Hello everyone! This is Btr100 with a new story: Ash vs Paul: Rewrite!
In this story, Ash and Paul will have their first Full Battle at Lake Acuity! Ash remains to use his Sinnoh Team Pokemon, training with them day and night! Now, can Ash win against his rival? Or will Paul triumph in this battle like always?
Peace!-Btr100
After a ride in the Ampharos Train, Ash and his friends: Dawn and Brock are finally at Lake Acuity! Ash used his remaining 9 days to train with his Sinnoh Pokemon day and night. After nine days, Ash and his Pokemon were ready before looking to find Paul.
Paul was near the lake, training his Electabuzz. When he saw Ash, he returned his Electabuzz. Reggie, Paul's older brother, hired a referee and also managed to set up an electronic scoreboard, with a disguised Team Rocket controlling them.
"This will be a Full Battle between Ash Ketchum from Pallet Town and Paul Shinji from Veilstone City! Trainers know the rules, so let this battle...BEGIN!"the referee
At last, the battle begun.
"Weavile! Stand by for battle!" Paul exclaimed as he threw a Pokeball, and out of it was the Dark and Ice type with a red crown in the shape of a fan. Weavile's image then appeared on the scoreboard. Weavile did a slashing dance before doing an evil grin on its face.
"Weavile eh? Well Chimchar! I choose you!" Ash exclaimed as he threw a Pokeball and out of it was the small orange monkey with flames in its tail. His image then appeared on the scoreboard. Chimchar jumped in joy as it was released from its Pokeball.
"Okay Chimchar. Ready to battle Paul?" Ash asked. Chimchar nodded in determination, making Ash smile.
"Okay then! Use Scratch!" Ash commanded. Chimchar charged forward towards Weavile, about to scratch him, but Paul commanded an attack.
"Use Metal Claw!" Paul commanded. Weavile's claws extended and glowed silver, before clashing it along with Chimchar's scratch. To Paul's surprise, despite Metal Claw being obviously stronger than Scratch, their powers were equal and it resulted in an explosion, knocking both Pokemon back.
"Chimchar! Flame Wheel!" Ash commanded. Chimchar rolled and it became surrounded in flames, creating a flaming wheel. Chimchar then rolled towards Weavile and it managed to hit the Ice and Dark type. It was super-effective and it was thrown back.
"Weavile! Get up and use Ice Beam!" Paul commanded. "Chimchar! Flamethrower!" Ash commanded. Weavile managed to stand up before firing a freezing blue bolt of energy from its mouth, while Chimchar fired a stream of flames from its mouth.
Both attacks collided, but Flamethrower easily overpowered Ice Beam and hit Weavile, sending Weavile flying before tumbling near the lake, knocked out.
"Weavile is unable to battle! Chimchar wins!" The referee declared. Weavile's image then glowed dark, indicating its defeat. Paul merely returned his Weavile, before looking at it and muttering: "Pathetic." before stuffing it inside his pocket. He then grabbed a second Pokeball.
"Electabuzz! Stand by for battle!" Paul exclaimed as he threw the Pokeball, and out of it was the humanoid looking Pokemon. It was yellow, with two antennae on its head. Its image then appeared on the scoreboard screen.
"Alright Chimchar! Use Dig!" Ash commanded. Chimchar quickly dug underground and moments later, it came out near Electabuzz and uppercutted it on its chin, sending Electabuzz back.
"Use Scratch!" Ash commanded. Chimchar repeatedly scratched Electabuzz, before going back to its spot in front Ash. "Now use Flamethrower!" Ash commanded. Chimchar fired a stream of fire from its mouth.
"Finally. Electabuzz! Light Screen!" Paul commanded. "I'm prepared. Chimchar! Stop using Flamethrower and use Fury Swipes!" Ash commanded. Chimchar stopped firing its Flamethrower and charged at Electabuzz, who already created its golden shield, but Chimchar destroyed it by slashing it with its extended, white glowing claws, before slashing Electabuzz repeatedly with them.
Chimchar then stopped its attack,before jumping towards its spot in front of Ash.
"Okay Chimchar! Take a rest and return!" Ash said as he returned Chimchar back to its Pokeball. Chimchar's image then turned gray. Paul merely did the same to Electabuzz and its image turned black and white.
"It was nice of Ash to break Light Screen with a Physical Attack or all of Paul's Pokemon will have their Sp. Defense as their highest stat!" said Brock.
"Honchkrow! Stand by for battle!" Paul exclaimed as he threw the pokeball. "Okay then. Gliscor! I choose you!" Ash exclaimed as he threw his Pokeball. On Ash's side was a bat-like Pokemon with the fangs of a vampire and yellow eyes. On Paul's side was a flying type that is mainly dark blue in coloration. Their images then appeared on the scoreboard.
