Lonewolf2003: Hi I'm a new writer on fanfiction.net, before I officially start writing my very first fic, I would like to know your opinion on my plot first. If I should continue writing it or not. Here's a brief summary for it.
Ok, everything in this fic happens after G-Revolution. I haven't watched the season yet, so the stuff in it might not connect to it. I'm going to add in a made-up character of mine name Mayo Tate/Mizuhara(oc), and is Max's twin sister. I'm planning to make this a long fic with different adventures and beybattling. Along the way there will be made-up teams and characters. Plus an all girl's team call um, I'm still thinking about the team name, but it'll soon be review if you guys want me to continue writing it.
This fic is mostly about the new girl and a villain name Wanda and her mad scientist Dr. W(Wannabe) who wants every single bit-beasts in the world, and she sends her team The Blade Hunters after them, and Mayo and her team and all the other teams that is in the show will try to stop them and a whole lot of stuff will happen.
Here are the character that will be in this fic: Blade Breakers(Tyson, Dandy/Daichi, Shippu no Jing/Zin*but I'll just call him Zin, since his dubbed name haven't been confirmed yet.*) All Stars(Max, Micheal, Eddy, Steve), White Tigers(Ray, Lee, Gary, Kevin), Demolition Boys(Tala, Kai, Spencer, Bryan, Ivan), the all girls team that has no name yet???(Mayo, Hilary*she blades in this fic*, Emily*yep she left the all stars and joins this team*, Mariah*and same goes for her*
For anyone who's interested in reading the rest of this fic, please review. I'll start writing it as soon as I get 5 or more reviews thank you. ^^