Hey there! Thank you for spending time reading my story. Now, before you actually start reading the story, I would like you to read the following points:
1) This is my first TMNT story
2) English is not my natal language, therefore, the probability of mistake is pretty high
3) I have limited knowledge of how New York highschool works... Or anything in New York works for that matter...
4) I don't have a great vocabulary and I'm really bad with description but hopefully you'll get the idea...
5) I don't think I did a great job with the personality of the characters so it could be a little AU, but I did try my best... On second thought, the story is very AU
6) Updates will be slow since I still go to school T.T
7) All shipping are as the show and if there is any mention of OC, I reassure you that they either are only the bad guys or are 6 feet underground
8) I L-O-V-E the middles brothers (sorry Mikey and Leo fans, story may be a little centric on them), especially Donnie, but I tried my best in including everyone.
9) I would ask you to take notice of my name, CreepInsane. I'd like to inform anyone still reading this that I'm name this way because I love torturing my favorites (yeah, I'm sadist, so what? I bet I'm not the only one here ;p)
And Finally,
10) Reviewing gives motivation and helps improving. So I'm telling this only once; Do NOT hesitate to tell me what you think, or how else am I suppose to improve? Also, ask for any misunderstanding. Any ideas are welcome and finally, you can just compliment me if you've got nothing to say ' (In short, please review! TwT)
WARNING: Mention of violence, drugs and cursing.
Disclaimer: I don't own TMNT and be grateful for it or I would have ruin the show years ago
Without further ado, I present you the first chapter of ,what I'm obviously lying about, the greatest story ever!
Readers: Finally!
Chap 1: (I'm really bad with titles '--)
Sky gazing had always been one of Karai's favorite pass time, and one she shared with her two younger brothers. It just had that calming effect that could make all of the little worries of life fly away.
However, no matter how much she would stare at the sky, even with it's actually magnificent sunrise sight, it was not enough to chase her worries. But that was really no surprise after what had happened tonight. To put it simple, crazy couldn't even begin to describe how the night went.
Karai released a tired sigh, tightening her grip on her knees, and in the process, pulling them closer. She then leaned against the large window frame, seeing her own reflection on the transparent glass.
Light brown eyes stare right back at themself. Having just come out of a warm shower, her usual make up was gone and her black and blond hair usually held backwards was damp and reached just an inch above her shoulders. She was dressed in a white tank top and black baggy pants. She had a few bandage here and there due to the night's events, but nothing serious.
"Ow! Owowow!"
Karai was pulled out of her thoughts by the pain cries of her youngest brother, Donnatello, or Donnie for short.
Taking her eyes of the magnificent multicoloured sky, she glanced over at her adoptive brothers.
Raphael, or Raph as he prefer being called, was seated infront of his younger twin, attending to Don's injuries.
Raph was a very well built but rather short teenager. He had red spiky hair held upwards with the help of a red scarf he ties on his forhead. He had vibrant emerald green eyes and was shirtless, showing of the 5 inch lightning shape scar, crossing his collarbone. Alike to Karai, he had a few bandages here and there and black pants.
Donnie one the other hand was a slevelt and tall teenager. He had mid-neck length, light brown hair and reddish brown eyes that appears a glowing red under dim lights. He was shirtless as well, but unlike his older siblings, his whole chest was covered in bandage just like his upper left arm. He had on light blue pants and the purple scarf he never separates from lay on his lap.
"Stop jerkin' around, would ya?!" Raph gruff voice snapped Karai from her thoughts.
"I wouldn't be if you let me do it myself!" Donnie argued before he let out a soft cry of pain as the anticeptics made contact with his bruised skin
"Fat chance of that happenin'" Raph stated, tilting the younger's head in order to get a better look at the blackened eye.
Karai chuckled lightly at his brothers' antics. They always argue about every single thing, both trying to get their point through each other's heads.
"Raph, I can do it myself." Donnie tried battling the larger hand away, but it stayed firmly in place on his chin
"So?" Raph asked deadpan, earning a roll of eyes from his younger twin.
Having live with those two for almost five years now, Karai knew they could argue for hours. Unless, she does something about it. Smiling to herself, she walked over the two, catching both their attention.
"Don, we both know you're arguing for nothing." Karai started earning a glare from the youngest of the three.
"So just let mommy bear Raphie take care of you" She teased. While Raph's smirk turned into a scowl, Donnie's frowned went upside down.