"Gliscor! Let's start with X-Scissor!" Ash commanded. "Honchkrow! Aerial Ace!" Paul shouted. Gliscor positioned its claws in an X position before it glowed white. Gliscor then flew towards Honchkrow. Honchkrow was covered in strips of white light before flying towards Gliscor. Both Pokemon collided with their attacks, before causing an explosion, sending them back.
"Honchkrow! Dark Pulse!" Paul commanded. Honchkrow fired a purple beam of circles from its beak. "Don't even think about landing a hit! Gliscor! Screech!" Ash commanded.
Gliscor opened its mouth and fired an earsplitting screech, so loud that everybody in the area was forced to cover their ears. Even the Pokemon underwater heard it and were trying to cover their ears, but to no avail.
Gliscor's screech was also powerful enough to completely neutralize the Dark Pulse and hurt Honchkrow as well and not before long, Honchkrow was blown away and crashed into the ground, causing dust to fly.
"Okay Gliscor! Hyper Beam!" Ash commanded. Gliscor's right claw glowed orange and Gliscor fired a massive orange beam of energy from hit and it managed to hit Honchkrow, causing more dust to fly. When the dust cleared, Honchkrow was clearly injured, but it wasn't out of the fight yet.
And of that, Paul was forced to recall Honchkrow. "This is not part of my strategy. Magmortar! Stand by for battle!" Paul exclaimed as he threw the Pokeball and out of it was a large fire type Pokemon with unusual pink lips and a body in the shape of an egg. Its image then appeared on the screen.
"I know Paul's last two Pokemon are Ursaring and Torterra, but I have to see for myself. By forcing Paul to switch through all of his six Pokemon!" Ash thought. "Okay! Gliscor! Sandstorm!" Ash commanded.
Gliscor fired two multicolored beams from its claw and into the ground, causing a sandstorm to whip up. The sandstorm made it difficult for anyone to see, as everyone was having a hard time finding Ash, Paul and their Pokemon. But by now, they can only see their silhouettes moving in the sandstorm.
"Gliscor! Proceed with the plan! Use Rock Tomb!" Ash commanded. Glicor, using its ears, heard the command and fired multiple purple circles from its claws, and when the circles hit the ground, it turns into stone.
"Now proceed with Tailwind!" Ash commanded. Gliscor fired a blast of wind from its mouth, blowing away the dust and sand. When the dust and sand cleared, the battle place was full of large rocks. Paul looked unfazed by Ash's strange tactics, but decided to strike.
"Magmortar, Flamethrower!" Paul commanded. "Gliscor! Dodge then use Aqua Tail!" Ash commanded. Magmortar fired a stream of fire from its right arm cannon, but Gliscor flew into the air and evaded it. Gliscor's scorpion tail was then covered in spirals of water, before charging towards Magmortar. Gliscor slammed its tail onto Magmortar, but Magmortar wasn't damaged as much.
"Gliscor! Giga Edge!" Ash commanded. Gliscor had been training hard for this technique, so he formed grey stones around its body and then Gliscor was engulfed in purple aura, before ramming straight Magmortar, causing a cloud of dust to fly.
When the dust cleared, out came Magmortar, who was being pushed back near the lake. Gliscor stopped when Magmortar's feet were touching the water. Meanwhile, Gliscor was up in the air, spinning wildly for a while before stopping, turning its gaze into Magmortar.
"Gliscor! Screech!" Ash commanded. Gliscor opened its mouth and let out an earsplitting screech that forced everyone to cover their ears. It was also powerful enough to push back Magmortar even more further into the lake, until some of its egg body was touching the water. Magmortar showed signs of pain and discomfort around the water.
Paul was then forced to return Magmortar back to its Pokeball. "Okay! Thanks Gliscor, now take a rest!" Ash said as he returned Gliscor back to its Pokeball. Ash and Paul threw their next Pokeballs.
"Torterra! Stand by for battle!"/"Staraptor! I choose you!" both trainers exclaimed as they threw their Pokeballs. On Paul's side was a gigantic turtle with a large tree on its shell. On Ash's side was a gray eagle flying in the sky. Their images then appeared on the scoreboard screen.
"Well. That purple-haired twerp has already revealed 5 of his Pokemon." James said as he was controlling the electronic scoreboard along with Jessie and Meowth.
"Who cares? We just control this stupid electronic scoreboard over here, and this is only excited when that Chimchar over there gets into battle!" Meowth shouted, but Jessie slapped him on the back of his head.
"Torterra! Frenzy Plant!" Paul commanded. "Staraptor! Dodge them all!" Ash yelled. Torterra's body was outlined in green before stomping its foot, sending large green thorns from the ground towards Staraptor. Staraptor managed to dodge them all.
