Naruto Zaraki
(Konoha, Alleyway October 10)
Kenpachi Zaraki was walking down a street one day, searching for something, the one who may defeat him. 'Man, I have searched all over for a good fight, but only Ichigo was good enough, and he is long gone.' Then a huge powerwave finds him. 'WOAH, what spiritual pressure, and in such an unrefined state too, if I find the person who let off this, I could train him to be the best, then maybe I can find peace.' Kenpachi then ran off to see and locate the source of the spiritual pressure.
(With Naruto)
Naruto Uzumaki was currently running faster then he ever has, but he was under a mass amount of pain, some red chakra was burning him as he ran from his assailiants. Then out of nowhere, the power receeded and Naruto passed out, but not before seeing a man in a white sleeveless cloak that is worn on the bottom with a black long sleeved cloak on the inside with a Katana on his side, his hair was done into eleven spikes with small balls on the end of each spike. He had a eyepatch on his right eye and a scar going down his left. This man was Kenpachi Zaraki. "Huh, so you would stoop so low as to attack an untrained kid in order to feel big, YOU WEAKLINGS!" As he said this, his sword was reacting, telling him that the kid he was defending was indeed the origin of that wave of spiritual pressure, but it was not his own, could he be...
"Why would you defend the demon?!" Said one of the rable, solidifing what he thought before. This kid was a Jinchuuriki. And the people before him, the weakling moronic idiots that torture the Jinchuuriki.
"Oh, I can tell you that he is not a demon. You want a demon, let me remove my eyepatch." And then hell broke loose, his eyepatch was made to supress his spiritual pressure, or known to the locals, chakra. The energy he used in his attacks could be massive and still have more to go, much like the seal of a Jinchuuriki, but it sealed his own energy, instead of that of a demon. "Now, prepare to face a real demon, I didn't need to take off my restraints, but the way you treated this kid, just pissed me OFF!" And he shot off in a shunpo, flashing in front of the first of the many, smashing his head with the blunt side of his katana. Then he flashed in the middle of a group of fifteen people and circled around, cutting them all in half while jumping to the next group of people that were scared shitless, and killing all but one. "Now, tell me why you attacked this kid, I understand that he is a Jinchuuriki, but he did nothing to deserve this. He is only a CHILD!"
Then the Sandiame came. Dressed in his white kage robes, and the wide veiled kage hat. "I thank you for defending Naruto, he has had a rough childhood and no one trusts him..."
"Cut the crap old man, I know what he is, and how those like him are treated. Where I come from, our swords are containing demons as well, one has the only true form of a demon, Zabimaru. And he and his weilder have a very good relationship." Kenpachi said, "All I want is to train the kid, he has a lot of potential, and I will not let it be tarnished by the morons in this village, I am a very good fighter and as you saw, to live like a normal person and not have others fear me, but I relish a good fight because others have considered me a demon, and I cannot let myself die without passing my strength to another." Kenpachi finished.
"Wait, what do you mean?" Hiruzen asked.
"Well, I seem to be dying and I want to pass the art of the soul reapers onto a worthy student, and I have just found him." Kenpachi said. Sarutobi then thought like a madman 'S-SOUL REAPERS, I THOUGHT THEY WERE EXTINCT! I AM LETTING HIM DO THIS!'
"Yes, how long will you be gone with him." The old Hokage asked.
"About time for him to make the final year of the academy. We leave when he can be released from the hospital for the burns from his demons chakra." Kenpachi answered.
"Ok, I will send Information to the gate guards Izumo and Kotetsu that you will be leaving with Naruto."
(Hospital Three hours later.)
Naruto awoke to the smell of sterilization and cleanliness. 'Yep, I am in the hospital... and it appears as if the man that helped me wants to talk to me.' "So, who are you and what do you want?" Naruto asked bluntly.
"Blunt and straight to the point, you remind me of me when I was young. I am Kenpachi Zaraki and I am going to train you in the arts of the soul reapers and spiritual pressure, or as you know it 'Chakra'. I am also going to teach you to use a speed technique that a friend used to use. And the Hokage gave me permission to teach you and gave me a technique you could use efficently, called the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu. And a lot of other moves to use like the Naruto no Mai, which you use with a sword called 'Hidden Edge' which is also provided, and it comes in three forms, much like the swords back home. Yours is a Katana like mine so I can easily teach you to use it." Kenpachi explained.
"Why, why would you help me, appearently I am the Kyuubi that I hold in my seal." Naruto said.