"Hehe- Ow!" Donnie's chuckle was cut shory by a jolt of pain from his chest. His hand shot up to grasp the painful area and hopefully, the pain would go away, But he was stopped by his twin's hand.
"Ya okay?" Raph asked concerned replacing his previous anger. To hell with it if he looked like a 'mommy bear' as Karai affectionately put it. His younger brother was in pain!
"Y- Yeah, I'm fine" Don responded barely above a whisper, finally making eye contact with Raph. His older twin, however, didn't look convince so he forced out a smile
"Really" Again his voice was barely above a whisper
"Ya don't sound fine ta meh" Raph said crossing his arms and glaring at the younger one
"It's just an after effect, I'll be fine" Donnie insisted.
While Raph and Donnie was arguing, again. Karai's light brown eyes traced to her youngest brother bandaged chest, remember the night
*Flashback)
"That's the place" Karai stated, pointing at an old and abandoned- looking garage in Chinatown.
"Then what are we waiting for?" Raph asked to no one in particular. Never one to wait around, Raph passed his sister before jumping down from their current roof tops.
"Wait Raph..." Karai started but Raph was already gone.
Sighing, Karai turned to her remaining brother. Her eyes said it all, 'Can't he ever wait?'. Don in response only shrugged his shoulder before following his twin's tracks. Karai sighed again before following her youngest brother on the emergency staircase.
The little family of four had just moved in New York City close to a month ago from now
"Knock twice, then once, then twice again and finally four times" Karai stated, seeing Raph trying to kick open huge heavy metals door.
It was their first night of work here.
The door was pushed opened by a huge muscle guy, with raven hair and a dragon tattoo all over his arms. He was wearing the regular Purple Dragon's outfit.
The 3 teenager followed the huge man wordlessly inside. They were leaded inside where Hun, the Purple Dragon Leader, sat on a wooden chair, cross leg and arms. In front of him was a simple table and an empty chair.
They had to be careful, this place was new to them and any mistake could lead to dreadful consequences.
Donnatello sat on the opposite chair, with Raph and Karai standing beside him, thier back facing him. The three were careful to cover their eyes with thier hood. It was a simple trick, don't allow your enemy know where you are looking and they'll be less likely to pull on something.
"So, you have what I requested?" Hun asked getting right down to business.
"It depends. Do YA have dah money?" Raph asked but Hun was clueless about who was the one speaking. They all had on metal mask and none had moved.
"Of course! Who do you take me for?" Hun snapped his fingers and some other Purple Dragon member came carrying a suitcase. He handed it to their leader who opened it before sliding it over to the trio teens.
Donnie didn't even glace at the suitcase. He didn't need to, Karai was the one in charged of the money. He was in charged of the illegal product.
It's not like they weren't expecting a fight
Donnie took out 6 bricks of Heroin from the bag strapped over his shoulder and pushed them towards Hun.
"That stuff is good!" The Purple Dragon leader exclaimed after testing the drug. The teen stood up and was about to go, but a blade at each of their neck made them stop.
They were trained and ready for battle
"Why hurry? We have a lot of time to spend together" Hun smirked, taking a small dragger before walking over to them.
"If you value your lifes, you'll return me the money and give us more of the drug" He threatened, pointing the weapon just under Donnatello's jaw. Typical of low life bandits
Battle with bandits, thieves, etc...
"If I were you, I wouldn't do it" Raph grinned and even if it was concealed behind the mask, his siblings knew he was.
The three jumped out of enemies lines the way only a highly trained ninja could do and took off thier weapons; a pair of sai, a bo and a small sword, they got into battle.
They had fought them before
During the battle, Donnatello got slashed acrossed the left arm and judging by the bleeding, it was pretty bad.
They couldn't afford wasting time here anymore. One of them was hurt! They tried making a run for the front doors but other purple dragons was blocking them!
Just as the Purple Dragons and ninjas were about to fight, a huge explosion burst the front door.
But never those!
As the smoke dissipated, they could see strange identical men entering, laser guns in hands as they shoot everywhere.
Those
The intrusion didn't change the minds of the bandits that wanted their money back from the three teenagers who had to battle while getting out of the lasers way too.
Weird
However, the strange men weren't interested in them, but in two other teens that just entered the building.
identical
The taller one and also user of twin katanas, had raven hair and ocean blue eyes. Any other features was hidden behind a mask. He wad dress in a sleeveless black jumpsuit, half opened, revealing a emerald green shirt underneath. He had on a blue headband on his forhead.
