Key:

(Thought)

(Telepathy)

(Hi my name is Ashuri, i live in the Kalos region with my mum and dad in Vaniville town, my main style of clothing is a black and grey checked hat with a yellow band around the base of it and glasses resting on top of it, I wear black jeans, as well as a long sleeved black shirt with a black hooded jacket and black 'skater shoes'. At the moment, my mum had a cat-like pokemon ,I had no idea of the name, which just sat around the house doing nothing but begging for food for what seemed to be all day, everyday, and my dad was a gym leader over in Snowbelle city (I don't know why he likes the cold so much). Anyway, I had a lot on my mind before choosing to go on this journey, i even paced around my room trying to think of an answer but i soon decided on the answer.)

As I woke up to the fresh, clean air coming through the window, I remembered that I was going to do something today. As I pondered through my head as it hit me. "Of cause, today's the day that I start my journey". After I remembered this, I Jumped up from my bed, got changed, got my bag and ran down the stairs like a bull in a china shop grabbing a piece of toast then making my way to the door. One step closer to being a pokemon trainer.

As i rushed out the door in what i thought was record time, my mum stopped me and asked where I was going in such a rush, I thought to myself thinking (crap, I forgot to tell my mum anything about my journey. But then again, she is able to read me like a book some how? So it shouldn't be a problem for her to figure it out, but just to help her a little...) "I am going to start my journey on the road to be a pokemon trainer, so bye mum and I wont forget to call" I said in a rushing sense. I then slammed the door and ran to the next town.

Once I got to Aquacorde town I met up with some friends since we all decided to start our journeys together. The first one to greet me was Shauna, a young teenager who was around my age who wore nothing but black & pink clothing., the next one was Tierno, a heavy-set boy with black hair that resembles the leaves on Chespin's head. One of his most noticeable qualities is that he has a rather overweight physique. Even so, this hardly seems to impact his desire to be a dancer., the third one was Trevor, His goal is to be the first of us to be able to complete in his pokedex. He is a great student and bursting with the curiosity, but he can admit that he has much to learn about to become as a great Trainer., and finally Serena, She has dark blonde hair with blue-grey eyes and wears a light red hat with white sunglasses. She also wears a black blouse, an orange skirt, black thigh high socks, and black and pink sneakers. She carries around a pink bag with black decals on it.

After we sat down and talked for a while, Tierno opened a briefcase and showed us 3 pokeballs, which he said we could have. So me, Shauna and Serena took our pokemon and brought them out to see who I got. It turned out to be pretty good as I got a Fennekin, the fire type, whilst Serena got Froakie the water type and Shauna got Chespin the grass type. After we received our pokemon Trevor gave us a pokedex each. We then went our separate ways.

since I got extremely lonely in Santalune forest, I summoned Fennekin to walk with me and to get ready more easily to fight pokemon that jump out at me. All of a sudden, a wild Raltz jumped out and quickly hid behind my right leg shaking as if it had seen a ghost, as soon as I noticed this a trainer walked out tossing a pokeball up into the air "Give me that pokemon now, or I will hurt you" he said bluntly.I began to think to myself for a second, (With the expression on his face it is obvious that he did not care about pokemon unless they are strong), Without even looking away, he got a second pokeball and yelled out "Go Combuskin!". After saying this, a combuskin came out and it was angry because it's trainer was. "Use double kick Combuskin!" He shouted and the combuskin obeyed and started running towards us like the wind only getting within a few millimetres away before it suddenly got knocked backwards in to a tree, when I looked around at who could have done it; I looked at the ground to see the Raltz's eyes glowing a bright blue colour which soon faded as The Raltz had passed out.

Without hesitation, I returned Fennekin, picked up the Raltz and ran to the closest pokemon centre to heal it. On my way to Santalune city, which I knew was close, I had to run pass a lot of scary pokemon who looked at me with an angered expression. When I got into the city I ran straight to the poke-centre and asked nurse joy to heal it for me.

After a while of waiting a faint voice spoke into my head, ("Thanks for saving me back there"). I paused for a second, then I heard some doors opening, and as I looked at the white space I saw nurse joy and Chansey walk out with a happy Raltz charging at me, so I picked it up and moved it to my shoulder where it hug my neck and once again I heard the same voice in my head, a little bit clearer than before, saying ("Thanks for saving me").

Sorry for rushing this part of the story, don't know why I did
I will be needing some feedback on how I can improve my story telling.
More chapters will be coming soon!