"Staraptor! Use Heat Wave!" Ash commanded. Staraptor flapped its wings at high speed, creating a wind of flames that managed to hit Torterra, but even Ash knew that super-effective moves are not gonna be enough against Torterra.
"Staraptor! Quick Attack!" Ash commanded. Staraptor flew towards Torterra with blinding speed and a white trail behind it. Staraptor managed to hit Torterra on the head, but it didn't do much.
"I bet Paul will move Torterra after this. Staraptor! Aerial Ace and aim for the tree!" Ash commanded. Paul looked in shock, as Torterra's tree was its weak spot. "Torterra! Leaf Storm NOW!" Paul exclaimed.
Staraptor was engulfed in strips of white light, while Torterra fired a cyclone of leaves from its tree. It hit Staraptor, but the Flying type battered on and eventually hit Torterra at the tree, causing great damage and pain to Torterra.
"Now let's do a Close Combat to Torterra's tree!" Ash commanded.
Staraptor got close and kicked, pecked and slapped Torterra's tree repeatedly, causing great pain to Torterra. "Err..Get that bird off with with Leaf Storm!" Paul shouted. "Get yourself away!" Ash commanded.
Torterra fired a cyclone of leaves, but Staraptor managed to dodge just in time. "Now Giga Impact!" Ash commanded. Paul knew that if it hit Torterra's tree, Torterra is finished, so he quickly returned Torterra back to its Pokeball, before Staraptor can even form a purple aura around itself.
Ash only smiled and picked up Staraptor's Pokeball. "Thanks Staraptor! Now take a nice rest." Ash said as he returned his flying type back to its Pokeball.
"Ursaring! Stand by for battle!" Paul exclaimed as he threw a Pokeball and out of it was the large brown bear, and also one of the Powerhouses in Paul's Team. Its image then appeared on the scoreboard screen.
"Okay then! Pikachu! I choose you!" Ash exclaimed, and Pikachu hopped on to the field confidently. Paul then put on a bored face, as he knew that Pikachu should be finished off soon. But Ash' wasn't gonna let that happen.
"Pikachu! Quick Attack!" Ash commanded. Pikachu ran with lightning speed and tackled Ursaring, sending Ursaring backwards. "Pikachu! Quick Attack once more!" Ash yelled. Pikachu once again ran with lightning speed and managed to hit Ursaring again.
"Quick Attack once more!" Ash shouted. Pikachu, for the final time charged and tackled Ursaring once more, sending Ursaring dazed temporarily.
"Alright Pikachu! Give Ursaring a Thunderbolt!" Ash commanded. Pikachu fired a bolt of electricity from his body and it managed to hit Ursaring, shocking it and damaging it badly. "Now give Ursaring an Iron Tail!" Ash commanded.
Pikachu's tail shined like metal and he slammed it onto Ursaring's head and as a result, Pikachu's Ability: Static has been activated, sending off sparks of electricity to surround Ursaring. But when Pikachu's attack is over, Ursaring's eyes and body was covered in crimson aura while roaring loudly. Brock and the others gasped, while Ash only grinned.
"Oh no! With Guts activated, its Attack Power is increased!" Brock exclaimed. "Ursaring will squish Pikachu in no time!" Dawn exclaimed as well, her Piplup agreeing.
"So it is Guts. Figures. But it's all in my plan." Ash muttered, but Paul already gave a command.
"Ursaring! Hammer Arm!"/"Pikachu! Iron Tail!" both trainers commanded. Ursaring's arms glowed white, while Pikachu's tail shined like metal. Ursaring and Pikachu collided their arms and tail and got sent back, with neither Pokemon taking damage.
"Pikachu! Volt Tackle!" Ash commanded. Pikachu was then covered in a coat of electricity and was charging at Ursaring with full speed. "Ursaring! Hyper Beam!" Paul shouted. Ursaring fired an orange beam of energy from its mouth.
The Hyper Beam nearly hit Pikachu, but Pikachu dodged in time, and rammed into Ursaring in the chest, sending Ursaring flying into one of the rocks Gliscor scattered with Rock Tomb, causing dust to fly. When the dust cleared, Ursaring was heavily injured. Paul merely returned his Ursaring.
"Err...Honchkrow! Stand by for battle!" Paul exclaimed as he threw the Pokeball, and out of it was the bird Paul used earlier. Its image then lit up again.
"Pikachu! Thunderbolt!" Ash commanded. "Honchkrow! Dark Pulse!" Paul shouted.
Pikachu fired a bolt of electricity from its body, while Honchkrow fired a purple beam of circles from its beak.
So that's it for the First Chapter!
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Peace!-Btr100