"Ahh so that is where I felt the spiritual pressure. I am going to help you use your own in attacks and help you make it more condensed, so that way you can use less to attack and hold more than you could possibly imagine, and you could gain more 'Chakra' than me without restraints." Kenpachi said, "As for why, because you are a lot like me. I was mistreated while I was young, so I trained until I could not train anymore, and I was so strong that I had to restrain my power in order to live as a normal person, but I was still feared, so I became a drifter, looking for better fights until I could be considered the best. That was when I met the soul society, and Hollows, the human version of demons, were looking to destroy us all, it was a good war too, until it was over. I could not stand not fighting anymore strong opponents so I traveled to find more, but now I am close to dying so I want to pass my knowledge to you. I have five years, the same as you will old enough to start the last year of the academy to become a ninja." Kenpachi said.
"So, you want to help me because I am like you. Okay, When do we leave?" Naruto said, kinda happy that someone that grew up like him and became strong.
"Tommorow, when we get back, you will need a restrictor like mine. But maybe we can try not to get the scar on your eye, it is cool, but you don't need it." Kenpachi said, 'The next five years will be very interesting. Hopefully, I can get him to fight me when our time together is almost done.'
(Five Years Later, Gates of Konoha)
'Huh, it has been a while since I saw this place.' Thought a blond person as he approached the south gate. The person had his hair styled into eleven spikes with dreads on the back. On the end of each blond spike was a red ball. He is wearing a White sleeveless robe with a worn down bottom and a long sleeve black robe and samurai pants under the robes. On the robes back is the kanji for 'Zaraki', while on the right arm is the kanji for 'kitsune'. He also wore an eyepatch on his right eye. The person that is walking is also known as the 'Demon child' of Konoha, and now they have a reason to call him that, because this person is the Jinchuuriki of the Kyuubi no Kitsune, Naruto Uzumaki... Zaraki
(The Next Day, Ninja Academy)
"Pay attention class, we have a new student joining us for the last year. Naruto Uzumaki Zaraki, you can come in now." Said Iruka. Then in came Naruto.
"Hello guys, my name is Naruto Uzumaki Zaraki, I like my deceased sensei, my eyepatch, and strong opponents. My dislikes are traitors, emos, arrogance, fangirls, and weaklings that cant tell between the scroll and the kunai stored in it. My hobbies are training, pranks and finding strong opponents that I need to take off my restraints to fight." Naruto said to the whole class.
"Okay, since it is the afternoon, we will all go out and spar, no holds barred. No killing though..." Iruka said, directing that last coment to Naruto.
Once everyone got outside Iruka started again. "Now, who wants to go first." It was at this moment that Mizuki spoke up.
"How about the Uzumaki and Sasuke fight." Mizuki said.
"Its Zaraki." Naruto said in annoyance.
"Okay then, Naruto Uzumaki Zaraki versus Sasuke Uchiha, Hajime!" Iruka waved his hand in between them.
"So, your my first fight, your spiritual pressure is almost as strong a Iruka's, but it is weaker than mine, by a long shot, not including an 'outside influence'. So take your best shot." Naruto said as he unsheathed his sword.
"HAH! Your gonna attack me with a wooden sword. You attack first." Sasuke replied.
"Fine, Naruto no Mai: Tornado Shot!" Naruto said as he thrusted his sword forward and a tornado came out, shreding Sasuke's chlothes all execpt his pants upper half, causing his fangirls to go wild, the screams causing Kiba and Akamaru to go deaf for a while.
"DOBE, KATON: GOKAKYUU NO JUTSU!" Sasuke shouted as he shot a huge fireball at Naruto... Only for it to be reflected by the wooden sword and hitting him.
"Winner Naruto!" Iruka said, running to Sasuke to see the extent of his wounds. As Naruto turned around, a bunch of Sasuke's Fangirls threw various items at him, deflecting everything... all execpt the kitchen sink. "WHERE THE HELL DID YOU GET THE KITCHEN SINK!" Then Naruto lifted his eyepatch, making all execpt the two Chuunin shit themselves, the Chuunin being unable to move. "Now, now. I don't think you want to attack your possible future teamate, after all... I could kill you all just by looking in your eyes with both mine." And then Naruto turned away, blurring out of sight and into it by a near by tree.
(A/N:) YO I have a new story out, this one, I thought of it playing Bleach: Shattered Blade for Wii, and I could not get the idea out of my head, so I am turning this into a challenge story, as well as a project, I want to see where I stack against some other writers in pure idea, and I KNOW that this has not happened before, I could not see it anywhere. The restrictions are that Naruto must learn at least three other Dances for his sword, his jutsu MUST be overpowered but his Taijutsu suffers because of his Kenjutsu. He must be paired with an older woman, not too old mind you, but like Shizune or Anko, maybe even Sasuke's mom, cause "Sasuke's mon has got it goin' on". And he must be Jounin by the time that he leaves with Jiraya, and low level bijuu level when he returns. He will know about his advantage using the Kage Bunshin memory retrival thing. And you must include the Sasuke Retrival arc, This chapter must be either first or second, if you want to add a 'before the action' Chapter, and you must flash to the training with Kenpachi at some point. Habs Out.