A rose…. A promise (the story)
Hello... my name is moon_baby1987... i have allot of other nicknames one being yui_shadz^_^ T_T please don't ask me how i got that name!!!!!! Well any ways, i have started to write the story to go with the poem i wrote and submitted it to fanfiction a long time ago. At the top you have the poem for the ones that's don't know it and after the poem comes the story... its about a girl (i think you know who just by reading the poem) and she lost her lover, he died before he died he made her a promise that he would take her to the moon and they would live there together forever... now she is sad... and even a little angry because he left her, he promised her he would take her to the moon... WELL IM NOT GONNA TELL YOU THE ENTIRE STORY. I WOULDN'T BE A GOOD WRITER IF I WAS GONNA DO THAT NOW WOULD I???... So just read it and find out what happens.. K?... i hope you like it enough to review it. ^_^
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The poem:
A rose…. A promise
As he is walking towards me I feel my heart beating,
As his footsteps come closer to my room I feel something more than happiness,
I can always smell the fresh roses he caries with him,
My favorite red roses… he knows me to well,
But that was long ago,
I can no longer feel my heart beating,
I can no longer feel that feeling of being more than happy,
And most of all I will never smell the fresh red roses again….
A girl with long hair and eyes that change color in the light stood by her window,
Watching the rain fall to the ground and feeling the tears fall from her eyes,
Its true he will never come back to me,
He is gone and he still holds my heart,
Theirs no way to get over this feeling,
My heart died when he died,
We were going to run away,
Get married with only are friends by our side,
And he once promised me to take me to the moon,
And now I hate him so… he was never one to brake a promise,
But hi broke the one I held the most,
He will never take me to the moon…
Never!
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THE STORY
PART 1
THE SHATTERED GLASS
I hear foot steps. Is it?! No it cant be, but maybe… the girl with the long blond hair
Stood in her room listening to the foots steps come closer and closer to her room. She could hear her heart
as they came closer. No it can't be its impossible. Darien… it can't be him. The girl went mad she blocked
her ears and yelled at the top of her lungs "NO IT CANT BE YOU, MY LOVE IS GONE, HE IS DEAD."
Serina opened her eyes and wiped her tears and held her pillow in her arms "It was all a dream, I cant believe it. It felt so real" the girl bursted into tears. She couldn't stop at yell out the name of her love… "DARIEN, DARIEN, DARIEN…." 5 girls came bursting into Serinas room, they all came to see if she was all right. Raye was the first one that mad it into the room and as soon as the others came she gave them all instructions… "Aims I want you to get a glass of water, and Lita can you get Serina an aspirin or something." As raye and the others were about to leave the room Serina yelled out "NO!!!!!! I don't want you to do anything I don't want you all to do any of this." She hands were shaking and so was her voice… her tears fell from her eyes and when down her cheeks. Rini came closer to Serina and patted her on her shoulder "come on Serina are you ok?" Serina lifted her head a little more and saw everyone looking at her. " NO I AM NOT OK… NO I AM NOT FINE!!!!! PLEASE JUST GO HOME… I DON'T NEED YOU ALL HERE. LET MY CRY, LET ME BE!!!!!" As serina's tears kept falling and as she whispered his name once more an old vase with 3 roses that were completely dead fell to the ground. Everyone jumped up in fear but Serina just stood still and did not move. She told them once more to go home but Raye whent up to her and picked up one of the 3 red roses that had fallen to the ground and placed it on the bed and then neald by her side… "Serina we won't leave you here, we told you that it's not healthy to be alone in this condition, you don't even eat anymore. If you wont go back to your parents house and leave his house were his memory hunts you and just make you better… we will atleast make sure you wont do something drastic like what you tried to do on that balcony." Serina turned her around to face Raye and then started once more to cry and put her arms around her holding her tight… "Raye don't you see, I came here so that I will be hunted by his memory… if I leave this place I'm afraid… afraid I will forget him.You don't know what its like… being afraid to forget… to forget how at the beginning we hatted each other and then when I found out he was tuxedo mask… and how he saved me and got taken and well all the memories… I'm afraid to forget the good times and even the bad times. IF ONLY HE ……. If only he didn't try to make it on time for my surprise… ITS ALL MY FAULT AND FOR THAT I CANT FORGET HIM!!!!!! And even Rini… she wont live… she has a few days and then she wont exist at all." Rini looked at serina and for the first time In a long while she called out "mommy" and put her arms around her and told her " momy it dosent matter if I exist or not mom all I care Is that you live. Please mom don't do anything to hurt yourself again please mom." Rini hugged her mom and then ran out of the room serina wanted to run after her but when she tried to get up she fell to the floor and called out rini's name hopping that she would come back to her. Serina then told the others to go see if she was ok and to bring her back to her because she was really weak. So all 4 of them went after her and left Serina her herself. Serina tried to get up but she put her hands on the broken glass of the vase the roses were in. she picked up on of the roses that was of the floor and held it to her heart her hand was cut but she didn't fell the pain… the only pain she felt was the one of the love breaking like thing galss. She could feel it shatter. And then she whispered " you will take me to the moon, you promised me....... you primised the moon … sorry rini, I wont be able to keep your promise."
please review it... i wont put up the next chapter if i dont get atleast 3 reviews....... and sorry about the spelling!!!!
