A/N( 05/11/05): Hi everyone, by now I should have posted up chapter 7. When I read the first three chapters, I realized they sound kind of sueish and that my writing was not that great but I am not going to re-do it so as to chart my improvement as time goes by. I think I have improved when comparing the first chapter to seven but it is only little. So I hope that you would bear with me till then.
Author note: pls forgive me if my writing sounds immature but I'm only ten and I wrote this as a challenge from my sister(this is her account) you see she betted that if I could get atleast ten different reviews she would give me 100 dollars(she's trying to get me into this fanficcy craze). I know I'm writing for selfish reasons but I hope u atleast post me some constructive criticism on how to improve my writing as you see for my essay in school I always am getting borderline grades and I hope to improve through this way. R&R. Tanx.
Disclaimer:What u recognize is not mine and this might be mary-sue(don't worry she's not perfect in almost everyway) mary-sueness is slight.This might also be AU.
I lay in my bed with my eyes threatening to close but I refused to let it take control of me. I will not sleep. Night after night the same dream would haunt me, the events of the incident that happened to me and my friends about a year ago. My parents became worried about me when they heard my screams on countless nights and when dark circles started appearing underneath my eyes. They tried to talk to me but I would not tell them anything. I can still remember everything clearly as though it happened yesterday.
"So what movie do you want to watch" Katie one of my friend asked
"How about Lord Of the Ring: Return Of The King " I Replied
"You already watch that Five times how many more times do you want to see it?" said my other friend Sarobynsa or Robyn by any name which we are comfortable of calling her.
" Just one more time " I pleaded.
"You say the same thing everytime"
"It is already midnight wanna a take the cab"
"Nah, lets walk besides it is only a 20 minutes walk from here"
"I know but I am tired and luckily I can sleep over at your house or else my mom would kill me if I came home this late"
When the girls had reached home (Robyn's house) they changed to their pajamas. Nel who was tired, fell asleep as soon as she hit the bed, whereas the other two decided to stay up and chat. During their little chat they didn't notice that Nel was fading away and would not do so until next morning...