My first fanfic so I need everyone's help on my writing.
One of the authors on here is named wuffywuff32 she is actually a good friend of mine so is snowflakeharuno so you can check out their stories.
'Kyuubi talking'
'Thinking'
I'm so sorry!
The day started out normal, I woke up to the smell of dirty laundry and ramen cups on the floor. How every kid wants to wake up in the morning.
I looked to the mirror seeing my blond hair pointing in every angle, crust in my eyes, and a dirt stain on my shirt. 'Man I trained to hard. I look horrible…'
I stretched and got up from bed walking to the kitchen. 'Damn no more ramen. Guess I have to eat at Ichiraku's today… oh wait. I'm broke.' I thought groaning when I saw the fruit bowl Kakashi left me. 'I'm fine with fruit. But the way Kakashi has been trying to get me to eat… I don't want to look at another lemon.'
(A/n: Get it lemon… like the fanfic… that is probably what Kakashi reads all the time… Kakashi loves lemons…)
I cleaned up and walking out the door. 'Wonder if Sakura-Chan got anything.'
Today I was hoping to have an actual mission. He was tired of just sparring with Sakura all the time while Kakashi trains the oh so famous Uchiha. 'I swear it is getting harder each day to keep my mask up. These guys are sometimes more annoying them my mask.'
"Sakura-Chan how is your morning today?" I asked in my sing song voice. 'Must resist strangling self…'
"I'll do it!" growled Kyuubi
'I see the fur ball is finally awake.'
"That fur ball saved you from dying at least 3 times." The great fox snarled.
'Can't you think of different style for my mind then the sewer? My mind seems like a waste pool.'
"Why don't like to have your mind looking like a place where human waste goes. I swear humans are disgusting.
"What is it Naruto… Can't you see I'm busy waiting for Sasuke-Kun!" she squealed. Witch snapped me out of it.
"SAKURA-CHAN I am way better then that guy. You should go on a date with me instead." I said pouting.
'She is tiring me out already.'
"There he is! SASUKE-KUN! You look so super awesome today! TEEHEE!" she said with stars in her eyes.
"Hn." was the usual answer.
Coming out of nowhere Kakashi appeared. "Yo." He said waving calmly with his nose in his precious orange books.
(A/n: Kakashi's lemon books made by the master pervert Jiraiya.)
"You're late!" me and Sakura screamed in unison.
"Hn." was Sasuke's greeting, insult, and order.
'Is that the only thing he says?'
"Today we are sparring." Kakashi said with a smile.
"I'm going to kick your ass Sasuke!" I yelled.
"Whatever dobe." He replied with a smirk. This smirk made the pink haired girl squeal
"Yeah dobe! You will never beat the awesomeness that is Sasuke-Kun. He is handsome hunk that I dream about and wish to rape and have babies with." She stated as if nothing was wrong with that.
Everybody stared at her and I don't know if this is my imagination but in Sasuke's eyes I saw fear. I would be scared too.
Kakashi broke the silence. "Reminds me of my novel Natasha loves Bert and she said something like that."
A couple more minutes of silence before
"Ok back to sparring. It will be a three way spar. Oh and go easy on Sakura." He whispered so she wouldn't hear. He didn't want to hear a long lecture.
"Ok begin." He said starting the spar and putting his nose back into his book blushing madly and giggling like a school girl.
"Come on dobe is that the fastest you can go." he said kicking and dodging while Sakura was trying to help Sasuke.
"Sasuke-Kun you want to go on a date later." She said squealing
I saw him wince at her loud voice and took my chance to strike.
"Oh no you don't!" Sakura barked and threw a kunai at my head.
"Sakura you idiot!" was the last thing I heard before I blacked out.
What did you think was it ok? I need some reviews to tell me if I am doing good or not.
Naruto: "You made Sakura-Chan hit me with a kunai."
Sakura: "Sasuke" *drools*
Sasuke: "review"
Naruto: "that was my line."
Sasuke: "whatever."
Naruto: "next time I'm going to steal your lines."