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Dark side of the Moon
Ace assed the situation. Slam was down and the villain in between him and the other Loonatics, Tech was nowhere to be seen. Lexi, Duck and he were narrowly dodging lasers coming from Ultrons' finger tips. Rev was making the villain annoyed by making sure none of the lasers even came near him.
Rev: dodging lasers Ahh-come-on-you-can-do-better-than-that. Dodges again. Missed-again. nope-not-anywhere-near.
Lexi: Ya know this guy ain't the best at shooting.
Duck: Tell that to my tail. As Duck turned around, Lexi and Ace saw his tail feathers have been singed.
Ultrons gave up chasing Rev and looked at Ace
Ultrons: Oy! Rabbit, I hear you're pretty handy with a sword. Care to try against an expert? He produced a sword from his belt.
Ace: That's Bunny doc, and you're on! He ran over while getting the G.S.S out.
Lexi: Ace, Tech will be done soon, I think you should… Ace is not listening and Lexi sighs.
Duck: Tut, tut a good leader would have listened to his team mate's idea, just like I would. Lexi gave him an evil stare. Um never mind.
Ace starts fighting Ultons. They are both accomplished swordsmen and nether makes much ground. Both opponents double their effort. Ace, using his marshal arts combined with his skills with the G.S.S starts to make some ground.
Tech speaks to Ace though the communicator.
Tech: Ok chief, the neutralizing gun is ready, but I'll need help to move and charge it.
Ace: Lexi! Rev! Go help Tech. Duck, now's your chance to get to Slam without Ultrons firing lasers everywhere.
Lexi, Rev and Duck: Right
AS Lexi and Rev run off to help Tech, Duck gets to Slam and quacks them both out of there.
Ultrons: You fight well. - For a good guy. Ever think of doing something useful with your skill? Like stealing?
Ace: Thanks Doc, he glances up. But I'm on the winning side!
Ace knocks Ultrons down and jumps out of the way as Tech, Lexi and Rev use a gun on the roof of a building, firing it at Ultrons.
Tech: That's for ruining my jet pack.
In a dark room far away for the chaos, this is being watched on a screen. The solute of a man begins to speak.
Man: He is the best.
The woman behind him steps forward
Woman: He will be hard to regain.
Man: We just need to threaten to destroy something he holds dear to him. Then he'll be back in our hands.
The man freezes the picture on a smiling Ace.
Man: Your mine Ace Bunny.
End of Chapter 1
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