The second and shorter one was a user of nun - chucks. He had baby blue eyes and curly blond hair. He was dressed the same as the raven head, only his shirt was a light green and instead of a headband, he had tied an orange piece of clothing on his right arm.
humans
The two teens were fighting the identical men with skills that the trio recognised as ninja skills
Were in reality
Suddenly, the raven ninja sliced the weird man's head off
Some kind of robots
There was no cries of pain, no blood, no nothing. The man was glitching, producing small electrical sparks before falling on the ground not moving.
Donnatello paused to stare at the fallen object. The neck was a blue and magenta colour inside. Donnie swore he could even see a few circuits.
Those peoples were robots!
Controled by a brain alien thingy in their stomach!
The realisation had hit him hard and he couldn't help but be intrigued by the robots.
As he approached the electric object, clearly intending to examine it, he was startled by a pink tentacle shooting out of the robot's stomach.
That was not the end of his surprise when more tentacle followed, ripping the black suit to give way for a brain thing.
Donnie stayed frozen on place as the creature turned towards him. It had a pair of eyes and a mouth!
The brain looking ceature shrieked, snapping Don of his temporary freeze only to yelped, tripped over his own two feet before falling hard on his butt. The brainy creature started rushing towards the light brunette, causing the other to yelp again. As the creature got closer, Don did the first thing that came in his mind.
Taking hold of his bo, he swung it at the creature, causing it to fly and crash on a nearby wall with a squishy sound. Don stood up and watched the brainy alien run away once it landed on the floor, all the while squealing.
"Donnie! Watch out!" Raph warned, running towards him. His green eyes widen as he watched it all happen in slow motion.
Donnie turned in time to see the laser hit him square in the chest. Raph could only watch his brother fall backwards. Raph was at his brother's side in an instant. He had already deal with the attacker. The machine had a sai through his robot skull as gratitude for what it's done.
"Donnie! Donnie, come on! Don't take a nap now!" Raph tried desperately, shaking him.
Karai, had been fighting when she heard hes younger brother's warning, but didn't pay much attention since she knew Raph had it all in control. But when she glanced at the two, she was surprised to see Don laying unmoving with Raph vainly shaking him. However, since her brothers were busy, they were in different to the battle and that could have cost them their lives.
Another robot man was pointing at them to shoot and unfortunately Karai was too far to exterminate the threat before it made any damage. So she did the only thing she could to protect her siblings even if the consequences would be great.
She threw the suit case to block the laser shot, which accomplished it task perfectly. But the shoor had caused the suit case to open and spill it's content everywhere. But Karai had more pressing matters at hand.
"Raph! Grab him and we're out!" Karai yelled over her shoulder while stabing a robot man.
Her brother nodded before charging the unconscious one on his back. They then made a break for it. The Purple Dragons were more busy collecting the money and fighting the robots that it gave them a trouble free escape chance.
* End of flashback)
Karai sighed at the memory. Donnatello had not woken up until 30 minutes ago. To say that the two older siblings had been worried would be an understatement and that would be because of two things.
1- They had no idea how powerful or deadly the laser gun had been since Don had sustained a second degree burn with his armor on.
And 2- Donnatello was weaker than an average person. Any injuries he recieved would be more severe than for an average person. Recovery would obviously take longer too.
Of course, most people would be indifferent to it since they were illegal dealers of drugs and weaponry. But it wasn't like they were doing it voluntarily. ..
To be honest, there father, Oruku Saki, and underground name, The Shredder, was link to every criminal association, form drugs to human experiments, you name it. He is in everything!
In fact, they were quite lucky they were his children as they dealed only with drugs ans weaponry. But that's just because Donnatello, the genius he is, can make the drugs and weapons. Karai will eternally be grateful to be blessed with his two adoptive siblings, or things could have turned really ugly pretty quickly for her.
But none of it matters right now, what matters was the consequences they had to faced for losing the money, go to their morning practice and getting ready for school.
* The end)
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To Mikey's and Leo's fan, Great news! Next chapter will be more focus on them. Just be a little... no scratch that, a lot patient. Heh... I've got school stuff to do
PS: I have no idea how much drugs cost but if you to, you can always tell.
PPS: If you didn't understand the description about the guys, please refer to the book cover... when I finish it and put it that is...