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Business was as usual at Camp Half-Blood. The demigods were exiting their cabins at the sound of the conch, signaling that lunch was about to start. Percy himself was relaxing in the comfort of the Poseidon cabin, full of blue wave patterns and deep sea shells and plants that his half-brother Tyson had gotten him a few years back. He had recently come back from the training arena, hacking up every straw-filled dummy in the stadium, perfecting his swordsmanship and keeping him very well in shape. He had decided to return to the peace of his cabin, take a nice and well-deserved shower, and change into some cleaner clothes.

Now exiting the cabin, he was casually walking towards the dining pavilion when he heard some strange noises coming from the beach. He abruptly turned to see the back of a head with curly blond hair, arms intertwined with another camper. Percy recognized the face as Logan Dest, one of the Ares campers. As strolled closer to the beach, he felt a peculiar bubbling sensation inside of him.

Please don't let it be her. Percy thought.

As he was merely 3 yards away from the couple, he heard the loud moans that attracted his attention earlier. Fear began to build in him with the possibility of what he might see.

"Oh yes, Logan." He heard coming from an awfully familiar femenine voice.

Please, not like this.

As he strafed to the side to get a better look at the girl, Percy felt his heart drop. His eyes widened the size of dinner plates. He could not believe what he saw.

Annabeth, his girlfriend, was passionately kissing Logan. Logan's hair and Annabeth's hair were messy and ruffled.

"Give me some more." moaned Logan as they parted for a split second.

Did she forget everything about us?

"Don't stop Logie." sighed Annabeth. The two continued kissing, eventually bringing tongue action into the make-out session.

Did she forget what I have done for her?

"Wouldn't dream of it babe." whispered Logan.

Did she forget how much I loved her?

Logan's hands started to steadily inch down Annabeth's body. Annabeth moaned at the feeling of his hands exploring her. Percy thought that this had to stop. He couldn't let them do this.

"Excuse me. What. Are. You. DOING?" My voice boomed, louder than I had anticipated, but I couldn't care less at the moment. The sound of my voice caused the two of them to jump, and stumble to their feet. Waves in the ocean behind the couple started forming. What caused me to be even more vexed was to see that Annabeth seemed not to care at all. I couldn't see a trace of remorse on her face, or in her eyes. She didn't care.

"How thick can you be Seaweed Brain?" She spat out. The nickname that he had grown to love coming from her lips was now said as an insult.

"That was your boyfriend Annie? I could probably take him." Logan said. Annabeth despised being called Annie, but she seemed to have a dreamy look on her face as he said "Annie."

Sure you could. I thought to myself. I didn't know what came over me. I never thought about who I could take and who I couldn't. But my anger clouded my thoughts. I wanted to make Logan pay. I wanted him to suffer.

"Annabeth," I said in a low, cold voice, "Why?" I asked her.

"Well, if you couldn't tell, I don't love you anymore." She said in the most conversational tone possible.

"Actually scratch that, I never loved you." She giggled. She gave Logan another peck on the lips and whispered to him.

"Deal with him Logie, I'll meet you at lunch." She sauntered towards the pavilion as the other campers were enjoying lunch.

"Alright, I'll make this quick." He said. I sized him up. He was about an inch shorter than me, with brown eyes and a crooked nose with a smug expression on his face. He wasn't extremely muscular, which was unusual for a son of Ares. He strolled towards me and once he was two feet away, he threw a sloppy punch at me, which I dodged with no effort. He threw another one, I dodged. Then another, dodged again. I decided to take the offensive, I wanted him to feel pain. When he threw his next punch, I grabbed his fist mid-blow. I twisted his arm, causing him to howl in pain, then I forcefully punched him in the left jaw, making his eyes well up with tears. As he slumped to the ground, nose bleeding, cradling his shoulder and massaging his jaw, I forced a wave of water to crash down on him. The saltwater stung his eyes, as he was too slow to react to the wave coming down on him. I felt no remorse; he deserved everything he got, and then some.

"I thought Ares kids were good at fighting." I hissed.

No response came from him, groans of pain escaped his lips, but no words. I stood there for another half-minute before leaving him.

I marched back towards my cabin, as I lay back down on my bed, the anger inside me receded, and I was hit with a wave of emotions. How could she have ditched me? Especially after all the quests we went through. Did she mean it when she said she never loved me? I felt a tear running down my cheek. The weather responded with my emotions. A storm formed above the camp, and without the camp's magical barriers, everyone would have been soaked. I felt waves begin to form in the sea. I knew how much destruction I could cause, but I didn't care. I just wanted the pain to end.

But I don't know if it will.


Whew, first chapter. Please review! I want some feedback! I created this story because Percy Jackson and Harry Potter are among my favorite series, and I had all these ideas floating in my mind as I read Harry Potter. The main one was "What would it be like if Percy was there?" And I would daydream and forget about the book in front of me, just imagining what it would be like. Not sure how far I will continue this, and not even sure what book to start at. I will most likely keep editing chapters I have already posted, so I would appreciate it if you beautiful people would go back and provide me with some feedback and constructive criticism. Might have to change a few canon things to make it match the way I want it to. I am well aware of the somewhat confusing third person and first person transitions, but I don't know what perspective to make this story in. This first chapter was more or less an experiment. I wanted to see my writing style and what I was happy with. Once again, please review!