hope u like it ^_^
and if you dont T_T u are so in for it just kidding
Hello... my name is moon_baby1987... i have allot of other nicknames one being yui_shadz^_^ T_T please don't ask me how i got that name!!!!!! Well any ways, i have started to write the story to go with the poem i wrote and submitted it to fanfiction a long time ago. At the top you have the poem for the ones that's don't know it and after the poem comes the story... its about a girl (i think you know who just by reading the poem) and she lost her lover, he died before he died he made her a promise that he would take her to the moon and they would live there together forever... now she is sad... and even a little angry because he left her, he promised her he would take her to the moon... WELL IM NOT GONNA TELL YOU THE ENTIRE STORY. I WOULDN'T BE A GOOD WRITER IF I WAS GONNA DO THAT NOW WOULD I???... So just read it and find out what happens.. K?... i hope you like it enough to review it. ^_^
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The poem:
A rose…. A promise
As he is walking towards me I feel my heart beating,
As his footsteps come closer to my room I feel something more than happiness,
I can always smell the fresh roses he caries with him,
My favorite red roses… he knows me to well,
But that was long ago,
I can no longer feel my heart beating,
I can no longer feel that feeling of being more than happy,
And most of all I will never smell the fresh red roses again….
A girl with long hair and eyes that change color in the light stood by her window,
Watching the rain fall to the ground and feeling the tears fall from her eyes,
Its true he will never come back to me,
He is gone and he still holds my heart,
Theirs no way to get over this feeling,
My heart died when he died,
We were going to run away,
Get married with only are friends by our side,
And he once promised me to take me to the moon,
And now I hate him so… he was never one to brake a promise,
But hi broke the one I held the most,
He will never take me to the moon…
Never!
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THE STORY
PART 1
THE SHATTERED GLASS
I hear foot steps. Is it?! No it cant be, but maybe… the girl with the long blond hair
Stood in her room listening to the foots steps come closer and closer to her room. She could hear her heart
as they came closer. No it can't be its impossible. Darien… it can't be him. The girl went mad she blocked
her ears and yelled at the top of her lungs "NO IT CANT BE YOU, MY LOVE IS GONE, HE IS DEAD."
Serina opened her eyes and wiped her tears and held her pillow in her arms "It was all a dream, I cant believe it. It felt so real" the girl bursted into tears. She couldn't stop at yell out the name of her love… "DARIEN, DARIEN, DARIEN…." 5 girls came bursting into Serinas room, they all came to see if she was all right. Raye was the first one that mad it into the room and as soon as the others came she gave them all instructions… "Aims I want you to get a glass of water, and Lita can you get Serina an aspirin or something." As raye and the others were about to leave the room Serina yelled out "NO!!!!!! I don't want you to do anything I don't want you all to do any of this." She hands were shaking and so was her voice… her tears fell from her eyes and when down her cheeks. Rini came closer to Serina and patted her on her shoulder "come on Serina are you ok?" Serina lifted her head a little more and saw everyone looking at her. " NO I AM NOT OK… NO I AM NOT FINE!!!!! PLEASE JUST GO HOME… I DON'T NEED YOU ALL HERE. LET MY CRY, LET ME BE!!!!!" As serina's tears kept falling and as she whispered his name once more an old vase with 3 roses that were completely dead fell to the ground. Everyone jumped up in fear but Serina just stood still and did not move. She told them once more to go home but Raye whent up to her and picked up one of the 3 red roses that had fallen to the ground and placed it on the bed and then neald by her side… "Serina we won't leave you here, we told you that it's not healthy to be alone in this condition, you don't even eat anymore. If you wont go back to your parents house and leave his house were his memory hunts you and just make you better… we will atleast make sure you wont do something drastic like what you tried to do on that balcony." Serina turned her around to face Raye and then started once more to cry and put her arms around her holding her tight… "Raye don't you see, I came here so that I will be hunted by his memory… if I leave this place I'm afraid… afraid I will forget him.You don't know what its like… being afraid to forget… to forget how at the beginning we hatted each other and then when I found out he was tuxedo mask… and how he saved me and got taken and well all the memories… I'm afraid to forget the good times and even the bad times. IF ONLY HE ……. If only he didn't try to make it on time for my surprise… ITS ALL MY FAULT AND FOR THAT I CANT FORGET HIM!!!!!! And even Rini… she wont live… she has a few days and then she wont exist at all." Rini looked at serina and for the first time In a long while she called out "mommy" and put her arms around her and told her " momy it dosent matter if I exist or not mom all I care Is that you live. Please mom don't do anything to hurt yourself again please mom." Rini hugged her mom and then ran out of the room serina wanted to run after her but when she tried to get up she fell to the floor and called out rini's name hopping that she would come back to her. Serina then told the others to go see if she was ok and to bring her back to her because she was really weak. So all 4 of them went after her and left Serina her herself. Serina tried to get up but she put her hands on the broken glass of the vase the roses were in. she picked up on of the roses that was of the floor and held it to her heart her hand was cut but she didn't fell the pain… the only pain she felt was the one of the love breaking like thing galss. She could feel it shatter. And then she whispered " you will take me to the moon, you promised me....... you primised the moon … sorry rini, I wont be able to keep your promise."
please review it... i wont put up the next chapter if i dont get atleast 3 reviews....... and sorry about the spelling!!!!
hope u like it ^_^
and if you dont T_T u are so in for it just kidding