Disclaimer: Don't own them.
Title: Pain
Summary: Only your important person can alleviate your pain. Sasu+Naru Not Yaoi, More Brotherly, Kinda Implied, but Not Really, Yaoi-phobe Safe
Warnings: Cussing
Couple: None
Written By: Shino
Inspired By: . . . . . Wanted to writ sumpin' in first person and this popped inta mah head. see my muses still luft me . . . at lest /some/ of them do
Noise- is, well, a noise in the story.
Lyrics (centered) – people in story are listening/can hear it.
Lyrics (centered) - put in fer moi amusement. (AKA they can't hear it)
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Pain
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The Pain
It is still There
Tugging
Pulling
Throbbing
In His Chest
Trying to Break Free
The Pain
It Hurts so Much
But He just Smiles
Yells
Flails
The Pain Grows
He acts like People Expect of Him
The Pain Growing Worse
With Every Fake Smile
Every Fake Laugh
Every Fake Pout
Everything is Fake
Nothing is Real
This Knowledge Twists in His Gut
The Pain
Grows
He Turns to The One who Lessens The Pain
The One looks Back
He Sticks out his Tongue
Cries Profanities
A Blank Expression meets Him
So He turns Away
His Eyes Still Trained on The One
The One's Lips Tweak in a Small Smile
The Pain
Lessens
His Fake Grin Broadens into a Real Grin
Everything is Real
His Grin becomes Wider
He Turns to See The One
Walking Away
The Pain
Worsens
But
The One Turns Around and Reaches His Hand Out
The One Flicks His Wrist Lazily
Saying through The Motion 'Come on, Usuratonkachi, you /do/ want ramen right?'
He is Sure His Grin is Splitting His Face
He Hurries to Catch up
They Walk
Side by Side
Arms Brushing
The Pain
Is Gone
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Kinda has an Angsty undertone but wut-eva
Kinda proud of this
And yes, I /do/ realize that this is written funny in one sentence things and lots of capitals
It's on PURPOSE
Trying a new style for these kinds of dabbles
Starting another about Fate (Neji, durh) No couple –so far- just is a rant-type-thing . . . Yesh . . . It's not exactly in this format but has the same one sentence thing –Geez first grader much-
. . . Dude . . . Went back and Checked the Grade Level of this and . . . It's the highest I've ever gotten . . . 8.7. . . Dude. I didn't even get that high on my Essay . . . Wh00t! (That is of course if your get rid of the side notes at the top and the bottom)
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