Sanctuary
Authors note: ive decided to do a rewrite.please tell me what you think of it by review or personal message.
Disclaimer: I don't own naruto
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In konoha a twelve year old blond boy laid on the ground looking at the sky.
"I cant loose anyone else" he said as a single tear fell down his cheek.
Flashback
on a fogged bridge in wave country
"Kill me naruto please kill me" a feminine black haired person about 16 years old said to him
"I cant Haku" the blond boy now identified as naruto said
"It is the shinobi way please do it, for me" haku said tears coming down his eyes as naruto reluctantly charged after him "I love you" hake uttered under his breath as the kunai plunged into his chest.
Then it dawn on naruto "what did he say?, did he just say that he loved me.
"You…l-love…me"naruto said confused.
"Yes (cough) I (cough) do" haku respond with his last breath he drew naruto in giving him a passionate kiss before his body went lifeless.
"haku loved me and…and…I killed him" naruto said falling to his knees tears falling down his face as he grasped his head his eyes becoming soulless and dull his voice escaped weekly almost void of emotion as his hand fell to his side "why?" suddenly a fire encircled him "why!!!!!!!" the fire erupted from embers do a roaring blaze evaporating the mist.
Kakashi and zabuza both feeling the immense heat and chakra froze and stared in the direction of the flames "sanctuary the fire of Levi"kakashi uttered in disbelief
"Like some stupid kanton jutsu will scare me I will have my revenge, the boy destroyed my tool" zabuza of the mist bellowed as he broke his fight with kakashi and attacked naruto with his neck cleaver as he was about to strike the fire encircling naruto twisted around zabuza's sword incinerating him leaving ash.
"I'm sorry haku I'm truly sorry"naruto whispered sounding truly broken as he knelt the fire gone sobbing once a happy boy now a shattered mess.
"Omg!" sakura exclaimed as she shot towards naruto's direction. A Slight glimmer of hope came upon naruto's face but it was quickly crushed as she sped past him to hold sasuke who seemed to be dead she held on to sasuke's almost lifeless body crying.
"Sakura he isn't dead"kakashi said as he walked up to her bends down and plucks the needle out of Sasuke's neck he wakes up.
"Where is the dobe?"Sasuke asked weakly
"Sasuke thank god you are alright"sakura responded sending a look of disgust to naruto "no thanks to you"
Still kneeling naruto raises his head and looks directly at sakura cold dead blues eyes gazing at her even though he has the foxy grin on his face the sadness seemed to have fractures his mind.
"You did nothing either; Kakashi had to defend u and Tazuna further more u should not speak its annoying sakura-san" his voice although sounding happy was laced with killer intent and malice what scared sakura even more
As the fog on the other side of the bridge dissipates a short man with a cast on his arm appears in view. Behind him a small army of thugs "gato has arrived" one of the thugs announce "cant weight to get paid" another exclaimed
"I'm glad u got rid of them for me kid missing Nin aren't cheap ill have to kill you guys because I have to tie loose ends" as gato walk up to haku's corpse readying his foot to kick haku "damned bitch broke my arm I sw….. (kkgh)" he was cut shorts when naruto flickered in front of him and slashes his thought a slow painful bloody death insued. Shocking sakura, sasuke and kakashi.
The smile fell instantly off of naruto s face "because of u I lost my innocence today" he said to gato's convulsing bleeding body "goodbye and have a nice day".
Looking up his smile returned to his face the as he sent waves of killer intent to the thugs "leave please" he said hearing this thugs ran for their lives.
when the thugs fled and kakashi transported everyone else to find help naruto collapsed onto his hands and knees crying over haku's body feeling as if a piece of his soul had left him.it began to rain.the cold drops falling on his skin the beating as the rain hit his body,he felt none of it only deep sorrow and hate for himself for killing the only person that had told him i love you.
"i have no-one"e wept.
he instantly found himself in a chamber looking up he sees a 250 foot tall fox. A claw shot out at him as the fox screamed in a inhuman voice "die whelp".
"thank u" naruto said look up tears flowing down his face "I will get to meet haku again"he thought
then the claw stopped right infront of him "why… why did u stop"naruto said almost pleading "cant you see I want to die there is nothing in the world for me."
The giant fox disappear in its place a beautiful figure stood in its place in the cage shadows covering many distinguishing features
With its hand out of the cage in a beckoning motion.
"Come here child" it said in a beautiful voice naruto could not resist it he had to walk towards the hand its voice was just hypnotizing
"No one this kind should want to die" it said as he felt it embrace him as its body tilt out of the shadows he took a closer look a red haired Japanese girl with slit eyes of the same color about twelve years old with the number 9 tattooed on her cheek. She began to kiss his neck.
"Let me comfort u" she begged as she continued"i have watched from this seal all the pain you have endured,having been beaten by the villagers ,i wanted to help you i wanted to hold you in my arms and tell u that everything will be okay.to believe that humans think they are better than my kind but to beat a child to near death constantly that is too low for anything even youkai"
"the ...seal... you're the kyuubi the one that has caused me all my pain" he said, the sadness deepening "kami hates me" he said this in a serious manner
"it does not matter who i am it is my feeling for u, I want to give you a gift I will give you comfort"she said about to kiss him again .
"Please stop" he said to her she wouldnt listen he pushed her off and backed away slight"please stop i can't do this"
"im sorry,i hope ucan forgive not just for now but for all i have done"she asked her eyes down cast "i still want to give you something though"
"what?" he asked.
"Naruto consider this my proposal to you"she said as she pulled him into her cell and places her fand on the side of his neck chakra oozed off of it and it started to burn his neck naruto jump back
"what did u do?"he demanded to know
"you will know soon enough" in a blink of an he was in a hospital room getting up looking at the mirrors he saw a tatoo of the number nine on hi neck.
"proposal" he muttered to the layer of polished glass not taking his eyes off of that spot on his neck
End flashback
Naruto got up from the field and walk to his apartment as he passed shops and home he felt the death glares sent at him the had intensified in the last week when they heard that he endangered the uchiha on his last mission. they had also heard the sasuke defend the team with sakura by his side while he coward in the corner.
Who would benefit from telling these lies. Stoic he walked to his apartment to see sakura standing with some villagers all holding weapons and their faces dripping with hate and malice looking straight at naruto.
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Till next chapter
sancrid:yup this is naruhaku open to suggestion haku stays a boy and he will be ressurected im open to bi harem tell me the names of the members if you wish.
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