and the person was gone.
"Man I really need some sleep." Ichigo murmured out loud.
"Well then Kurosaki-san you should go to the infirmary instead of daydreaming in my class, then shouldn't you? "ichigo cringed at the sarcastic voice of her homeroom teacher.
"ahaha yes , sorry it won't happen again I promise " Ichigo said flustered .
" Good I look forward to a ichigo that dosen't daydream in my class." Misato-sensei said snidely .
Yes I bet you do along with the other teens in the room thought silently.
The bell rang throughout the school; Ichigo thanked the marvelous bell for ending her boring lecture in English class. As she walked with Orihime out to the courtyard the stopped to wait for Chad and Uryu so they could begin to walk back to their houses. First the dropped of Orihime, then Uryu, And finally Chad insisted he walk Ichigo home instead of him leaving Ichigo to walk home alone.
Ichigo opened her door to her room quietly; wanting nothing more than too get rid of the feeling she had been having all day. She sat on her bed, once again gazing outside looking at the sun now setting. She had the feeling it was would be one of the last sunsets she'd be seeing in a while .Closing her eyes she breathed slowly calming all doubt in and worry in her fast paced heart.
Whatever was eating at her guard that she had carefully set up for these uneasy feelings was clearly there for a reason. Wearily she thought it had something to do with seeing Hichigo's eyes in the mirror at school. No, she told herself sternly that was just an illusion. Ichigo opened her eyes, lowering herself to her bed. She lay their looking at her ceiling memorizing the cracks and paint chipped spots for what seemed like hours. Finally she closed her eyes and allowed sleep to consume her.
Well that ends of this chapter. Should this just be a One-shot or should it be a Story? I have other chapters written but I'm just wondering if it was good or not? Reviews pretty please?
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