So this is my first story on fan-fiction so i hope you like it. i have written another story on youtube. i dont think you you'll know it but on youtube i am known as ashleywashley15.
please be as harsh as you want when your reviewing.
actually please review.
and if your a beta reader can you help me? as you can see im in serious need of one.
Disclaimer: Sadly, i do not own Maximum Ride or the characters. I do own the plot, Ashley, Angels Revenge, Matt, and Cameron.
Enjoy!
"Tell me who you are now!!" yelled Max. I'm guessing I didn't make a good first impression. Well, second impression.
*Flashback to about ten minutes ago*
I looked into the store and saw them. The Flock. It had been what? Eight years since I last saw them, the day I broke out of that Hell Hole. Now I'm staring them straight in the face. Well I wasn't until five seconds ago. Max, evidently the leader, 'always knew that would happen' I thought, was heading straight towards me. Oh crap.
"Why the hell are you staring at us?" She yelled at me, obviously not remembering me.
"Chill Max. You're going to get frown lines." I said trying to calm her down. Obviously that didn't work when I saw her shocked face. "Tell me who you are now!!" yelled the infamous Max.
*End flashback*
This was going bad fast. The rest of the flock had come to see what was wrong with their leader. Then I saw him. The oh-so-quiet-yet-amazing Fang. He was looking more amazing then I last saw him. He was wearing all black (like always) and his hair was just about to reach his eyes. I couldn't see them, but I knew his wings still were as black as night.
"Fang," I whispered to myself. Again that was a bad idea. Max was now dragging me down a deserted hallway in the Florida mall.
"Explain yourself now!" Max said, well yelled, as we stopped.
I laughed, " you were always the one to get to the point Max. Well, since you don't remember me, I guess I should introduce myself, I'm Ashley," I said holding out my hand. She just looked at it. "That still doesn't explain who you are and how you know us," she snapped.
"Well, I was at School with you," I said hoping they got the point. The oh-so-amazing-yet-totally-dark-and-silent Fang stepped in. Maybe he got what I was saying. "The only school we went to had us registered under different names. So how do you know out real ones?" I mentally slapped my face. Ugh. He didn't get it either. So I guess I'll come out and say it. "Not regular school. The School," I said as it was all sinking in. Max, of course, had to put her input in, "that's why you looked so familiar. But its still not sinking in." Of course. I have to explain everything.
" I escaped a year before you did. I'm a year older than you," I stated calmly hoping I didn't have to go into full detail.
"Wait. I remember you," Iggy said taking a step forward. Those sightless eyes somehow looking dead at me. I winced as I remembered what they tried to do to him. "Your…" He looked around, well listened; to "see" if anybody other than our group was listening to us. "Your 'home' was right beside mine and Fang's," he stated pointing to the tall figure who was now looking at me with his chocolate eyes. "Ashley? Is it really you?" he asked somewhat confused.
*FANGS P.O.V*
"Durr," said the dark brown haired girl standing in front of me. If she is who she says she is, then she was the only other girl I've ever had feelings for besides Max.
Nudge, the motor-mouth just had to put her view in. "But you're dead. We saw you being dragged off by Erasers," even though I love her to death, she sure gets to the point.
Ashley, smiling, told us everything. "What you saw wasn't me. Well, it was in a way. I'm pretty sure you've found out you have special 'abilities' by now. I found out the day I broke out that I was 'special'. When the Erasers found me, I remember thinking that if there were two of me I could use the other one as a diversion and get myself out. Right after that, another 'me' popped up and started fighting the dog boys and I ran out to my freedom." Gazzy, of course, was excited about what she said. "Dude you can clone yourself! That's so cool!"
Ashley, with her big, gorgeous, brown eyes, looked at him and smiled. "There's way more than that," she said sitting down. "What are they?" yelled Angel, of course about to jump off the walls. "You'll just have to find out. And no mind reading." How did she know about that? It came years after she left. "I read her mind silly. Dang it. I guess you got that one. Plenty more to go," she said, evidently reading mine too. How many powers does this girl have?
*MAX P.O.V*
Who knows if I can trust her? We may have destroyed ITEX and "saved the world" but what if she escaped before the buildings were destroyed? What if she as one of them?
I would never go back to the people who killed my cousin.
Dang it. She was in my head. But as soon as she finished I blocked my mind. The Flock and I seriously need to have a talk about this girl.
