Okay guys well I wrote the first chapter of this on Quizilla and no one seemed to enjoy it so I thought I'd write it here and see if you guys enjoy it more! Constructive Criticism is welcome, FLAMES on the other hand are NOT. There is a difference!

He didn't know why he had gone out that night. He didn't know why he walked the way he did. He just did it. He did know that if he didn't, he would never have met her. She would probably not be here now if he hadn't...
Donatello wiped the beads of sweat from his bro with his dirty green hands then continued on his newest "toy". He had been holding himself in his room for the past couple weeks worrying both his brothers and his father. Sure he was building more to support the team but it wasn't healthy. Nobody knew what was going on in Donatello's over worked mind except him. He was thinking about how he had nothing in common with his brothers. He wished he had someone of his intellect to share a conversation with. He wanted an intelligent conversation with something other then training fighting and the shredder in it.

He wanted to have a conversation about literature, technology, something of importance in the world. He also thought about how he would never find a person for that to share his pent up intellect with. This caused him to get self conscious and depressed which caused his constant tinkering. Donatello being the turtle that actually took his feelings into mind, had not outlet for emotion. All his brothers had an outlet for their feelings. Leonardo meditated and trained for hours on end, Raph continually pulverized that old punching bag of his, and Mikey, well he had his video games and comic books. Sure he had tinkering but that didn't help as much as one would think.

The distracted young turtle pulled the tinkering goggles of his face and sighed. He had to get out of here somehow. He didn't know why but he had to leave. He leisurely grabbed his Bo staff and put it on his shell. He walked out of his room earning stares from his brothers.
"What's going on Donnie?" He heard from his oldest brother Leonardo.

Donatello shrugged and looked at him giving him a curt reply.
"I'm going out."
it was too late for humans to be out so he didn't bother taking the trench coat and hat he was supposed to take.
"Forgetting something Donnie?" He looked to Leo and shook his head
"Everyone is inside by now Leo I'll be fine without them." Donnie walked out of the lair and crossed the labyrinth like sewer system.

He lifted the manhole cover and crawled out cautiously. He saw no one and so just began to walk up a fire escape. He jumped from roof to roof, he didn't know where he was going; just that he had to go there. As Donnie was about to jump another roof something drew him to this place. The roof over looked a smaller building and in the window Donatello saw a slender silhouette. He stopped and stared for a while at the shadow behind the curtain. It was definitely a girl.

She was dancing to music that Donatello couldn't hear. She was graceful and it was as if her movements were hypnotizing him. He couldn't take his eyes away from her. Even if he couldn't hear the music it was like she was the music. When Donatello saw this figure he imagined a gorgeous girl. He wondered about her. He wondered if she liked to read, if she liked technology, if she was as genius as her dance.

Donatello's thoughts were interrupted by and closing door and a key jingle. He looked back at the building to see two women. One of them had brown hair and eyes. She was captivating her eyes even if they were an average color shone like the night stars.
"I'll see you tomorrow Juliet. You did a nice job today." The brown haired girl smiled to the other women who Donatello didn't quite notice at all.
"Thanks Marcie, I'm hoping to get into that dance school this year." The women named Marcie smiled back at Juliet. The name was like Music to Donatello's ears. He swore that his green cheeks turned a shade of red. Juliet began to walk away and Donatello followed. He didn't know what came over him but he just had to follow her. He was thinking about how he seemed like a stalker and stopped only for a second.

As he looked back up he heard a scream. He saw Juliet surrounded by purple dragons and quickly went to her rescue.
"Go away you creeps I don't have any money!" The Dragons closed in on her
"Come on cough it up girly, or we'll have to get something else from you." Juliet rolled her eyes in disgust as the man who spoke licked his lips. As soon as they had got to close Juliet closed her eyes only to hear a struggle. She opened her brown eyes to see the gangsters in a fight with what looked like a giant turtle.

As soon as the Purple dragons were all out Juliet's savior began to jump away.
"Wait!"
Juliet only yelled in vain for her hero. Donatello jumped away in anger. He would be in so much trouble with Master Splinter for getting seen by a human.

Juliet lay on her bed holding her favorite Monkey pillow and in her favorite PJ's. She wondered about the guy that saved her, or creature. It looked like a giant turtle but it couldn't be possible. It was really late she must have been too tired to see who saved her. Even so she couldn't help but believe what she saw. She turned onto her stomach and closed her eyes for a small while but she couldn't fall asleep. She lie there thinking until her clock read 3:33 PM.

She tossed and turned all night and felt another restless night come to an end. She got up to brush her silky brown hair and put on a small purple beanie. She got new clothes ready and headed to her bathroom. Her head was full of racing thoughts about everything school, her dancing, her savior from last night, her ice skating. It was almost like she had nothing I control. Ever since a couple weeks ago she has had trouble sleeping and nothing was helping. Not even her favorite pastimes helped and now with this mystery guy, she was feeling like she would never sleep again.

As she walked out of the bathroom in her skinny jeans t-shirt and purple beanie she sighed and picked up her backpack and gym bag, as well as her latest book Pride and Prejudice. With little time left, she walked downstairs and out the door. She waited those few second for the Bus and then sat in the back single seat as always, then opening her book and began to read where she left off. Yes she was an over achiever and yes she was talented, but that's what got her into the whole loner situation. Where ever she went people always thought she was too talented. It was almost like she was out to make everyone else look bad. Teachers loved her, Adults always counted on her, and everyone had a high expectation of her.

This would mean that she was an outcast. She never had anyone to talk to and it was almost like she was invisible. She would always have her family and he favorite things, but she felt like friends were always out of reach. She really wished that she had at least one friend. Someone to talk to and someone who would understand what she felt like. She knew that the person she wished for was out of reach and would never be found, so she gave up.

Donnie had gotten home late after procrastinating on getting home in order to create some kind of excuse as to why he was late. He could always leave out the seen by a human part, but Donnie wasn't a liar. He couldn't look Master Splinter in the eyes and lie. So when he got home he avoided his brothers and his Sensei all together. He had lie in bed all night letting his worry slip away to remember her, Juliet. She smelled sweet like sugar, with a hint of cherry blossoms. She was beautiful, the sound of her voice was like sweet music greater then Beethoven, or Bach, or even Mozart.

To Donatello she was the embodiment of perfection, and he just had to see her again, somehow. He heard the morning rush of Mikey playing keep away with Raph's cereal and knew to keep from the kitchen for now. He thought about continuing the upgrades on the Shell Cell's but he knew he wouldn't be able to concentrate. His thoughts were clouded today, clouded by her, Juliet. As soon as he heard the noise die down he walked out of his room and to the kitchen to get himself some breakfast. Although it had gone silent his family hadn't left the kitchen which made Donatello start to sweat. He felt the eyes of his brothers and his father stare into his shell.

"Donatello, what caused you to be so late last night my son?" He cursed the false feelings of safety he had.

"Um...I was just walking around and some Purple Dragons were causing trouble so I stopped them and came home. I just lost track of time sensei it won't happen again." His voice had cracked a bit and he knew that Master Splinter felt him hiding some of the story. His father said nothing more so he felt relief for now. He sat and ate his breakfast and as soon as his father left he heard Leo's stern voice that was usually used for Raph and Mikey, it was seldom used toward him.

"So what else happened Donnie? I expect this stuff from Mike and Raph but you? Lying isn't your thing." Donnie just looked down and continued eating and responded

"That's all that happened." Leo looked at him sternly and this began to intrigue his other brothers. He heard Mikey's childish voice.

"Come on Donnie Master Splinter is gone, you can tell us."

They all seemed to be staring at him expecting something. His nerves were starting to go and he felt himself at the edge of breaking. Then his nerves got the best of him as he looked up at his brothers.

"I got seen by a human ok?! There you happy now?" His brothers all looked at him in shock and Leonardo was about to bring the hammer down when Don put up his hand. "Wait! Before you say anything, she was in trouble and I had to save her! The Purple Dragons were surrounding her and she needed help.

"It was in the open and she was they were the only ones there I promise!" Leonardo sighed and then shook his head and started to walk away.

"You have to be more careful Donatello, now all of you lets go, it's time for training." The brothers all followed the eldest into the sewers and out into the shadows of the streets. As they passed the street from last night Don's eyes lingered on the spot where he had first seen her or her silhouette rather. He then came back to reality as he followed his brothers in the shadows. He had been doing well in their stealth training until he heard a most beautiful and familiar sound.

He stopped as did Raphael to see if his brother was alright. Don sighed as he saw her, his heart was beating fast. She was sitting on a stone ledge by herself reading a book a smile on her face. Her melodious voice came from her small frame.

"This book is just getting good, love is going to triumph I know it! It is a book after all." He smiled un-knowing of his brother's grinning face next to him. His brother whispered softly.

"So what's her name?" Donnie answered him dreamily.

"Juliet." He then did a double take and jumped as he saw his brother. "Uh Raph! I just um, dropped something!" Raphael laughed quietly and pulled his brother.

"You are such a bad liar, now let's go Romeo."

Donatello stopped his brother and sighed.

"Wait, just a bit longer, I might never see her again." He saw her look up and around. Which alerted him and he jumped away following his brother. Donatello sighed sadly as he looked ahead with a lost feel in his brown eyes.

"Did someone say my name? Things are just getting weirder by the day; let's count it all shall we? First there was the whole locker mix up, then the being stuffed into a locker, being saved by a mysterious guy that seemed to be a giant turtle, now people in the shadows saying my name. Boy is my life eventful, giant turtles, it's not possible I was tired; I gotta stop talking to myself. Maybe I should buy a puppy, that way I won't look like a weirdo." She turned back to her book and by this time the two brothers had left. Juliet was interrupted from her reading as she heard her mother's voice calling her from the car.

She jumped off the ledge and got into the car and looked out the window at all the buildings passing by. The weird stuff that had been happened to her was starting to make her think about last night. She wanted to know who that guy was; most of all she wanted to thank him and verify that he indeed was human. She wanted more then anything to know she wasn't crazy. Only by meeting her hero again would she find out.